I was bound by the system to love and deep space. I have been here for a long time. I have to gather the wool of the system to ensure my survival in a strange world. The system is only to give the protagonist a golden finger. It is purely for the purpose of generating electricity. The pace is slow and daily writing. I just want to write a story of my own. I hope someone likes it. Thank you.
Reader comments
Time travel and deep space game fandom 1v5. The heroine takes the Jian Wang 3 and Tianlong Babu systems to travel to love and deep space to have sex forever. The narration is relatively flat, making the entire plot very light; some important plot points are briefly mentioned, and the mood is not high; the main control is a bit tasteless, and the cannon fodder tool player goes offline after using it up. In fact, the heroine's strength and wealth can fully support a main plot (developing a career, fighting monsters and upgrading), but Sword 3 and Tianlong seem to have only gone through it briefly, with very little description except their homeland, as if they are forcing cheats for the sake of cheats. In the finale, everyone gave birth to a child (I didn't dare to open my eyes, hoping it was my imagination)... It's hard to describe. Really, I can accept it if you write about Xiao Hui crawling into bed (after all, he can do it), and I can accept it if you write about Li Shen persuading Xia Yizhou to take over (he will consider the heroine more), but if you put the children together as a condition, it seems that the love between the hero and the heroine has gone bad. Maybe it was really broken, starting from the moment the master controller died.
The writing is very good. The male protagonists of the second game were forced to follow the plot, and the female protagonist who originally controlled the master but accidentally traveled into the world of the second game. In order to get rid of the control, they plotted against the female protagonist. This makes people feel that they really have souls. Although they love the female protagonist, how can a group of talented people be willing to be at the mercy of the plot?
I'm here to review a book! What my wife wrote is great! The writing is delicate and gentle, and the logic line is very clear! If you haven't played Jian San and Tianlong Babu, it won't affect your reading.
Time travel and deep space game fandom 1v5. The heroine takes the Jian Wang 3 and Tianlong Babu systems to travel to love and deep space to have sex forever. The narration is relatively flat, making the entire plot very light; some important plot points are briefly mentioned, and the mood is not high; the main control is a bit tasteless, and the cannon fodder tool player goes offline after using it up. In fact, the heroine's strength and wealth can fully support a main plot (developing a career, fighting monsters and upgrading), but Sword 3 and Tianlong seem to have only gone through it briefly, with very little description except their homeland, as if they are forcing cheats for the sake of cheats. In the finale, everyone gave birth to a child (I didn't dare to open my eyes, hoping it was my imagination)... It's hard to describe. Really, I can accept it if you write about Xiao Hui crawling into bed (after all, he can do it), and I can accept it if you write about Li Shen persuading Xia Yizhou to take over (he will consider the heroine more), but if you put the children together as a condition, it seems that the love between the hero and the heroine has gone bad. Maybe it was really broken, starting from the moment the master controller died.
The writing is very good. The male protagonists of the second game were forced to follow the plot, and the female protagonist who originally controlled the master but accidentally traveled into the world of the second game. In order to get rid of the control, they plotted against the female protagonist. This makes people feel that they really have souls. Although they love the female protagonist, how can a group of talented people be willing to be at the mercy of the plot?
I'm here to review a book! What my wife wrote is great! The writing is delicate and gentle, and the logic line is very clear! If you haven't played Jian San and Tianlong Babu, it won't affect your reading.