Dressed as the Cannon Fodder Sister of Danmeiwen Xiaoshou

Not bad, the barrage is also relatively well written. I just don't like the part where women dress up as men, and I personally feel that it would be more interesting if the plot goes in the direction of an annoying barrage, hahaha

It feels pretty good so far, but in this theme, there is a short plot where the heroine disguises herself as a man. It seems to be to fit the plot, so I can barely accept it. However, if you add a barrage to this theme, the heroine disguises herself as a man, which is a niche highlight of mine. I wonder if there will be such a plot in the future? I hope the author can let me know. I quite like the current plot.

I only give 4 stars. The previous plot is very novel and worth watching. The author is also trying to improve according to readers' comments, reducing the presence of barrages. The plot of a woman disguising herself as a man did not appear in the later stage. However, in the latest chapter, Gu Qin once again rescued Wen Qing, but Wen Qing was The attitude of the savior is a bit disappointing, and it was his brother who took action first. Even if Wenqing's initial impression of Gu Qin was not very good, Gu Qin saved Wenqing twice, and his language was a bit aggressive. If he must highlight that Wenqing cares about his brother, he can use another method.

It seems like my brother is the male protagonist. I really like watching the interaction between the brother and sister.

The most delicious brother and sister I have seen here so far. The barrage in the early stage is indeed a bit annoying, and the content of the arguments is too much, which is annoying. The occasional supplementary settings are actually fine. I think the plot and emotional twists are actually quite clever, but the characters of the brother and sister are still not well developed. At present, it seems a bit thin and main-lined. It seems that the performance is shaped around a few character words, which does not make the characters three-dimensional. This leads to some plots that are confusing and disgusting. For example, the sister gets angry at Gu Qin who saved her life/the brother beats people many times without distinguishing right and wrong... Including the part where the woman disguises herself as a man is a bit weird. I hope the author can pay more attention to the logic of the characters' actions. Generally speaking, I still hope that the brother and sister will be 1v1he... Isn't it natural for the brother and sister to be together!

Very nice! ! ! ! ! Really, the character development of the protagonist is very good. I really like my brother and my brother and sister Jiujiu! ! ! ! ! I like it very much and the author will update soon! ! ! ! ! Although there is a plot of a woman disguising herself as a man, But❗️❗️❗️The author is ironic. I suggest you children to read this book and then judge it. I was a little dissuaded after reading the comments, but I didn't give up and wanted to judge it myself. I found it to my liking! ! ! ! ! The author will update it soon. I really want to read the ending (bushi) Can there be more male protagonists? That's all I am. Our female protagonist baby is a heartthrob. I have been deeply fascinated by it. My sister has a lot of strength and means. Oh, it's so cute.

Shocking and delicious. Among so many couples, I still like the elder brother the most. The elder brother has really done a lot for his younger sister. He loves his younger sister no matter in the fanfic or the original novel. I like to eat some brothers and sisters who go both ways. I saw someone in the comment section saying that it was ridiculous that the heroine disguised herself as a man to please her. I remember this thread was because the heroine had to do something, so she disguised herself as a man. Since she couldn't explain to her brother why she was there, she just changed her identity and did it. And because the brother looks different in front of the heroine, after being discovered by the heroine, the brother's behavior will change. And I think this writing is actually to ridicule the barrage's tendency to lick and lick male characters, but is unfriendly to female characters, right? It's just like this to women, but it turns out to be a different face to men?

The writing style and the feeling of this book are not like the romance that would appear in Tomato. Whether it is the logic, writing style or the characterization, it makes me think that it is a paid book that I read on Green River. The greatest success of a good-looking novel is the creation of characters. My favorite is the elder brother in it. The one who makes a wish must be the real one! I really like my brother (≧ω≦)/

I'm curious about the follow-up development and will keep reading. There are still too few people writing about this kind of subject. As the author said before, there are indeed a lot of barrages, and I am a pure-blooded BG person, so I felt a little uncomfortable watching it at the beginning, but it got much better later on. If Gu Qin was the male protagonist... I would feel very uncomfortable...[Face covering]

Originally the story was well written and the characters were well created, especially the younger sister, but I don't know if I was too sensitive, and the woman in the middle pretending to be a man was not very enjoyable to watch. I hope the author writes more about the female identity of baby girls. Fortunately, the author said that there will be less of this kind of plot in the later stage, so I can continue to follow it.

It looks good. I look forward to the future development. Brother and sister must be together forever. They are a pair made in heaven. Like like

It's really beautiful! I tied it in one go! ! ! The author should go and study the introduction and title of the book. After reading the introduction, I was a little doubtful about the content of the book. I didn't expect it to be so good-looking, with a tight pace, not a lot of redundant content, and a very exciting story progress. There were a lot of barrages at the beginning and then became less, which does not affect the viewing. The characters are not very annoying at the moment. The heroine is very cute and has her own ideas. The brother and sister are better than each other! ! ! My brother was born to be a mother and a husband for his sister. [Please take a closer look] Teacher, come on and write ah ah ah ah

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that it will flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard well and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. Goddess update soon.

I tell you in the most objective, straightforward, non-detoured and easy-to-understand terms! ! ! It's so pretty! Totally not enough. . . The author will update it soon😭😭😭😭I really want to see the next content. The characters are well developed! It's very three-dimensional and the logic is very clear. This is one of the few books I've read that doesn't require me to use my brain to recall the twists and turns of the story! Very beautiful. I beg you to go see it quickly! Absolutely awesome, I wonder if the author can update it ten times a day🌚🌚🌚👀 It's so beautiful. Now I just want to know the plot behind it and it makes me scratch my head, you know? I'm really curious about how He Yu's identity will be changed in the future. From the looks of it, I prefer the brother-sister group! ! ! Who knows two people who care about each other! ! At last! The author will update soon! !

Deducted one star for the recent strange plot. The setting of the protagonist is very novel. She is the only introverted heroine I like recently. She has a decisive, brave and strong character. The character of the male protagonist's brother is also a typical yandere with a kind background, gentle and considerate on the surface, and possessive on the inside. He is not bottomless and kind. This can be seen when he has nightmares about fan plots and wants to go in and beat the crooked version of himself. The redemption setting of both parties is very touching Later, at the man's house, he suddenly beat him. At least my brother's loss of control was in line with his emotions at that time. At that time, I was stimulated by that nightmare, and when I think about it again when I see someone who is not related to me, I just want to vent my anger. Therefore, the brother's anger was reasonable, and the sister did not protect her brother carelessly. But! The subsequent period of fighting Qin Qin was based on the fact that Qin Qin saved his sister (my brother is also an ordinary person, but not as fast as those with background. And at that time, my brother was still relieving his emotions and reacting to his sister.). On the basis of that, my brother became jealous and started fighting with others. And the heroine felt guilty after her brother hit someone for no reason last time, and now she directly helps her brother scold her savior? Even though the female protagonist was disgusted with Qin, the original male protagonist in the fanfic, she actually saved her twice. My brother beats up his benefactor, and then scolds the benefactor for being too harsh? (Even if there is such a plot, several NPCs would have to be arranged to serve as mouthpieces to help readers tell the readers that this shameless behavior is disgusting. The heroine reflects on the contradictions and doubts) The heroine's behavior is closely related to the white-eyed wolf and ungratefulness. Some people in the comments said that they don't like to watch Guan Guan. If you are in love, you can be completely unreasonable and not take your savior seriously. That is definitely not a correct view of love. There are problems with some plot settings. Only by telling them can the author know where there are problems with the plot and need to be modified. Even if you want to express your preference, you can express it in details, such as subconsciously blocking his view of his brother in the face of Qin's anger, etc., Instead of just siding with his brother unreasonably. Set up an OOC plot that makes the heroine lose her IQ. If the heroine doesn't have the ability to distinguish right from wrong, why should all the men fall in love with her?

I think the author's writing style is very good. It is indeed a bit strange that this writing style is rated 7.9. Is it possible that it is a problem with the cover design? Or was the part where the woman disguised herself as a man was a bit ridiculous? [But I think that paragraph may be to satirize many people nowadays who are too harsh on women, and it also allows us to see the current plight of female characters. Of course, I don't know if it is an exaggeration.] I actually reflected on this when I watched it, and I didn't pay much attention to the fact that it might violate its positioning tag. Then I think the characters are well created. Each character has distinct characteristics, but they are not single or thin. Especially the heroine baby is really super cute, adorable and smart. I am about to fall in love with her. And then again, I think the plot I have seen so far is very interesting. The interaction between brother and sister makes people feel warm and heartbroken. When I read different novels, the pictures and overall feelings formed in my mind will be different, and the style will be different (if I read a lot of novels, the picture formed in my mind will be very exaggerated and magnificent with the texture of comics). The feeling this novel gave me is that it is like warm water in the process of boiling water. I can't quite describe it. Then the picture I thought of was closer to real life, like the kind of picture that can be shot in a TV series, with a TV series quality [that is to say, I feel that this novel may be suitable for film and television] It's really beautiful [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses], I think the score of 7.9 Is a bit insufficient [currently in development]

It's super pretty. It's beautiful. I hope the heroine's body will recover soon.

It's really delicious. The author portrayed the heroine very well. Qingqing is really a soft and waxy little baby. Not only did they fall in love with the heroine, but I also fell in love with the heroine. Wen Fan and Sister Bao are really good at it. Have you read the introduction now? It is said to be 1v1, but I especially hope that the brother and sister will be 1v1. After all, the relationship between childhood sweethearts is separated from the original world. The brother and sister have a special status in my heart. No one can enter their relationship. In short, it is very delicious. I personally feel that the barrage is quite real. I doubt whether the author has witnessed it. Also, it depends on each person's acceptance of the matter of women dressing up as men. Meibao disguises herself as a man, which is actually acceptable. It is much better than the plot where the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist and finds out that she is a girl, and it will not appear later. Besides my brother, I can only accept Ji Qing. The descriptions of the other male protagonists are very confusing. I can't tell how much they like the female protagonist, and their behavior makes me a little disgusted. I don't have any special respect for the female protagonist, especially Dr. Fu. . . OS author, feel free to use it as you like

I support Shuang Wen. My brother is so gentle and refreshing. I have seen too many plots where kindness is repaid with hatred. It is really rare.

It's super good-looking. Currently, my favorite is my brother and uncle [Blow Kiss], one of whom will be the eldest and the other will be the second eldest. There are also many people who mind the fact that the heroine disguises herself as a man, but I think it's okay. When I saw this, I thought of "Time Beats Women". The author must be trying to be ironic. This was also the case in a novel I read before. If the heroine was inserted into the plot, she would be insulted and disgusted by the barrage, but the girls who dressed as men accepted the barrage well and started to complain.

It's quite good-looking. I really like the brother-sister cps. It's a pair of cps with great flavor. The plot is pretty good too. The only catch (in my opinion) is that the heroine disguises herself as a man to save her male counterpart because of the barrage's favorability. It's acceptable because the heroine is doing it for her own benefit, but there's no need for her to disguise herself as a man. Her own attributes are straight. I hope that if there are vests in the future, it will be better if they are all women.

Shocking, delicious and refreshing... Sir, the writing is really good. Men get nervous after reading it, and women read it for menopause. This article is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It describes the longing for the widow and the feeling of being unable to love the five-guarantee households in the village. Summary: The teacher's article is not an article, but a Renaissance The roses in the church bells during the period are the lights of thousands of houses in the dim night, the chrysanthemums that offer fragrance in the fields, the red camellias that are blooming at the end of winter, the chirping of cicadas outside the classroom, and my destiny-like Aphrodite in the best midsummer. The spring water on the banks of the Seine is not as good as you, and the roses in Bulgaria are not as good as you. You are a divine gift, given to me by God to save me, so that my soul can be cleansed and sublimated. You are a beam of light in my dim sublimation. You illuminate my dark life. You fill my black and white world with colors and give me new life.

The heroine's starting character is very good, the subject matter is also very novel, the heroine is also very cute, very cute, except for the original content and barrage in the fanfic that are a bit harmful, everything else is very good. In the later stage, you will know that the character who harmed the heroine in the fanfic may not be so bad in nature, but is just affected by the plot. But in the later stages, the heroine's character was a bit broken, and so was her brother's. First, my brother fell ill at Fu's house. I admit that Fu may not be so smart and didn't know how to send the heroine to the hospital when he was sick, but essentially he still saved the heroine's brother and called a doctor. As a result, the brother had a dream. Regardless of whether it was true or not, he immediately started beating Fu. I don't think my brother, a person who cares about the heroine, would beat someone in front of him. The heroine suddenly broke into Fu's house. This was not explained later. Brother, since he hit someone first, it was his fault. The heroine, regardless of right or wrong, turned to her brother. Well, maybe it was because his brother had taken care of him since he was a child. It is understandable that the heroine is more concerned about this. But later on, why did my brother still beat him after Gu saved the heroine? The heroine knew that I saved him, so why did she continue to fight against her brother? It was obviously my brother who hit him first. It can be said that the heroine is closer to her brother, but there is no need to specifically add the word "sarcastic". Moreover, Gu Ye saved him twice, so it was probably a life-saving grace. Later, my brother actually thought that Gu had kissed the heroine without her knowledge. What was going on? According to the circumstances at that time, everyone must have artificial respiration. And why do so many men come to save the heroine? There are only a few people here who have helped the heroine. Why did the heroine appear in the casino later? (┯_┯) Also, Xu is a very good kid, why is he suddenly targeting the heroine again? And the subsequent barrage scenes have become less and less. Some people actually say that Gu is a bad guy and something will happen to the heroine every time she meets him. It's really funny. I don't know what's going on behind the scenes.

Brother and sister 99999 Needless to say anything else. Brother's character is so good. Brother and sister are the best match. Teacher, please give me more brother roles. Five stars.

It's very delicious. Regarding the comment section about a woman disguising herself as a man, it was only once. The author must have seen everyone's complaints. This kind of plot has never happened again in the future. The setting is really interesting. I recommend everyone to read it. The more you look at the back, the characters of each person become more three-dimensional. It's delicious😋

The emotions are delicate, the writing is also very good, the character of the female protagonist is also very good, and the male protagonist is also interesting. Highly recommended! ! ! ! !

It's super good-looking. The male and female protagonists have the best relationship in the world. The male protagonist is gentle and only cares about his younger sister. The female protagonist is always the first to save her brother and only cares about her brother. He is also very smart. The other male characters are also very three-dimensional and gradually become attracted to the female protagonist. The design is very reasonable and has dual personalities, including a arrogant puppy and some. A sane doctor, a sickly smiling mask with psychological trauma, and one who doesn't appear angry but is actually very smart. It's exciting to have a confrontation with the heroine. The system is also very powerful and doesn't hold you back. There is no female rivalry. The writing is super good. I'm just digging for gold. I hope the author will continue to make more. Thank you for your support.

OMG, this is such a delicious article. Two little bitter gourds, a brother and a sister, hug each other to keep each other warm. The perfect combination of the brother's control and the sister's control. It's so fragrant. He smells like a male ghost. Hehe, teacher! Not enough to eat! !

Ahhhhh, who knows? This article is really good! Our heroine is warm! She is also very cute! Although sometimes she is a bit naughty! But in front of her brother, Wen Fan is a cute little white rabbit! The contrast is so cool! Our brother Wen Fan also loves his sister very much! The daily life between them is also very warm! Brother I'm also very attentive! It's beautiful! I read this article! The writing is also very delicate! It doesn't look boring at all! Those comments, yes, some of them I really... Forget it, let's not talk about it! In short, this article is very beautiful, very gentle and warm! ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Except for the scene where the woman disguises herself as a man, I don't really like it, but everything else is really good! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]