[Cure][City][Superpower][Suspense]
There is a girl who can only be seen by me.
From elementary school to college, she chased me for more than ten years. At first I just thought she was just imagining things, until every time an attack happened, she was able to kill them.
Her name is Qingxue, a greedy girl. A lancet and a lollipop are all the ways we communicate.
My name is Lin Mo, an orphan who is regarded as mentally ill by the whole world.
And this world is far crazier than I imagined——
The Saint Leth crystals stole the vitality of most living things, causing animals to awaken and monsters to run rampant. The Wuhan Bureau was established, the information cocoon burst, people put on team uniforms to kill monsters, fragile limbs became strong, and the ability to control the wind and rain began to take shape.
The new century has officially begun. Others are getting stronger and vying for the throne of the Lord of the World.
But there is always someone chasing behind me.
On the second day of the freshman year, when I woke up, I saw the ferocious eyes of countless rat people in front of me. I'm not worried about getting bitten to death because she's going to kill everything behind me.
But who is she?
Reader comments
Not bad, I can see that he is a newbie with ideas.
But some emotions are written too hastily and could be a little more detailed.
One thing that can be praised is that some characters appear for a short period of time, but they can be regarded as standing up.
Very few, I almost finished reading it very quickly, the evaluation is the same as the first floor, I have ideas, if the writing is good, it will definitely have a good impression, but unfortunately the writing is too fast, the rhythm is not care at all, I can't feel the emotion in it at all, there is a feeling that it is really just the need of the plot, not even reasonable, as if it is just some collected data, normally spread out in every corner on the paper Falling, just like it should be there, there is no reason, and there is no need... It looks as if I choked because I ate too fast. The plot really catches up with the previous ones before they are over. It feels like there is a blockage in the esophagus, and the plot passes hastily, as fast as the wind blowing by. I can only say that it is extremely rare to be able to write this kind of feeling (◎_◎;)
Not bad, the subject matter is quite novel
Wonderful, really wonderful
I am not an old bookworm, and this account is only a few months old after I changed my mobile phone number. However, I really like this book. I like the characters very much. The pace is fast, but it suits me very well, and the setting is very novel. Author, please don't give up. I think I'm a little short of this and that's why I keep reading [crying]
As for other problems mentioned in the comment area, such as chaotic and unreasonable rhythm, I didn't feel it. Personal experience is the best criterion, right?
If it's a book written by a newcomer, I actually feel good about it, but you have to pay attention to details when writing, and some of the foreshadowing needs to be properly recycled [laughing]
Not bad, I can see that he is a newbie with ideas. But some emotions are written too hastily and could be a little more detailed. One thing that can be praised is that some characters appear for a short period of time, but they can be regarded as standing up.
Very few, I almost finished reading it very quickly, the evaluation is the same as the first floor, I have ideas, if the writing is good, it will definitely have a good impression, but unfortunately the writing is too fast, the rhythm is not care at all, I can't feel the emotion in it at all, there is a feeling that it is really just the need of the plot, not even reasonable, as if it is just some collected data, normally spread out in every corner on the paper Falling, just like it should be there, there is no reason, and there is no need... It looks as if I choked because I ate too fast. The plot really catches up with the previous ones before they are over. It feels like there is a blockage in the esophagus, and the plot passes hastily, as fast as the wind blowing by. I can only say that it is extremely rare to be able to write this kind of feeling (◎_◎;)
Not bad, the subject matter is quite novel
Wonderful, really wonderful
I am not an old bookworm, and this account is only a few months old after I changed my mobile phone number. However, I really like this book. I like the characters very much. The pace is fast, but it suits me very well, and the setting is very novel. Author, please don't give up. I think I'm a little short of this and that's why I keep reading [crying] As for other problems mentioned in the comment area, such as chaotic and unreasonable rhythm, I didn't feel it. Personal experience is the best criterion, right?
If it's a book written by a newcomer, I actually feel good about it, but you have to pay attention to details when writing, and some of the foreshadowing needs to be properly recycled [laughing]