On the first day he traveled through the world of mixed martial arts, Pei Jiuge was bound to an outrageous system - the fusion of "Green Lotus Sword Immortal" Li Taibai.
The rules are simple: drink, dance with swords, recite poetry, and be wild. The higher the degree of integration, the stronger the strength.
So she disguised herself as a man, with a wine flask hanging from her waist, holding a three-foot soft sword, and rode a proud crane into the rivers and lakes. I wanted to live a low-key life, but after I got drunk, I casually said, "Kill a person in ten steps, and leave no trace in a thousand miles." Everyone was shocked. She saved people in danger, turned the sky upside down with one sword, and then swept away her clothes, hiding her merit and fame.
But the problem is - the prince of Northern Liang has his eyes on her, the head of Wudang wants to accept her as his disciple, the saint of the demon sect wants to sworn sworn sworn brother with her, the heroines of the original novel collectively empathize...
Pei Jiuge collapsed: I really just want to drink and practice swordsmanship to build up my fusion!
There are rumors in the world: This person is of unknown origin, has great swordsmanship, unparalleled poetic talent, and unparalleled grace. He is an immortal in this world.
Pei Jiuge: ... Okay, just banish the immortal, just don't lift my clothes.
Reader comments
Now the story is very well written. The heroine is so sassy when she travels alone in the world. I really hope that the author will not write a male protagonist and just keep it as a non-CP. Author, you write like this makes me a little scared [crying]. I especially like the way the heroine walks alone. I hope the author does not have a CP and never add a male protagonist to write a love scene. Rather than a love story, I want to see the plot of the heroine growing up and navigating the world, so I kindly ask the author not to set up a male protagonist in the whole process [crying] [crying] [crying] The fighting scenes and the Jianghu structure are all very well written, and the heroine is also brilliantly portrayed. I hope it will continue in the follow-up, and don't add male protagonists and emotional lines, come on!
The heroine's story alone is quite interesting, but I was deceived by the title of the book. I originally came here for the non-CP heroine, thinking that others only love one-sidedly, and the heroine concentrates on her own affairs. However, a lot of the subsequent chapters are devoted to the heroine and Gu Changyuan's pull, staying by the bed for three days, and staring at each other under the moon. After more than 100 chapters, it can be seen that the heroine cares about the man, which is completely different from what I expected.
Those who can accept the emotional connection between men and women will have no problem watching this, but those who just want to see the heroine alone and beautiful without any CPs can avoid it. It is not clear whether the male and female protagonists will be directly matched in the future. I am a bit broken. The AI feeling in the back is almost overflowing. I really don't know why the heroine fell in love with me out of nowhere. I really don't understand [laughs]
Isn't it a bit overwhelming to have an autistic woman play Li Bai?
Missing:
1. Sometimes people find it confusing. For example, the Chinese pronunciation of "she" and "he" have the same sound, but the heroine can tell whether they read her as this "she" or that "he". Of course, if everyone here is speaking in English, just pretend I didn't say
2. There is an incident where the heroine's strength is upgraded from the seventh level to the sixth level. Is no one surprised? Moreover, when she appeared on the stage, it was assumed that the heroine was at level 6, and there was no word of congratulation or surprise? It would look weird without some transition! (Although I know that people with high strength may be able to tell it at a glance, but don't you have any reaction when you see someone leveling up so quickly?)
3. The name issue. The heroine clearly didn't say her name earlier, but for no reason everyone called her by the name given by the system (the part where she left that mountain, the store manager was talking about the heroine), and then someone who knew the heroine came and asked her her name. It was very strange! If she said it somewhere we couldn't see, why did Chu Shishi (sorry for remembering the wrong name!) Ask for the heroine's name? How did they know the name if it wasn't told? ? There are many logical illogicalities, I hope they can be explained or corrected!
Excellent: The subject matter is quite new, so I will give you four points for encouragement. If the logic is perfected, I will change it to five points.
The setting is very good. It is a novel about the role-playing style of Sword Fairy Li Bai, but the description of the character is relatively small. The character is relatively contrasting, and the social fear has been described. The description of Li Bai's character is relatively insufficient, but the subject matter is very interesting. The one I liked before is the one about the role-playing type of the female brother. The update is too slow. It has been almost three years since I wrote it.
It's pretty good. It's just that the protagonist's personality is a bit boring. If I think about myself, the Li Bai poems he sings are very free and easy, but his personality is very cold [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]
It's so annoying. The heroine has been stuck at the sixth level since dozens of chapters. She only rises a little and then never rises again. Then she becomes very literary. Sometimes she can even be confused about which level the heroine is. She is at the sixth level and then at the fifth level.
The subject matter is quite novel, but it's frustrating to watch.
It's very beautiful. I decided that the author can write about the heroine in other people's eyes. For example, after writing the heroine's perspective, I can change the perspective and write what others see. This can also make the heroine's inner and outer image more obvious. Of course, I just mind this, but the overall look is very good [shy][shy]
This book is really great. It turns out that women can be so martial arts and scholarly. The heroine is very opposite to the tasks given by the system, but I think the heroine is really poetic, so every time she reads Li Bai's poems, I feel that the heroine is Li Bai, but a little more cold than Li Bai. She plays Li Bai without losing her own feeling. It is really great😋💅The story line is also very smooth, both for women and men. I was attracted by the heroine. Of course, liking is not necessarily just about love. Many places are used to pave the way for the heroine to recite poems, so I feel that the whole film has the scent of poetry and a faint smell of wine. Not only the reciting of poems shows the poetic meaning, the author wrote it very well here. He must have put a lot of thought into it. In the end, the writing is very, very good. I highly recommend it. This is a woman disguised as a man who I saw and thought was well written.
Justice from Heaven feels a bit out of place, okay, so that the protagonist doesn't die.
Can I not have a male protagonist, or no cp? (╥╥) The author is great. No need for a romantic relationship, can we be friends with that prince? There were a few chapters where I was a bit ambiguous with the Crown Prince, and I was really scared (T_T). Also, please give the author a big boost ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`
I was plowing in the fields, but when I saw the teacher's novel, it was like having chicken blood. I kicked the cow away and cultivated 20 acres of land by myself. If a strong enemy invades in a hundred years, please put this manuscript on my grave. I will break out of the ground to defend China and repel the strong enemy😡😡
This theme is really interesting. The relationship between the Prince of Northern Liang and the heroine is so complicated that I can't explain it due to some factors, but everyone has proven it with their actions. It's so sweet. The little details make the sweetness go a long way. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I am looking forward to the author's big updates every day🆕.
The creativity is new and the subject matter is good. The heroine has no autonomy but is pushed along by the system. I feel like there are too many words to describe the heroine's heart.
It looks good, but I hope it doesn't have CP.
I can't accept CP... A long story about the love between children, and some places have a strong AI flavor.
It feels like everything is just right
It's just that there's something interesting about a woman disguising herself as a man.
Not bad, not bad, no matter whether there is a love line or not, I personally like to read what the author writes
Very beautiful, looking forward to the next chapter
Very nice, good luck to the author! I haven't seen such a beautiful scene in a long time!
It's so beautiful. I feel like I can't find a replacement for this article [Blowing a Kiss]. The frequency of updates is also very high.
The heroine is slowly growing up, I think so far, she's pretty good
Now the story is very well written. The heroine is so sassy when she travels alone in the world. I really hope that the author will not write a male protagonist and just keep it as a non-CP. Author, you write like this makes me a little scared [crying]. I especially like the way the heroine walks alone. I hope the author does not have a CP and never add a male protagonist to write a love scene. Rather than a love story, I want to see the plot of the heroine growing up and navigating the world, so I kindly ask the author not to set up a male protagonist in the whole process [crying] [crying] [crying] The fighting scenes and the Jianghu structure are all very well written, and the heroine is also brilliantly portrayed. I hope it will continue in the follow-up, and don't add male protagonists and emotional lines, come on! The heroine's story alone is quite interesting, but I was deceived by the title of the book. I originally came here for the non-CP heroine, thinking that others only love one-sidedly, and the heroine concentrates on her own affairs. However, a lot of the subsequent chapters are devoted to the heroine and Gu Changyuan's pull, staying by the bed for three days, and staring at each other under the moon. After more than 100 chapters, it can be seen that the heroine cares about the man, which is completely different from what I expected. Those who can accept the emotional connection between men and women will have no problem watching this, but those who just want to see the heroine alone and beautiful without any CPs can avoid it. It is not clear whether the male and female protagonists will be directly matched in the future. I am a bit broken. The AI feeling in the back is almost overflowing. I really don't know why the heroine fell in love with me out of nowhere. I really don't understand [laughs]
Isn't it a bit overwhelming to have an autistic woman play Li Bai?
Missing: 1. Sometimes people find it confusing. For example, the Chinese pronunciation of "she" and "he" have the same sound, but the heroine can tell whether they read her as this "she" or that "he". Of course, if everyone here is speaking in English, just pretend I didn't say 2. There is an incident where the heroine's strength is upgraded from the seventh level to the sixth level. Is no one surprised? Moreover, when she appeared on the stage, it was assumed that the heroine was at level 6, and there was no word of congratulation or surprise? It would look weird without some transition! (Although I know that people with high strength may be able to tell it at a glance, but don't you have any reaction when you see someone leveling up so quickly?) 3. The name issue. The heroine clearly didn't say her name earlier, but for no reason everyone called her by the name given by the system (the part where she left that mountain, the store manager was talking about the heroine), and then someone who knew the heroine came and asked her her name. It was very strange! If she said it somewhere we couldn't see, why did Chu Shishi (sorry for remembering the wrong name!) Ask for the heroine's name? How did they know the name if it wasn't told? ? There are many logical illogicalities, I hope they can be explained or corrected! Excellent: The subject matter is quite new, so I will give you four points for encouragement. If the logic is perfected, I will change it to five points.
The setting is very good. It is a novel about the role-playing style of Sword Fairy Li Bai, but the description of the character is relatively small. The character is relatively contrasting, and the social fear has been described. The description of Li Bai's character is relatively insufficient, but the subject matter is very interesting. The one I liked before is the one about the role-playing type of the female brother. The update is too slow. It has been almost three years since I wrote it.
It's pretty good. It's just that the protagonist's personality is a bit boring. If I think about myself, the Li Bai poems he sings are very free and easy, but his personality is very cold [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] It's so annoying. The heroine has been stuck at the sixth level since dozens of chapters. She only rises a little and then never rises again. Then she becomes very literary. Sometimes she can even be confused about which level the heroine is. She is at the sixth level and then at the fifth level.
The subject matter is quite novel, but it's frustrating to watch.
It's very beautiful. I decided that the author can write about the heroine in other people's eyes. For example, after writing the heroine's perspective, I can change the perspective and write what others see. This can also make the heroine's inner and outer image more obvious. Of course, I just mind this, but the overall look is very good [shy][shy]
This book is really great. It turns out that women can be so martial arts and scholarly. The heroine is very opposite to the tasks given by the system, but I think the heroine is really poetic, so every time she reads Li Bai's poems, I feel that the heroine is Li Bai, but a little more cold than Li Bai. She plays Li Bai without losing her own feeling. It is really great😋💅The story line is also very smooth, both for women and men. I was attracted by the heroine. Of course, liking is not necessarily just about love. Many places are used to pave the way for the heroine to recite poems, so I feel that the whole film has the scent of poetry and a faint smell of wine. Not only the reciting of poems shows the poetic meaning, the author wrote it very well here. He must have put a lot of thought into it. In the end, the writing is very, very good. I highly recommend it. This is a woman disguised as a man who I saw and thought was well written. Justice from Heaven feels a bit out of place, okay, so that the protagonist doesn't die.
Can I not have a male protagonist, or no cp? (╥╥) The author is great. No need for a romantic relationship, can we be friends with that prince? There were a few chapters where I was a bit ambiguous with the Crown Prince, and I was really scared (T_T). Also, please give the author a big boost ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`
I was plowing in the fields, but when I saw the teacher's novel, it was like having chicken blood. I kicked the cow away and cultivated 20 acres of land by myself. If a strong enemy invades in a hundred years, please put this manuscript on my grave. I will break out of the ground to defend China and repel the strong enemy😡😡
This theme is really interesting. The relationship between the Prince of Northern Liang and the heroine is so complicated that I can't explain it due to some factors, but everyone has proven it with their actions. It's so sweet. The little details make the sweetness go a long way. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I am looking forward to the author's big updates every day🆕.
The creativity is new and the subject matter is good. The heroine has no autonomy but is pushed along by the system. I feel like there are too many words to describe the heroine's heart.
It looks good, but I hope it doesn't have CP. I can't accept CP... A long story about the love between children, and some places have a strong AI flavor.
It feels like everything is just right
It's just that there's something interesting about a woman disguising herself as a man.
Not bad, not bad, no matter whether there is a love line or not, I personally like to read what the author writes
Very beautiful, looking forward to the next chapter
Very nice, good luck to the author! I haven't seen such a beautiful scene in a long time!
It's so beautiful. I feel like I can't find a replacement for this article [Blowing a Kiss]. The frequency of updates is also very high.
The heroine is slowly growing up, I think so far, she's pretty good