Is It a Crime to Practice as a Casual Cultivator? I'm a Genius!

So far, it looks pretty good, but the four-star rating is my score for the author's writing. The plot is too slow, the NPCs describe the protagonist in too many derogatory ways, and the protagonist fights back too little. Although I am also the type who doesn't care what others say about me, but I am not a sage. You keep scolding me over and over again, but you don't show any sign of it. The clay figure also feels angry. This is already a poisonous point according to the public opinion. Jane To put it simply, there is no excitement. Readers read the novel for the pleasure. Generally speaking, you set up a plot where others scold the protagonist to create excitement. At present, I don't think the author has done a good job in shaping this kind of plot. There is no excitement, or it is too slow and procrastinating. The result is that you write about others scolding you over and over again, but you don't do it, then you sacrifice the advancement of the plot and the reader's perception. And the most important point, why do you, the author, still give official spoilers? What did you tell us about the subsequent developments? I originally thought that this was what the protagonist could see, and then the protagonist would take a different path based on the information obtained from this plot. But you just gave me the outline, so what else should I read? ? ? ? I really have a question, author, what do you think? ? ? ? Can you answer me? ? ? I think the last four stars is a high rating for this book. Because I have high poison resistance, I can give you four stars, and also because I still have some expectations for your book. I hope you can let me change it to five stars, so I could only give three stars. Here I gave four stars. I hope the author has his own ingenuity and is not really limited to this.

The writing method is a bit clever. At the end of each chapter, a historical record of the protagonist of that chapter is added. The writing style is quite satisfactory, and the plot is worth reading. After all, it is a time-travel and immortal cultivation novel with similar system functions. The setting is not outstanding, but it is much better than Xiaobai's novel.

It feels good, the logic is smooth, the ideas are clear, the plot is not long-winded, and the writing is interesting. I have a good impression of the historical record at the end of the novel. I like it very much, but it contains some minor spoilers. I wonder if others can accept it? Come on (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much. The author hopes not to run away [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's a very good book. I wonder if it won't soar in the future. It can strengthen the origin of the world, make the nation prosperous, and establish the system of the Republic era. I feel pretty good. The rating of this book is too low. I hope all book friends will support it. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [fly kiss]

Thank you all the adoptive fathers for your support, and I also ask all the adoptive fathers for your support.

It feels similar to Ten Days Ending, and its commercial nature is relatively strong. The God of Drama is Gaokai Gaoqi, which was relatively lacking in the early days, and the number of individuals showed up. Kaishanzuo, or only has the category of women, which has been fully diluted now. Six Walnuts, for example, that Fang Xiu did not Gao Kai Gaoqi. The main thing is that the personality is confident and pretentious, and the book ends relatively flirtatiously, but it is suitable for starting a new book. The better the new book is, the more it is written, the wider it will be. In the early days, it was just supernatural. I didn't feel anything else, just the supernatural attraction. The one in the wheelchair has always been a cool article. Then either start something like Douyin, create audio comics AI, and synchronize multiple fields of animation efficiency creation, so that one can come out and respond. Wherever you make money, it is secondary. Find a good position, and others will help you. Untie the restrictions and relative restrictions. Harvest and make money faster than many. Either you have confidence, and if you can do it well, it will be all-round. Either keep up with the first echelon, the second echelon or even the fifth echelon, or just wait to shine. It makes no difference. A bad name is relatively attractive, and the emotions of the story are directly reflected. The better the writing depends on the degree of emotion, the book will be sublimated, and the name can be changed. Or the writing will be relatively fast, comfortable, and comfortable. It's very clear what kind of group reads and what kind of position they want. To what extent others are strong can easily achieve it. It depends on the rules. Don't worry about it. It's quite interesting. Cheating is the norm. Show it.

Don't give up, keep going. Author: At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat. The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Looks generally okay, saw 5 out of 2. But there are some records of Taoist masters before him. Although it seems confusing at first. But knowing it later is equivalent to spoiling it in advance. But if you spoil it in advance, to be honest, it will affect the subsequent plot too much. Because of the spoilers, we basically know that person's final achievements and direction. Like Zhao, basically all of his plot is known. As for whether there will be any poison after 52, I don't know, because I want to give up.

"It's been a long time since I encountered a novel that I was willing to sacrifice my sleep time to finish! It completely exceeded my expectations. Come on!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very well written, very good.

The writing is very good and there is nothing poisonous about it.

The content is okay, but the subject matter and form are innovative.

Come on, author, as long as it doesn't have too many poisonous points, it's a good novel. Why do you feel so frustrated when you have such a strong talent and fighting ability?

It feels good, keep up the good work

This book is worth reading

In other words, everyone has their own preferences. As for the ending of the chapter, the author has some characteristics.

I'm not a pure casual cultivator, I joined the sect, don't be fooled, the writing is not bad, it's just that I personally followed the protagonist and practiced as a casual cultivator all the way to the end.

It's pretty good in 🍅, not much traffic

It's okay, but there's too much nonsense in the comments at the end, and there's a lot less at the end.

Not bad, looking forward to what comes next

It's beautiful, but the author doesn't want it. Eunuch [eating melon] [eating melon] It looks good, keep up the good work, the author [eating melon]

It's well written and the rhythm is very well controlled.

The climax is coming soon, I'm so looking forward to it!

A good book, quite interesting

After listening to Chapter 65, I think it's okay so far. I'll give you a full star. That's why there are no multi-person conversations and readings. It's really hard to listen to the voice of the old man alone.

A pretty good book. I hope the author won't run away

Looks good, pretty good.

It was so good that I stayed up late to watch it

Good, cheers, author