Pan-Asia's Journey to Another World

Apart from using AI to write a lot of nonsense, there are no shortcomings, and the plot and themes are good. Again, AI does a lot of harm to people. The biggest impact of AI is on the reading experience. It requires a few hundred words to describe an appearance, but it can be written in just a few sentences. AI also likes to use metaphors, which are rather biased and useless nonsense. AI just makes up the number of words. Okay, I am writing this review when I have read Chapter 10. If it weren't for AI, this novel would be better than most of the top Tomato lists (in my opinion)

An excellent book, with a very interesting subject matter, industrial elbow magic, and World War I-level technology. The author updates it a lot every day. The disadvantage is that there are slight traces of AI (but it is already restrained). In addition, I personally feel that the fight plot is a bit draggy, so I skipped it directly. It seemed that I was busy, but the plot did not progress [face covering] Oh, by the way, the author's description of local public opinion is lacking. The description of the local reaction after the local attack was actually only a high-level meeting, where they discussed whether the expansion of armaments would affect the economy. Once the footage of the village that was actually attacked earlier is revealed, society will explode, okay? Anyone who claims that military spending cannot be increased does not take human life seriously. In addition, the explosion of production capacity after entering a state of combat readiness is also a must-experience part of this kind of novel. I hope the author will not focus all his energy on the frontline fighting [Thoughts]

The subject matter is very good, and the author has put a lot of thought into the balance of combat power. It is not a situation where one side is mindlessly pushing the other side. It is different from simply receiving magic bonuses when a person travels through time and turns in the rear. This is a coexistence of threats and opportunities. Everyone in the society knows that they have traveled through time, and they can use their strength as a whole without thinking about hiding it from other forces in the original world.

The Western Fantasy and the coalition government are absolutely a perfect combination. They are smart and interesting. They fully demonstrate the political quality and diplomatic concepts of the government, and the opponent is not too weak. It has the feeling of combining magic and technology, and does not deviate from the world view.

The subject matter is quite novel and it is a good seedling. There are two major problems: First, there seems to be some typos, and the last sentence of some paragraphs is missing halfway through writing, which seriously affects the perception. I hope the author can check and correct it after finishing it. Second, it feels a bit watery, that is, the information density is too low. I hope the author can arrange the plot more compactly. Also, it is best to slightly modify the area where AI is used instead of putting it up directly, otherwise it will always feel weird. Generally speaking, the future is promising, and it is good food to work hard to improve.

It does have the flavor of AI. But that's not a big problem, and the general direction is still well controlled. It looks very cool. It doesn't have the petty and coquettish feeling of other countries' time-traveling novels.

It's okay. In some places, it's obvious that it was written by AI, and there are a lot of typos. But considering that the subject matter is quite novel to me and I like it, I give it four stars. There aren't too many flaws at the moment. After reading this book for so long, let me summarize the advantages and disadvantages of this book. The advantage is that the ideas of this book are quite novel and the author is quite persuasive. It's quite a lot (although it's said to be endless) and it's nothing compared to the following shortcomings [face covering] The disadvantage is that the traces of AI are a bit serious (although it is relatively good compared to before), and as mentioned above, what has become water is that it is becoming more and more water. I suspect that the author has no outline at all. He just writes whatever comes to his mind. There is almost no main plot, and it is difficult to distinguish between priorities. In my opinion, the supporting characters take up too much space. Moreover, in this book, Pan Asia has been severely weakened, what has happened to its intelligence, and its military strength has also been seriously weakened. There are also some shortcomings that I won't explain one by one. Attached: I really can't read anymore. In my opinion, this book has a good choice of subject matter.

What's going on? The updates are becoming less and less, so the author should not languish. Today's book review area is decadent and full of traitors and sycophants, which is why there is a lack of updates. If the author diligently writes ten thousand words every day, the traitor will be afraid and retreat, and the gentleman will be delighted. This achievement is enough to make Yao and Shun praise him as good! I heard that when a calf is born in a sheepfold, and when it grows up, it behaves like a sheep. You are at the starting point, the keyboard is always stuck, but you lose the enthusiasm for renewal. Is it reasonable? The prosperity of the starting point is to inherit the rituals and skills of the ancestors. If you stop updating, you will not be able to release the pressure, which will lead to exhaustion. Is this not to abandon the basic and pursue the weak? If this is the case, great disaster is bound to happen! The reason why Bai Jin has received tens of thousands of manuscript fees is that he is willing to listen to the words of upright gentlemen and will not be harmed by villains. Those who fight on the street have no royalties and are even looked down upon by their girlfriends. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you will think deeply about the difference between them. One person can cry bitterly for the author, and six people can breathe a sigh of relief for the author. Since ancient times, when doing things, the words are often passionate, but if they are not passionate, the heart of the person cannot be acted upon. Strong words are close to slander. The author should think carefully about the rights and wrongs of this matter. The authors who missed updates, delayed updates, or failed to update before they could hurt themselves were lost in the torrent of works, leaving only subsequent authors to be injured. Later authors were injured and did not learn from them, which in turn made future authors feel hurt.

Although I read in the reviews that there are some shortcomings, I didn't find many. I think the writing is pretty good, better than average. It is rare to see an article written on this subject that can be called a group portrait, and has the flavor of a group portrait. The motivations of the characters are basically understandable. There are arrogant enemies and rational enemies, but there are no enemies that are inexplicably written like a opera. The only thing is that the update was a bit slow before, but it's much better recently.

The setting is very interesting, and the time point when the story really begins is the twelfth year after the time travel. This design can avoid a lot of trivial narratives in the early stage and start to enjoy it directly. There are just some places where the pace is a bit slow, such as the first contact. I think the author wanted to portray specific characters, but people who read this subject must want to see modern machines crushing enemies or the technological shock that modern technology brings to the indigenous people. It feels very dragging to explain this in three chapters. And having too many modifiers makes it feel flashy, a bit like AI. Overall, it is highly recommended, but the writing method needs to be further optimized.

If you like to read stories from other worlds and are not the type to have fun with your brain, then I highly recommend it. This book is very realistic, and many details can withstand scrutiny, rather than just starting to push things aside. My writing skills are improving all the time, and I feel that I can read it more and more. The AI ​​flavor of the first two chapters is very strong. Although it is a long discussion, there is not much content (I mainly read hand rubbing, so I can feel it immediately). It gradually gets better after that, and the viewing experience will be much more comfortable. All in all, highly recommended. Don't read the first two big chapters in detail. You can basically understand what you are doing by just reading them.

It's good-looking, and it's a confrontation between two systems (I personally feel that the continental war here will not be fought again after a nuclear bomb is dropped, or there will be no large-scale confrontation. Later, it is estimated that humans are an alliance, and the outer gods are probably the ones that need to be resolved). There is no protagonist in this book. The country or the alliance is the protagonist. There are also expectations for space-based weapons [smile] [smile] [smile] Currently, we only see satellites being prepared. In fact, there are quite a lot of this kind of subject matter, but the writing is a mess. The author's writing is okay. It is right that no one person should be the protagonist, otherwise the taste of this kind of subject matter will change.

It is very good-looking. It can not only see the scenes between the original East Asian countries, but also prevent the monotony caused by too many different worlds. At the same time, there are also many scenes of East Asian unity and different worlds, allowing readers to watch novel content. The shortcoming is that the update frequency is too low, which makes it unbearable to watch.

A reasonable fiction, a passionate era, in fact, I can write about using scientific methods to study magic, and the invasion of magic by evil gods. There are many interesting scientific and technological discoveries. The author can watch the documentary to witness history.

The subject matter is novel and there are no logical problems, but the writing style is really too AI-flavored. I don't exclude AI writing, but please ask the author to change to a good big model, at least don't use bean bags🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

It's pretty but not mindless. The grand struggle between the two worlds is well written. In order to balance, some abilities of each other are banned, and the bans are very reasonable.

The creativity is quite good, it would be better if the writing could use some snacks. AI assistance is very useful and allows many non-professional writers to realize their ideas. However, I still hope that the author can polish it more so that I can read ten lines at a glance and skip the procrastinating parts. However, the listening experience is particularly poor.

The writing is good, but I always feel that there are still some problems in some aspects. I only see two lines now, and I feel more emphasis on the second line, and the gap between the two is too long. The descriptions should be exchanged every two or three pictures, otherwise it will be difficult to connect them again.

The first grading is definitely not man-machine or dragging, you can just look at a few books on my bookshelf. The evaluation of this book is: wonderful! If you like to watch the conflict between the western fantasy forces and the earth forces, you must not miss it. Although there may be some traces of AI questioning, the flaws are not concealed. As long as the content and the author's thoughts and ideas can be presented, it is good. At present, my evaluation of this book is ramming, and can there be more updates from the author? Please, please.

It looks really good. Using a system close to three wars to fight a civilization around one war, the upper limit of both sides is basically the same. In terms of the lower limit, Southeast Asia has the bottom. The performance of a single country will be very different from the previous one [Chigua]

Especially beautiful, the epic modern steel torrent conquers the magical world! It's so exciting that I can't bear to listen to the book. I have to read every word carefully, and then give likes and comments to every interesting paragraph [blowing kisses]. Why is it only rated 7.1? Damn it! I missed this novel many times...

I have read many novels with similar themes, and this one is quite good. Although I read reviews that AI is useful, I do often find some flaws. But in my opinion, in the gold-digging environment of Tomato History, if you can find a novel whose subject matter suits your appetite and the overall plot framework has no major problems, the above problems are not a big deal [face covering] Although, I still hope that the author will get better and better [exploration]

I'm sorry for giving such a comment. I have read the latest chapter. Maybe I didn't read it carefully, but I personally feel that something is not quite right. Because of the economic crisis, we haven't let go of exploring other worlds. This is something I can't understand – you think about danger when you are in peace, so what do you think about when you are in danger? When our country was developing the atomic bomb, the country was very poor, but it gave its full support to the research and development of the atomic bomb. There is also the anti-war trend. Is this possible in our country? I don't know if I'm considered a so-called right-winger, but I personally feel that after traveling to another world, the country will not only not disarm due to the economic crisis, but will also promote national war preparations. The national ideological trend will also rush towards actively exploring other worlds and facing unknown threats. "Offensive defense", and the government will publicize the "Manual for Dealing with Abnormal Situations in Another World"-if any abnormal situation is discovered, it should be reported immediately. I suddenly remembered something. The current situation of our country is the contradiction between the people's ever-growing good life and unbalanced and inadequate development. If the whole country traveled to another world, I don't know if I am the only one who thinks so - wouldn't our citizens want to use the resources of another world to solve this contradiction? I hope the author's results will get better and better.

It's awesome. There's no problem with the AI. My reading experience is very good. There is no irritating plot where serious meetings are described as meetings in the village. The war scenes processed by AI definitely exceed 90% of similar novels. The logic of the plot is also quite reasonable. I don't understand why some people react irritably when they see AI.

The current impression is quite good, but the author can learn more about the response speed of the modern army. The enemy has reached Maozi territory, and the first batch of vdv support can reach the front line within a few hours.

I can tell it using AI, and I can even guess the type of it, but don't tell me, the writing is really not that bad. It's easy to fall asleep just listening [covers face]

Super ⏰ It's quite novel to travel with my super brother. I hope I can keep doing it and don't give up. [Sending my heart] [laughing]

It's okay. The most valuable thing is that both sides have a balance. I don't want to push the time-traveling side all the way in some novels. Although it's fun, it's easy to get bored after reading too much.

I really think it's very interesting to watch, but there are too many details and the emphasis is not well controlled, which can easily make people bored. However, the overall plot is very attractive and it's still enjoyable to watch.

Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very beautiful.