[Lament of the Departed: Ten Days After the Fall of the City] Fanfiction, [Jiangyin Arc, Fang Zhiyou] [Prisoner of the Progressive Faction]
Fang Zhiyou died in Jiangyin City.
Before his death, he thought he would see Sister Yan'er. But that wasn't who appeared.
He saw a stranger, a woman who had helped him and saved his life.
Yet somehow, he'd forgotten her.
What was her name?
Oh!
It seemed to be Lin Pianpian!
Reborn once more, he'll do everything in his power to atone for his sins. He'll prove that even a scholar can be useful in a hundred ways.
(I've rarely seen fanfiction about the Jiangyin arc, so I decided to write one. I believe only those who have experienced utter despair can truly change.)
The author writes very well [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]. But I would like to make a small suggestion. There can be more psychological and detailed descriptions between each line of dialogue to make the structure fuller. Come on, come on [please update] Most of the long and difficult sentences are missing commas. The author should pay more attention to them.
The writing is very good, come on, the author, don't make it worse, my dear!