[Travel+Star Wars+Hot Blood+Wits]
The last thing Lin Zhan remembered was the ceiling of the cinema.
When I opened my eyes again, two suns hung in the sky, and the desert extended to an invisible place.
Tatooine.
He is a deep Star Wars fan, and he remembers every detail of this universe - every turning point, every tragedy, every person's ultimate fate. He knew who would die, who would fall, and who the seemingly kind old man was.
But knowing the plot and being able to survive are two completely different things.
He found shelter in Watteau's warehouse and met nine-year-old Anakin Skywalker. That child was still building a spaceship in the most difficult situation, and was still thinking about taking his mother away. Lin Zhan looked at him and made a decision: let this child remember him before he leaves Tatooine. Not as a stranger who had helped him, but as someone he could trust.
This difference will determine many things in more than ten years.
Qui-Gon Jinn took them all aboard the ship. Lin Zhan stood before the Jedi Council as a "powerful Force user of unknown origin". The Council distrusted him, and Palpatine took notice. Qui-Gon died. Before he died, he held his hand and said: Anakin is the chosen one, but being chosen does not mean that he will not go astray. This sentence became the fulcrum of Lin Zhan's actions in the next fourteen years.
Reversal of destiny, hold on to the last light before darkness engulfs the galaxy
Reader comments
Although the AI smell is very strong at the beginning, the storyline is well set up, the task analysis is accurate, and the game is very comfortable to watch. It is not deliberate, not forced, and interlocking. The protagonist does things for a reason and logic, and the development of things and inner changes are not abrupt. It deserves this five stars.
The author has thoroughly understood the core of Star Wars. He not only piles up iconic elements such as lightsabers and starships, but the choices faced by the characters and the inner struggle between the light and darkness of the Force are very consistent with the original characters. The writing is full of pictures, and the descriptions of large-scale battles in space and the confrontation between master and apprentice are full of tension. The original plot logic is smooth, and it is integrated into the Star Wars universe without any violation. This is a rare and high-quality Star Wars article. [Praise]
Tomato is currently the best Star Wars novel, one of the best. The protagonist's intelligence and strength are both online.
There are too few people writing about Star Wars, we must support them
Can you correct the repeated questions in Chapter 23?
I looked at the phone and put my hand on my trouser leg, pressing my thumb on the old callus in the tiger's mouth. Then suppress the thought. Hahahaha [laughing]
It would be nice if you could add quotation marks to the spoken sentences. It takes me a long time to tell whether it is the spoken words or the plot description.
There are too few Star Wars movies, so they must be praised [smile]
Well written, 5 stars for Star Wars
Interesting, but a bit too pretentious. It feels a bit deliberate. Encourage
Not bad, keep up the good work!
It is close to the original work, has this understanding, the writing is smooth, has its own ideas, and the logic is smooth. It just seems like a shortcoming of passion.
Very in-depth description, interesting and enjoyable to read.
A very nice Star Wars fanfic
I would like to make a small comment, please check the dialogue quotation marks. There are no dialogue quotation marks in chapters 27 to 29. I see this now. I don't know if there will be this problem in the future.
At present, I see that there are no quotation marks in Chapter 38. The plot is very exciting and beautiful. However, the character dialogue without quotation marks seems a bit tiring. Can the author change it?
I said Obi-Wan is the father and Lin Zhan is the mother. Do you understand?
The content is very well written, but it's still hard to find pure star war stories. It's so interesting that I love to read it. [Like][Like][Like]
Although the AI smell is very strong at the beginning, the storyline is well set up, the task analysis is accurate, and the game is very comfortable to watch. It is not deliberate, not forced, and interlocking. The protagonist does things for a reason and logic, and the development of things and inner changes are not abrupt. It deserves this five stars.
The author has thoroughly understood the core of Star Wars. He not only piles up iconic elements such as lightsabers and starships, but the choices faced by the characters and the inner struggle between the light and darkness of the Force are very consistent with the original characters. The writing is full of pictures, and the descriptions of large-scale battles in space and the confrontation between master and apprentice are full of tension. The original plot logic is smooth, and it is integrated into the Star Wars universe without any violation. This is a rare and high-quality Star Wars article. [Praise]
Tomato is currently the best Star Wars novel, one of the best. The protagonist's intelligence and strength are both online.
There are too few people writing about Star Wars, we must support them
Can you correct the repeated questions in Chapter 23?
I looked at the phone and put my hand on my trouser leg, pressing my thumb on the old callus in the tiger's mouth. Then suppress the thought. Hahahaha [laughing]
It would be nice if you could add quotation marks to the spoken sentences. It takes me a long time to tell whether it is the spoken words or the plot description.
There are too few Star Wars movies, so they must be praised [smile]
Well written, 5 stars for Star Wars
Interesting, but a bit too pretentious. It feels a bit deliberate. Encourage
Not bad, keep up the good work!
It is close to the original work, has this understanding, the writing is smooth, has its own ideas, and the logic is smooth. It just seems like a shortcoming of passion.
Very in-depth description, interesting and enjoyable to read.
A very nice Star Wars fanfic
I would like to make a small comment, please check the dialogue quotation marks. There are no dialogue quotation marks in chapters 27 to 29. I see this now. I don't know if there will be this problem in the future. At present, I see that there are no quotation marks in Chapter 38. The plot is very exciting and beautiful. However, the character dialogue without quotation marks seems a bit tiring. Can the author change it?
I said Obi-Wan is the father and Lin Zhan is the mother. Do you understand?
The content is very well written, but it's still hard to find pure star war stories. It's so interesting that I love to read it. [Like][Like][Like]