Star Era: The Road to Becoming a Martial Artist

After reading the current chapter, what should I say? The good thing is that the writing is delicate and there are no problems with the writing. The description of the framework needs to be strengthened or has not been developed. The biggest problem is that it is too dull. You need a lively character. The protagonist can be aloof or indifferent, but the story cannot. If your protagonist is this style, then you must have a lively and positive character to enrich the story. From the beginning until you enter the training camp, you have a boring gourd-like style, and the whole thing will be very boring.

Author, why don't you stop writing? Hurry up and start writing. I want to read it. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like you.

This is the first time an author pays attention to me 😂😂😂

Why don't you update it 🙂

The description of appearance is so detailed 🤦