(Ratings just came out)
[Two male protagonists + group portraits + HE + no accidents will be updated + slightly sour]
[Brother with black hands and short guard vs younger brother with crazy dog and careful mind]
Train+Teach+Protect
Crazy+Fear+Love
Shen Quanchu Shen Siming Shen Yunxiao Shen Sibao
Qi Wanting Jiang Jiu Zhang Yuqing
Xie Yanqin
Qin Enning Chen Ting
Reader comments
Shen SiminGⅹShen YunxiaoS
⦁Emotional stage: mutual recognition→dependence, fear→attachment.
⦁The whole process is fun and intensive! ! ! The rhythm is tight! ! ! (Happy, happy, I should be leisurely in the rivers and lakes~~)
⦁The emotional line rises quickly, which is very suitable for babies who don't like too many plots and complicated content, but prefer to go straight to that stage alone.
There is another point, which is also very important. The author has taken good care of his readers. From the time he opened the book to the present, he has produced a lot of books every day. He is so quick that he can eat as soon as he opens his eyes every day (hahahaha). We also attach great importance to the suggestions of readers, and then improve and add some plots that everyone has called for. I also read the paragraphs and commentaries of each chapter carefully, and my heart felt warm after catching up. If you follow this book, you won't lose money by investing in it.
(I have read a lot of books, and this is my first time writing a book review. I am not very skilled at it. I will try more in the future, but what old foodies can tell you is that this wave can be rushed directly (｡ì v í｡)
I hope you are happy every day
Very nice article, it's rare that there is no nonsense and you can start smoking immediately haha
There are many small theaters with sub-CPs, but this one is still rare and the sub-CPs are also good to read. But I still like the main CP the most, and the author updates quite a lot every day. I have a guaranteed meal and it is good to read.
....... There are too many entanglements with the supporting characters, and I seem to be in a completely weak position facing Xie Yanqin...
The writing of the whole book is smooth and neat, breaking away from the routine assembly line plot, and the reading experience is far superior to similar online books. The author controls the rhythm of the story just right, and cuts to the main line quickly at the beginning, without lengthy and useless foreshadowing. The daily foreshadowing is reasonably interspersed with the key plot points, and the happy and tearful moments are arranged naturally, without the common problem of filling in water to make up for the word count.
Character creation is the biggest highlight of this book. The protagonist's personality is complete and three-dimensional, his growth trajectory is step-by-step, and his actions are logically consistent with his own experience. There are no violations such as forced cheating and brainless virgins. The supporting characters also get rid of the label of tool people. Everyone has their own story and stance. The division between good and evil is not rigid. The motivations of the villains are well-founded. The conflicts are real and full. The various characters promote each other's plot, making the world view vivid and full.
The setting of the story is novel and ingenious, the core world view is foreshadowed step by step, and the foreshadowing runs through the whole text. The casual details in the previous text are echoed in the following text one by one, and there are hidden surprises everywhere when looking back. The writing style is simple and delicate, and the dialogues fit the characters' personalities. Whether it is delicate emotional descriptions or tense conflict scenes, the depictions are very graphic and can easily be brought into the plot.
Who knows? This is so beautifully written. My XP is jumping wildly. You are also super active. I will always follow you. Every couple in it is super sweet! ! ! ! ! It's so beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
It's good to read. Baby Yunxiao is so cute. My wife's writing style is very good. It's the type that I personally like. I hope there will be more. If it's not enough, come on, madam.
It's very interesting. Although I don't really like this kind of unequal relationship, the awesome plot and the awesome writing won me over. Every character is very charming and super nice to watch.
The trumpet has already been written. This is the tuba, write it again.
Super beautiful, the emotions are really delicate, my brother loves his brother very much🥰
It's simply shocking and delicious. I haven't seen such a refreshing setting and book in a long time. Tomato, you have such a beautiful article, why didn't you recommend it to me earlier? The author's writing style is so good, it really touched me! To sum it up in four words: Shocking and delicious!
DaDa's writing style is really superb. DaDa can write whatever he wants, and we can read whatever he writes. There is no obligation to eat or cook! Protect us Dada, love you Dada, come on! Thank you for letting me eat such a delicious meal [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen]
It's very interesting. Come on, author. I want to see the second child and the eldest brother.
Hmm~ The author gives me a lot of feedback
It's so beautiful, I watched it all day
Come on, baby, more updates, I really like the plot line between the eldest brother and the second child [Adoration]
I like it very much, very beautiful
It's super nice. The author is also very good. The update speed of four chapters a day is very nice [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
The Second Treasure ~ The Second Treasure of Contrast ~
Sambo~Puppy Sambo~
Brother Xie~Chasing the second brother Xie~
Big brother~Big brother with black hands~
Chen Ting~Bad guy Chen Ting~
It looks so good that I twisted into a maggot on the bed [laughs]
Ahhhh! I really want to know the follow-up plot [Love]
Our third treasure is so adorable, especially the interaction with our second treasure, it's all from my brother's little 🐶 [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It's so good, I'll keep reading if I like it! In fact, I quite like the line of Big Brother. I want to see Big Brother take action [shy][shy][shy][shy]
I went, the author is awesome, the writing is so delicious, let's kneel down together and beg the author for more updates.
It was so pretty, I ate it to my heart's content, it was so refreshing!
The author is so fond of it that it must be rated with five stars. It is super delicious.
The content is very interesting and the plot is also very novel
Although I have just started reading this book, it is really interesting, and the plot keeps making me want to read on. I hope the author keeps writing and I will keep reading.
It's super beautiful, the characters are rich and diverse, and the content is lively and interesting! The most important thing is that the author is a huge fan!
The emotional descriptions are very delicate. I like to see the small interactions between the eldest brother and the second brother, as well as the little joy of secretly poking at Xiaobao. It's good-looking and recommended!
It's really beautiful, the writing is very good, every plot is very coherent, every detail is in place, the description is very delicate, and the empathy is very strong
It suits my taste very well and the writing style is good [Adoration]
Shen SiminGⅹShen YunxiaoS ⦁Emotional stage: mutual recognition→dependence, fear→attachment. ⦁The whole process is fun and intensive! ! ! The rhythm is tight! ! ! (Happy, happy, I should be leisurely in the rivers and lakes~~) ⦁The emotional line rises quickly, which is very suitable for babies who don't like too many plots and complicated content, but prefer to go straight to that stage alone. There is another point, which is also very important. The author has taken good care of his readers. From the time he opened the book to the present, he has produced a lot of books every day. He is so quick that he can eat as soon as he opens his eyes every day (hahahaha). We also attach great importance to the suggestions of readers, and then improve and add some plots that everyone has called for. I also read the paragraphs and commentaries of each chapter carefully, and my heart felt warm after catching up. If you follow this book, you won't lose money by investing in it. (I have read a lot of books, and this is my first time writing a book review. I am not very skilled at it. I will try more in the future, but what old foodies can tell you is that this wave can be rushed directly (｡ì v í｡)
I hope you are happy every day
Very nice article, it's rare that there is no nonsense and you can start smoking immediately haha There are many small theaters with sub-CPs, but this one is still rare and the sub-CPs are also good to read. But I still like the main CP the most, and the author updates quite a lot every day. I have a guaranteed meal and it is good to read. ....... There are too many entanglements with the supporting characters, and I seem to be in a completely weak position facing Xie Yanqin...
The writing of the whole book is smooth and neat, breaking away from the routine assembly line plot, and the reading experience is far superior to similar online books. The author controls the rhythm of the story just right, and cuts to the main line quickly at the beginning, without lengthy and useless foreshadowing. The daily foreshadowing is reasonably interspersed with the key plot points, and the happy and tearful moments are arranged naturally, without the common problem of filling in water to make up for the word count. Character creation is the biggest highlight of this book. The protagonist's personality is complete and three-dimensional, his growth trajectory is step-by-step, and his actions are logically consistent with his own experience. There are no violations such as forced cheating and brainless virgins. The supporting characters also get rid of the label of tool people. Everyone has their own story and stance. The division between good and evil is not rigid. The motivations of the villains are well-founded. The conflicts are real and full. The various characters promote each other's plot, making the world view vivid and full. The setting of the story is novel and ingenious, the core world view is foreshadowed step by step, and the foreshadowing runs through the whole text. The casual details in the previous text are echoed in the following text one by one, and there are hidden surprises everywhere when looking back. The writing style is simple and delicate, and the dialogues fit the characters' personalities. Whether it is delicate emotional descriptions or tense conflict scenes, the depictions are very graphic and can easily be brought into the plot.
Who knows? This is so beautifully written. My XP is jumping wildly. You are also super active. I will always follow you. Every couple in it is super sweet! ! ! ! ! It's so beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
It's good to read. Baby Yunxiao is so cute. My wife's writing style is very good. It's the type that I personally like. I hope there will be more. If it's not enough, come on, madam.
It's very interesting. Although I don't really like this kind of unequal relationship, the awesome plot and the awesome writing won me over. Every character is very charming and super nice to watch.
The trumpet has already been written. This is the tuba, write it again.
Super beautiful, the emotions are really delicate, my brother loves his brother very much🥰
It's simply shocking and delicious. I haven't seen such a refreshing setting and book in a long time. Tomato, you have such a beautiful article, why didn't you recommend it to me earlier? The author's writing style is so good, it really touched me! To sum it up in four words: Shocking and delicious! DaDa's writing style is really superb. DaDa can write whatever he wants, and we can read whatever he writes. There is no obligation to eat or cook! Protect us Dada, love you Dada, come on! Thank you for letting me eat such a delicious meal [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen]
It's very interesting. Come on, author. I want to see the second child and the eldest brother.
Hmm~ The author gives me a lot of feedback
It's so beautiful, I watched it all day Come on, baby, more updates, I really like the plot line between the eldest brother and the second child [Adoration]
I like it very much, very beautiful It's super nice. The author is also very good. The update speed of four chapters a day is very nice [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
The Second Treasure ~ The Second Treasure of Contrast ~ Sambo~Puppy Sambo~ Brother Xie~Chasing the second brother Xie~ Big brother~Big brother with black hands~ Chen Ting~Bad guy Chen Ting~
It looks so good that I twisted into a maggot on the bed [laughs]
Ahhhh! I really want to know the follow-up plot [Love]
The character design is cool, Klass is awesome
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Good, good, good, good, good, good, good [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]
Our third treasure is so adorable, especially the interaction with our second treasure, it's all from my brother's little 🐶 [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It's so good, I'll keep reading if I like it! In fact, I quite like the line of Big Brother. I want to see Big Brother take action [shy][shy][shy][shy]
I went, the author is awesome, the writing is so delicious, let's kneel down together and beg the author for more updates.
It was so pretty, I ate it to my heart's content, it was so refreshing!
The author is so fond of it that it must be rated with five stars. It is super delicious.
The content is very interesting and the plot is also very novel Although I have just started reading this book, it is really interesting, and the plot keeps making me want to read on. I hope the author keeps writing and I will keep reading.
It's super beautiful, the characters are rich and diverse, and the content is lively and interesting! The most important thing is that the author is a huge fan!
The emotional descriptions are very delicate. I like to see the small interactions between the eldest brother and the second brother, as well as the little joy of secretly poking at Xiaobao. It's good-looking and recommended!
It's really beautiful, the writing is very good, every plot is very coherent, every detail is in place, the description is very delicate, and the empathy is very strong
It suits my taste very well and the writing style is good [Adoration]