The RR virus sweeps the world-monsters occupy the surface and humans retreat to their bases
City Chen Hao was born in a civilian area, awakened his spiritual talent and embarked on the path of a warrior.
(I will write one million words in this book without running away) (Have you ever dreamed of becoming a warrior in the wasteland)
Reader comments
After reading the current chapter, what should I say? The good thing is that the writing is delicate and there are no problems with the writing. The description of the framework needs to be strengthened or has not been developed. The biggest problem is that it is too dull. You need a lively character. The protagonist can be aloof or indifferent, but the story cannot. If your protagonist is this style, then you must have a lively and positive character to enrich the story. From the beginning until you enter the training camp, you have a boring gourd-like style, and the whole thing will be very boring.
The description of appearance is so detailed [face covering]
After reading the current chapter, what should I say? The good thing is that the writing is delicate and there are no problems with the writing. The description of the framework needs to be strengthened or has not been developed. The biggest problem is that it is too dull. You need a lively character. The protagonist can be aloof or indifferent, but the story cannot. If your protagonist is this style, then you must have a lively and positive character to enrich the story. From the beginning until you enter the training camp, you have a boring gourd-like style, and the whole thing will be very boring.
The description of appearance is so detailed [face covering]