Command Block Useless? I Jump Twice and Fly!

The writing is quite good and the content is good. One is that the update is too slow. The other is that the restrictions of the MC command block are a bit too big, and the combat power limit is too dead. This is not a shortcoming. After all, I have just started writing. Let's look at the author's own plan later. The combat power limit is large. I hope to write more. After all, such a good book is so hard to find.

The combat power is a bit harsh, and the MC characteristics are not reflected [face covering]

The combat power is too suppressed. Now the command block is a magic attack. As long as the magic resistance is high enough, you can be immune. The protagonist does not give himself any equipment or try to see if there are mods or magic equipment.

Can the children's author write to the end? [Laughs crookedly] I can't see the end. I feel like the author only knows those few instructions. He doesn't even drink the potion in a fight, so he just likes to put away the TP. What about resistance, strength, and speed? I can't understand the emotional line. I've only lived here for a few days. Why am I blushing? I can't understand the latest chapter of saving people. It's just a gift.

Although it didn't take long to watch, the final conclusion is basically made. The rating is five stars, but there are some deficiencies in the content of the book. The author is a newcomer after all, so he should give it a novice protection period. The writing style is relatively monotonous and old-fashioned; in terms of the plot (with spoilers), we can see that the author has innovative intentions. For example, the part where the registered adventurer is looking for a child has a new angle, and we can see the author's determination to write a long event. But here comes the problem. Written like this, the protagonist directly becomes an adventurer. Although it can reflect the character of i-person TV, it gives people the impression of a more reckless mentality. It would be better if some plots of the protagonist's visit to the news are added in the middle to overdo it. Also, when designing the plot, the author should consider the application of several instructions. In the comment area, netizens summarized many better ways to play than what you wrote, but you have not considered them. You should give more thought to them when writing the outline. All in all, there are some innovations, but some of the plot may not be appropriate. As a debut novel, it is more than enough to test the waters. I should continue to support it. Come on.

This introduction is more similar to a short story I saw on station B before [Eating Melon] And it's also an MC-themed novel Let's give it four stars first to see the situation [laughing evilly]

It's well written, I want to read it. Thank you for more updates [smile]

I have caught up with the latest chapter. The subject matter is not bad, but the beginning to the middle is a bit bad. As far as the plot is concerned, it's okay. In terms of character dialogue, the AI ​​flavor is really too strong. I'm already feeling a little physically unwell. The plot is quite interesting when you look at it later. The idea is great, but the hang-ups are huge. I guess it's almost finished. Come on, if possible, can you make that dialogue more realistic? It's just that, a little bit human.

It's pretty good. It can be seen that the author may want to create a character that is very light-hearted, but newbies may not be able to grasp it well. As for the advancement of the main content, it will be slower. I personally feel that it is very comfortable. Just a reminder, if you want to see a good start, you can go. The early stage is still a bit overwhelming. , I won't worry about it later. To be honest, if you want to have a good start, then there is nothing to write. I'll finish it in one chapter. After all, the combat power of MC is too super model. It depends on how the author writes the follow-up. It seems that the main story should be completed soon. Let's see if we can generate electricity or something in the later stage, and help the other world with the technology tree.

It is recommended to replace those original bit instructions with real instruction codes

Rather than rescuing people, I'm more curious about why I don't have a bed and have my level maxed out first? Judging from the plot, the Demon King should be equal to or less than the Goddess. Even if he is weaker than the Goddess, it is only half a level lower. So there should be no need to worry about any problems with the Brave System. Shouldn't you give priority to maxing out your level and not fight casually?

Overall, it's pretty good, but the description of time is a bit too vague. There's no clear concept of time, and it makes people think it happened within one day. By the way, some new instructions can be implemented in the future, such as collective coma. The effect is that the lives within a certain range will be forced to sleep just like Steve goes to bed at night, without having to write code.

The fighting force is a bit heavy

It's okay, the writing has a bit of a human-computer feel, and it feels like it's been polished by AI.

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The plot is generally okay, but I can't get into the details.

Do your best to support the author

If I want to start an industry, I'll get some MODs and arrange some things like mechanical power aeronautics, Valkyrie's chirping track, etc.

Most of the MC articles in the past were invincible articles, but this one is not. The writing is okay, but too little.

Although the early stage of the plot is a bit stressful, it is really exciting later on. This Golden Finger is too shady.

It's very nice. Well, I just don't have a complete understanding of the features, but there are a lot of them. At least the instructions are more complete than mine.

Come on, it looks pretty

To be honest, I am very picky about reading novels. It can be seen from the fact that I have read more than 4,000 books and only finished 75 of them. However, I think this book is very well written, so I will most likely follow it to the end. However, this is only based on my interests. Whether you like it or not depends on your own interests.

It's so slow that the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this [take a closer look]

Well written, but not readable enough

Good looking, love to see more

The idea is quite novel, but the pace is not very fast.

It looks pretty good so far😊

I have read Chapter 55, and I personally think it is pretty good, keep up the good work

The writing style is a bit improved compared to the previous chapters, keep up the good work