[Healing] [Urban] [Superpowers] [Suspense]
There is a girl only I can see.
From elementary school through college, she followed me for over a decade. At first, I thought she was just a figment of my imagination. Then, whenever an attack occurred, she would step in and kill the attacker.
Her name is Qingxue, and she is a gluttonous girl. A scalpel and a lollipop are the only ways we communicate.
My name is Lin Mo. I'm an orphan the entire world thinks is mentally ill.
And this world is far crazier than I ever imagined
Saint Lais Crystals have stolen the life force of most living things. Animals have awakened, and monsters roam everywhere. The Wu'an Bureau has been established, and the information cocoons have shattered. People put on their uniforms to kill monsters, their frail limbs growing strong as they begin to command the wind and rain.
A new era has officially begun. Everyone else is getting stronger, all fighting for the throne of world ruler.
But one person is always following close behind me.
On the second day after I checked in for my freshman year of college, I woke to find countless rat-men glaring at me with savage eyes. I wasn't worried about being bitten to death at all, because she would kill everything behind me.
But who is she, really?
Not bad, I can see that he is a newbie with ideas. But some emotions are written too hastily and could be a little more detailed. One thing that can be praised is that some characters appear for a short period of time, but they can be regarded as standing up.
Very few, I almost finished reading it very quickly, the evaluation is the same as the first floor, I have ideas, if the writing is good, it will definitely have a good impression, but unfortunately the writing is too fast, the rhythm is not care at all, I can't feel the emotion in it at all, there is a feeling that it is really just the need of the plot, not even reasonable, as if it is just some collected data, normally spread out in every corner on the paper Falling, just like it should be there, there is no reason, and there is no need... It looks as if I choked because I ate too fast. The plot really catches up with the previous ones before they are over. It feels like there is a blockage in the esophagus, and the plot passes hastily, as fast as the wind blowing by. I can only say that it is extremely rare to be able to write this kind of feeling (◎_◎;)
Not bad, the subject matter is quite novel
I am not an old bookworm, and this account is only a few months old after I changed my mobile phone number. However, I really like this book. I like the characters very much. The pace is fast, but it suits me very well, and the setting is very novel. Author, please don't give up. I think I'm a little short of this and that's why I keep reading 😢 As for other problems mentioned in the comment area, such as chaotic and unreasonable rhythm, I didn't feel it. Personal experience is the best criterion, right?
Wonderful, really wonderful
If it's a book written by a newcomer, I actually feel good about it, but you have to pay attention to details when writing, and some of the foreshadowing needs to be properly recycled 🤭