In Ancient Times, I Had a Hypnotic Jade Pendant from the Start!

It has a childish flavor and the plot is very classic

Yes, if you don't pay attention to too many details, it will look good. However, the writing style has a strong AI flavor, but it does not affect the actual viewing. The praise is that the flirting between the male and female protagonists is well written, allowing people to imagine many scenes. There are also shortcomings. The main point is that the article about the Empress is too fast and rushed. It seems that the confrontation will be resolved suddenly after a while, and the Empress' attitude changes too quickly. Although there is a Taoist contract and becoming a Taoist couple, there is no need to worry about betrayal, but the previous chapter The transformation from being a sworn enemy one moment to being a loving wife the next is too fast. If there is a twist, for example, although they become Taoist lovers after making a contract, the empress still can't let go because of her face. Later in the plot, the protagonist violently attacks the empress and makes the empress let go of her reserve. This makes viewing better.

The most outstanding thing about this time-travel novel is the emotional portrayal between male and female characters, which far exceeds the level of similar novels. The male protagonist holds a hypnotic jade pendant but never abuses it. He is gentle and restrained in his treatment of others, and does not have the common problem of arrogance. The female protagonists have vivid and unflattering images, and get along with the male protagonist step by step. There is no rigid routine. From the first acquaintance and trial, to the gradual heart-to-heart talk, and then to mutual trust, the daily interactions are delicate and natural, with a full sense of pull. The emotions are revealed delicately and touchingly, and the emotional lines are smooth and comfortable. It is particularly interesting to watch and worth reading.

The male protagonist has the ability to hypnotize but does not abuse it. He does not appear obscene and behaves fairly decently. The female protagonist has a distinct personality. Each female protagonist is a completely independent individual. So far, it is still very good. I gave four stars to keep the score high. Ahem, some plots cannot be explained clearly.

The writing is really good, the details are good, but the big story line does not feel the feeling of having no goals. If there is nothing wrong with the first moderator, it can also be said that it is not exciting enough. The relationship between men and women is just a small pleasure. You cannot bring out the great pleasure in Tomato, so you can write it in Dashuang based on the setting of the novel. I read 100 pictures and did not see the villain. The only villain is the same as passerby A. The villain is not anti-reverse enough, so it is not exciting. On the way to becoming stronger, I need to compare the person who was hypnotized for the second time. There is no pressure at all in the process. Without pressure, there is no release. You are already proficient in details and men and women, so I hope you will consider storytelling.

The plot is a bit slow and the AI ​​has been polished. There is not much progress in the plot of Se Se and it needs to be strengthened [laughing] It would be better to remove the AI ​​flavor. It will be fine if it is slower. After all, the people who read this book are gentlemen who understand everything. More details.

I read this book last year, and there were a lot of bad reviews in the comment area. Now I am giving this star not because it is good, but because only by giving this star can the rest of you see my review. The common saying at that time was that they were selling dog meat with sheep's heads and were said to be fairies. It seems that so far, they have not cultivated immortality, but are still doing it in the mortal world.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. The evaluation of this book is: acceptable. There are no problems in more than 50 chapters. It is a normal time travel. The poisonous points are still being discovered. I hope it will be more enjoyable. I will accept more girls and develop more. It is true at first glance. It is rated as: Haochi😋

Good, good, good. Although there is AI, overall it's okay. Being manipulated by an empress is already unpleasant. Chapter 128 is even more troublesome? How could the empress change from being angry and fearful to being hypnotized and enamored by signing a grand contract??? Shouldn't it be a relationship of mutual respect and equality??? How about playing?

The plot writing is quite smooth and I look forward to the follow-up development. But now that the setting of a cultivator has been added, how should we deal with the plot of the maid lady after writing it in such detail?