[Aihong: Diary of the Ten Years of City Destruction] Fanfiction, [Fang Zhiyou on the Jiangyin Line] [Progress Liulao Fang]
Only then did I know that you were dead, in Jiangyin City.
Before he died, he thought he would see Sister Yan'er. But that's not the case.
What he saw was a strange woman who had helped him and saved him.
But he seemed to have forgotten her.
What's her name?
Oh!
It seems to be called Lin Pianpian!
In his next life, he will try his best to atone for his sins. He wants to be a scholar.
(It's rare to see someone writing a fanfic about Jiangyin Line, so the author decided to write one. The author believes that only by experiencing a desperate situation can a person's heart be changed.)
Reader comments
The author writes very well [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]. But I would like to make a small suggestion. There can be more psychological and detailed descriptions between each line of dialogue to make the structure fuller. Come on, come on [please update]
Most of the long and difficult sentences are missing commas. The author should pay more attention to them.
The writing is very good, come on, the author, don't make it worse, my dear!
The author writes very well [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]. But I would like to make a small suggestion. There can be more psychological and detailed descriptions between each line of dialogue to make the structure fuller. Come on, come on [please update] Most of the long and difficult sentences are missing commas. The author should pay more attention to them.
The writing is very good, come on, the author, don't make it worse, my dear!