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It looks good. The way it is written does not look like a newbie. The rhythm is well grasped and all the necessary information is included. Moreover, it is written about the unpopular combination of one soul and multiple bodies and the secret sect. It must be strongly supported. As for other problems, I feel that there is not much introduction to the origin of the clone. After the protagonist becomes a transcendent, he suddenly has a clone and there is no other foreshadowing, but these are innocuous.

How could a newcomer write such a good first book? Isn't the author a big boss from an external site who came here to fry fish? The plot conflicts come one after another, and it is impossible to stop. It is very interesting to watch. Especially the third death scene, the weird atmosphere was created extremely well, but after understanding the situation through the interpretation of the script, the second performance was quite funny. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The second death felt reckless. I just rushed in without any trump cards except for a resurrection and died. I felt a little bit poisonous. Then the clone Sorana appears inexplicably at the beginning, which is confusing. Also, the plot arrangement is a little deliberate. It feels like the protagonist is in trouble and is being hunted all the time. Isn't it like a little saint in a small church in a small border city? The protagonist of the book died long ago, and there was no time to be saved by the Church of Life. Finally, the classic time traveler identity feels useless. The above are all minor shortcomings, but other parts are still very well written.

It's a good book for a novice, but I can't adapt to the Tomato environment, and the author is a little unsure. The following is my personal opinion. If there are any mistakes or misunderstandings, please feel free to correct me. I like the author's own books very much. If the author thinks that my comments are wrong and I don't like them, I will delete them. The author's description of the atmosphere and scenes in the book is extremely detailed, highly contagious, and fascinating. He can quickly make people understand the scene, and he has meticulous control over the stage transitions. The setting is complete and excellent, not too huge, the size is just right, the imagination and ideas are rich, the design is reasonable and effective, like the curtain of the stage slowly opening, with an attractive magic. However... There are also shortcomings, but they are not outweighed by the good points. After all, I am a newcomer, and writing like this is already more than most people's first time. The overall rhythm is tight, but a little too fast. The plot advancement almost relies on death. There is not much behind-the-scenes feeling. In the early stage, Natsuki Aung looked good, but part of the plot of the protagonist was not logical. There are many foreshadowings, and the author prefers to write foreshadowings, but his ability to connect them is weak, contrary to the rhythm of the plot, and some places are a bit abrupt and unclear. It is not recommended to lose your mind and watch it, because there are indeed many things to think about, and the plot design is quite pleasing. However, the design and growth arc of the characters are not obvious. Some characters are too instrumental in their role, without any humanistic design, and some are infrequent and dispensable. I personally like to watch more emotional plots, regarding the arcs and personalities of the protagonists, so I specifically brought this up.

It's very comfortable to read, it doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer, it's very well written. The pace is okay, but the pace of the first three chapters is not particularly fast, and seems a bit boring in daily life. But after watching it for a while, I found that the world view is still okay (I am still curious about how many other ways there are), there are various guidance, restrictions, and crises, and there is also a sense of satisfaction. There are also foreshadowings that will make people curious. The protagonist is not an idiot. I personally think the protagonist is a normal person (even a little smart. However, the first time I went to the black market, it was still a bit reckless and undefended. But it is reasonable. After all, I don't know how dangerous it is.).

There is a cool title, but I feel a little frustrated. I died without any explanation. One question is not solved, and here comes another one. Please don't sell it. Also, speaking of being behind the scenes, I feel like the protagonist is the one on the bright side, that kind of feeling of being kept in the dark all the time, not knowing anything, and being guided by others.

Very beautiful, the author handles the details very well

Lao Zuo is well written, keep up the good work

Not bad, give me some encouragement

Delicious [got it] (Said a lot of compliments)

Western fantasy, suspense, so far I feel pretty good about it. It's just that the background introduction is a bit lacking.

I haven't watched much so far, but overall I've found gold. [Thinking] The writing and plot are quite good, just like KFC in the UK😋😋The delicious taste of fat sausage Oops, why did this book become private [rolls eyes], I hope the author can finish the next book🤪