Douluo Dalu: Tang San and I Start a Street-Stall Revolution

Compared with Tomato's other Douluo fanfics, it is really a very different book. Most of the other fanfics I read are based on the original protagonist, with some inexplicable contradictions and inexplicable slaps in the face, and it is so OOC that it is ridiculous. . . I can't stand it! But this one is completely fresh and refined! I won't deliberately criticize the characters in the original work. I really like this kind of thing, and the heroine and Tang San are completely idealists. I really like the feeling of a group of people dedicating themselves to their ideals, regardless of anything, and a single spark can start a prairie fire. [Send my heart] Everyone in this article is very good. It abandons some plots of small heads controlling big heads in tjss. Several young couples are very pure in love, and some of the original meanings are fulfilled. Everyone has gained their own happiness! The author's writing style is also improving, and he will get better and better in the future! But even the writing at the beginning is much better than most fanfics I've read! Teacher, you must continue writing! I will always follow you! 💕💕😘😘😘

This book is also very nice. I have been following it for a long time. The author of this book has changed some aspects of the original book that were difficult for people to accept, and the article is also very high-quality (I don't know what I am talking about...). The core of the article is towards resistance, and it is also very interesting. I feel that this world view is quite grand, um, yes. And there are also very funny clips interspersed with it, so I must give it a five-star rating! 🥰 Oh no, no, no, don't take it off the shelves, I'm watching this book become popular step by step😱😱😱😫😫😫😢😢😢

I have read a lot of Douluo fanfics, but this one is different from other douluo fanfics where the protagonist group or the black spirit temple, or who fall in love with the people inside, or who use their own strength to improve the fate of the soul beasts and civilians in it... (I don't mean to discredit other works), this one mainly tells the story from the direction of the protagonist group breaking the original order together, the group portrait [Sparrow Food Masterwork] has a novel direction, the plot is good, and the writing is good. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧Except Dean Shrek talking about the master's love made me a little embarrassed (personal opinion, I refuse to comment). I hope the author can make it more complete. (♡>𖥦<)/♥

This book is indeed a very good book. It does not have a particularly outrageous plot. The beginning may not be very good, and the title of the book makes people think that its focus is off-center. I boycotted the book at first because of the title and the beginning. But in fact, the subsequent plot is very exciting, and the shop opened by the heroine and Tang San is also a righteous performance, and it does not take up too much of the plot. This book provides some invisible foreshadowing for their subsequent development. I highly recommend it. It does not deviate from the focus and is consistent with the original work. Anyway, I am determined to follow this book. Although I have not finished reading it yet, I believe that if the author keeps writing with this thinking, then this book will have very good results, so I highly recommend it and hope that the author will continue to update it. Because there are indeed relatively few books about Douluo Dalu on Tomato, and this book is indeed particularly eye-catching.

This book is very exciting. Each character is vividly portrayed without neglecting other characters. It is a true group portrait novel. This second creation also solves many regrets of the original book, making the characters and readers feel more complete. At the same time, the daily life of the Shrek Seven Monsters is also wonderfully depicted, not stiff, as if they are real beings with their own lives, and the relationship between the young lovers is even sweeter!!! The characters in the book (except for the villains and...) Are all people with great love. Their great love for revolution for the people in another world also gave me a glimpse of the style of our ancestors fighting for New China. All in all, I highly recommend this book. The author's writing style is also very good and very active.

It didn't follow the original plot, but was completely based on the heroine's own character. It was really a surprise! I have already tied it after reading it in one go. I hope the author can add more ~ ​​I am really looking forward to the emotional line!

A lot of the original plot has been changed, but it is more consistent with each character, allowing each character in Douluo Dalu to show their greatest charm, and even perfected the loopholes in the original work - the conflict between ordinary people and soul masters. It doesn't embarrass the original characters like other fanfics. I like this book very much 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Looks good! 💕 A love letter from a dream! The logic is normal, the characters are not OOC, the dialogues are not awkward, the young couple have a sweet daily life [blowing kisses][blowing kisses], and there is no such thing as the kind of balancing literature that is often seen in fandoms! Awesome 🥹

The plot of this book is really good, very innovative, and the author is also very interesting. Qibao has Liuli, can you buy some peripherals? I almost laughed to death when I saw this. It's very brainwashing. Xinghe is really a little too slow about emotions. At first, I could accept it, but later on, I really thought it was a bit too much. The protagonist is very smart. Even if he doesn't think about the relationship between men and women, he won't behave like this. I'm three-quarters of the way through and now the emotional line feels a bit stuck in the throat. I even have a feeling that the protagonist really doesn't know or is stupid. It's just that the plot is really exciting. This is why I gave it four stars. Of course, some readers like this and some don't. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage (I'm just expressing my feelings as a reader, don't scold me😭) It's better to give three stars if it's a big score, otherwise it's easy to lose.

Totally 5️⃣⭐️📖, the best Douluo fanfic I have ever seen! It's so awesome. It makes up for a lot of regrets in the original show, and the characters are more complete! It was a blast to watch (I've seen a lot of them but I'm a little afraid of trying them out)