Douluo: Tang San and I Started a Street Stall Revolution

Compared with Tomato's other Douluo fanfics, it is really a very different book. Most of the other fanfics I read are based on the original protagonist, with some inexplicable contradictions and inexplicable slaps in the face, and it is so OOC that it is ridiculous. . . I can't stand it! But this one is completely fresh and refined! I won't deliberately criticize the characters in the original work. I really like this kind of thing, and the heroine and Tang San are completely idealists. I really like the feeling of a group of people dedicating themselves to their ideals, regardless of anything, and a single spark can start a prairie fire. [Send my heart] Everyone in this article is very good. It abandons some plots of small heads controlling big heads in tjss. Several young couples are very pure in love, and some of the original meanings are fulfilled. Everyone has gained their own happiness! The author's writing style is also improving, and he will get better and better in the future! But even the writing at the beginning is much better than most fanfics I've read! Teacher, you must continue writing! I will always follow you! [Send a heart][Send a heart][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This book is very exciting. Each character is vividly portrayed without neglecting other characters. It is a true group portrait novel. This second creation also solves many regrets of the original book, making the characters and readers feel more complete. At the same time, the daily life of the Shrek Seven Monsters is also wonderfully depicted, not stiff, as if they are real beings with their own lives, and the relationship between the young lovers is even sweeter! ! ! The characters in the book (except for the villains and...) Are all people with great love. Their great love for revolution for the people in another world also gave me a glimpse of the style of our ancestors fighting for New China. All in all, I highly recommend this book. The author's writing style is also very good and very active.

This book is also very nice. I have been following it for a long time. The author of this book has changed some aspects of the original book that were difficult for people to accept, and the article is also very high-quality (I don't know what I am talking about...). The core of the article is towards resistance, and it is also very interesting. I feel that this world view is quite grand, um, yes. And there are also very funny clips interspersed with it, so I must give it a five-star rating! [Adoration]

A lot of the original plot has been changed, but it is more consistent with each character, allowing each character in Douluo Dalu to show their greatest charm, and even perfected the loopholes in the original work - the conflict between ordinary people and soul masters. It doesn't embarrass the original characters like other fanfics. I like this book very much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I have read a lot of Douluo fanfics, but this one is different from other douluo fanfics where the protagonist group or the black spirit temple, or who fall in love with the people inside, or who use their own strength to improve the fate of the soul beasts and civilians in it... (I don't mean to discredit other works), this one mainly tells the story from the direction of the protagonist group breaking the original order together, the group portrait [Sparrow Food Masterwork] has a novel direction, the plot is good, and the writing is good. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧Except Dean Shrek talking about the master's love made me a little embarrassed (personal opinion, I refuse to comment). I hope the author can make it more complete. (♡>𖥦<)/♥

This book is indeed a very good book. It does not have a particularly outrageous plot. The beginning may not be very good, and the title of the book makes people think that its focus is off-center. I boycotted the book at first because of the title and the beginning. But in fact, the subsequent plot is very exciting, and the shop opened by the heroine and Tang San is also a righteous performance, and it does not take up too much of the plot. This book provides some invisible foreshadowing for their subsequent development. I highly recommend it. It does not deviate from the focus and is consistent with the original work. Anyway, I am determined to follow this book. Although I have not finished reading it yet, I believe that if the author keeps writing with this thinking, then this book will have very good results, so I highly recommend it and hope that the author will continue to update it. Because there are indeed relatively few books about Douluo Dalu on Tomato, and this book is indeed particularly eye-catching.

It didn't follow the original plot, but was completely based on the heroine's own character. It was really a surprise! I have already tied it after reading it in one go. I hope the author can add more ~ ​​I am really looking forward to the emotional line!

Looks good! [Sending Hearts] A love letter from a dream! The logic is normal, the characters are not OOC, the dialogues are not awkward, the young couple have a sweet daily life [blowing kisses][blowing kisses], and there is no such thing as the kind of balancing literature that is often seen in fandoms! Awesome 🥹

This is really the best Douluo fanfic I have ever read. I really like the character of the heroine, and I especially like all the characters in the author's works. She is really well written by the author, and I like their way of getting along. In fact, as the book says, there are aristocratic and civilian classes in reality, poor and rich. There are many injustices in real life, but we don't have the courage and ability like the heroines. However, in reality, there are also many people who hope that the world can be fair.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks sweet, it looks sweet, it looks sweet, it looks super sweet, it looks super good, it looks super good, it looks super good, it looks super good, it looks super good, and the settings are also super good. Dai Mubai and Ma Hongjun did not go to a brothel or anything like that, and they are not innocent. , It's really good, Xiao Wu didn't come out from the Star Forest, the heroine is really super cute, super good-looking, super cute, cute, cute, cute, good-looking, please just give me a super five-star review, the author is too careful, the writing is super good, every detail is very detailed, the author is awesome, I like the author a lot It's really, really good to read. The author is also very good. He responds to every comment attentively and is very active. The author works so hard and updates every day. It's really great. But I read the book reviews and I will also review them [smirk] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

It's super good-looking. It doesn't follow the main storyline like other fanfics. It has its own plot, and everyone is very good. Dai Mubai and Ma Hongjun are not what they were at the beginning of the original work. They are both their best selves. The most important thing is that they don't have the arrogant thoughts of the original work.

On the eighth day after joining the bookshelf, this is the first time I comment. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 290, I was moved by their group portraits. I don't like comments very much, so I read the author's articles more immersively. When I saw the scene in the finals when they faced Qian Daoliu, I would be lying if I said I wasn't moved/shocked. My tears were real [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Okay, leave a paw for more updates! ! ! [Notice]

This is a very treasured book, which completely makes up for the shortcomings of many characters in the original work. Each character retains its original highlights and minimizes the vulgar plot of the original work. I especially like the rewrite of Ma Hongjun, and the golden finger of the protagonist is really not big at all! ! ! It completely fits the background of the original work, a strong woman! Very strong! When the heroine was seeking revenge, I thought many times that San was coming to save people, but it turned out not to be! It's all about self-help! I like it so much. I didn't expect that I would find a treasure. I love you, author...

I think this book is very well written. Not only are the characters non-ooc, but each person has a very three-dimensional image and characteristics. The protagonist also has a heart for the world, is tenacious and unyielding, and does his best to help others. Five stars is just the limit of a review, not the limit in my heart~🥰🥰

There is nothing uncomfortable in many parts of this novel from beginning to end. It is really great, and the benefits and structure are great, and the bugs in many places have been fixed, so it is not that uncomfortable. Moreover, my heroine is a very charming little baby, and she is a local heroine. Overall, it is very good, super good-looking, five-star praise, highly recommended.

I've read Chapter 118 so far, and it's stuck. When the author said he wanted to comment, I came here. The cp male protagonist of this novel is Tang San. I think it can be said that he is the Qingliu in the Douluo Dalu novels. He is not brainlessly black Tang San, nor brainless Wuhundian. He is pure and neutral, and he does not judge a person randomly. I have read a lot of fan fiction, and I already have a bad impression of Yu Xiaogang, but the author's novels It gave me a better understanding. I feel that the author is also a very kind person in reality, and will consider the lower class and the nobility. Most of the novels I read have the protagonist who is very strong, crushing other people or robbing other people. Here I saw Tuanhun, and I was really happy. The author portrayed each of the Shrek Seven Devils very well. What I like is that the writing of Da Ming and Er Ming feels very warm. Fans in the past will not describe them. The author wrote that the protagonist is powerful while not neglecting the friends around him. I really like it. I feel that this novel can be the top 1 Douluo Continent fan. There is no one. There is no one better written than this one. Don't worry about it, everyone. I kissed and hugged it as soon as it came out, and it reflected the ambiguous period between the two of them and the trust between friends in the early stage. It is well written, not greasy or yandere, and a rare and refreshing novel. I love it so much. In short, to sum up, I like it very much. The author is also very active and will chat with everyone. Finally, I hope the author can keep updating, and I will always do so. Support the author, come on [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]. I will add more to the follow-up plot later. I hope everyone will have fun reading the novel.

The author is very good-looking, but I usually don't comment in the middle. It's very dramatic, so the author is very good. I usually don't comment in the comment area, but it's very good-looking. Come on, the author.

Very very beautiful! ! Originally I just came in out of boredom to take a look, but the more I read, the more I found that the characters in it are very attractive, and each character is very full, even the characters mentioned simply and casually are not perfunctory. I really like the heroine's character. This is the first time I have seen the dual martial arts settings of Nuwa and Fuxi! Xinghe and Sansan are also very sweet and seductive! Anyway, the more I watch, the more I look forward to it! Now that I have seen the entrance to the Elite Soul Master Competition, I am very excited and looking forward to it! Xinghe's character is the kind of person whose love has no boundaries, which proves that "water can carry a boat, but it can also overturn it." The plot has not changed much, the setting has become better, making every character seem to have a soul and be real and emotional! The most important thing is that the emotions inside are pure love! ! And the author is also very active! After reading so much, I feel that I am the kind of author who updates whenever there is a reminder! !

This book is really very good-looking. It did not follow the original plot and was very imaginative. Every character in it has their best ending. Anyway, it is really good-looking! ! ! ! ! !

Oops, the writing by this teacher is also very delicious. [Blowing kiss] The vocabulary is not bad, but one word may be emphasized many times in the whole book, but it is innocuous. ᕙ( •̀ ᗜ •́ )ᕗThe writing is very delicious, and the world view is very grand. [Sending my heart] It's so delicious, it's so delicious, it's so beautiful that it's like a fairy coming to earth😋It's so delicious ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The recent newcomers have tied it. The author's writing is very good. The whole world view is very large, but it can be stood up very cleverly. The charm of the group portraits is brought to the extreme. Everyone is their own protagonist. I think this is the meaning of fan fiction. Even if the process is difficult, I hope everything will be successful. It is worth it for everyone, and it is worth it for everyone. I came here to give you a score. For someone like me who doesn't give scores very much, it is really good. I hope you don't stop updating. I also followed a fanfic that is not Douluo at the beginning. The writing is not bad. The author stopped updating. It really makes me vomit blood. As long as you keep updating, I will always support [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

It's good-looking. I've been looking for Douluo fandoms for a long time, but none of them are as exciting as this one. The writing is vivid and the fighting is very good. The author also has his own opinions and descriptions of the non-protagonist characters, especially the group portraits. The emotional lines are also sweet and there are no flashpoints. Come on, author! [Make faces]

It's super beautiful [Admiration], the layout is very big, and many of the descriptions are very humorous. The series of things that everyone did in order to make the common people eat meat, overthrow the nobles, and achieve true fairness make people excited [Like]. Now it is tied and still unfinished [Blow a kiss], and I look forward to the author's subsequent updates [Shy]

Very interesting and thoughtful. The author is also very good. There are many updates.

Every step of the plot's development is logically logical. Xinghe is cute, Sansan is cute too, pure love is the best [Sending Hearts]

A very good book, updated very quickly, and the author has a lot of manuscripts. I really recommend it.

Everything is good, but there are too many mistakes in it. The author is great, please correct them all for me if you have the chance [face covering] [smile] It's really good, 100,000 times better than the original [lick screen] [send heart]

It's super, super good-looking. Just control the score. It's a love letter in my dreams. [Laughs] After reading this book, I no longer want to hit the red fruit in the game, watch the video, or play any more. I highly recommend it.

I like it, it's super beautiful, the heroine's baby is so cute, the author is so awesome

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