Pan-Asia's Journey in Another World

Apart from using AI to write a lot of nonsense, there are no shortcomings, and the plot and themes are good. Again, AI does a lot of harm to people. The biggest impact of AI is on the reading experience. It requires a few hundred words to describe an appearance, but it can be written in just a few sentences. AI also likes to use metaphors, which are rather biased and useless nonsense. AI just makes up the number of words. Okay, I am writing this review when I have read Chapter 10. If it weren't for AI, this novel would be better than most of the top Tomato lists (in my opinion)

An excellent book, with a very interesting subject matter, industrial elbow magic, and World War I-level technology. The author updates it a lot every day. The disadvantage is that there are slight traces of AI (but it is already restrained). In addition, I personally feel that the fight plot is a bit draggy, so I skipped it directly. It seemed that I was busy, but the plot did not progress 🤦 Oh, by the way, the author's description of local public opinion is lacking. The description of the local reaction after the local attack was actually only a high-level meeting, where they discussed whether the expansion of armaments would affect the economy. Once the footage of the village that was actually attacked earlier is revealed, society will explode, okay? Anyone who claims that military spending cannot be increased does not take human life seriously. In addition, the explosion of production capacity after entering a state of combat readiness is also a must-experience part of this kind of novel. I hope the author will not focus all his energy on the frontline fighting [Thoughts]

The subject matter is very good, and the author has put a lot of thought into the balance of combat power. It is not a situation where one side is mindlessly pushing the other side. It is different from simply receiving magic bonuses when a person travels through time and turns in the rear. This is a coexistence of threats and opportunities. Everyone in the society knows that they have traveled through time, and they can use their strength as a whole without thinking about hiding it from other forces in the original world.

I like it very much in the front, but there is too much pen and ink used to write about local forces in the back. Just like when I came to watch Journey to the West, Tang Seng and his disciples just went through the motions at the beginning. The remaining forty minutes show me the development and changes of the small country after they left. Although it is also influenced by Pan Asia. But I came here to see Pan-Asians. For the negative added value of industry, ocean freighters came, and 60,000 tons of industrial products were exchanged for 10,000 tons of iron ore. You don't use raw materials when producing industrial products, right?

The Western Fantasy and the coalition government are absolutely a perfect combination. They are smart and interesting. They fully demonstrate the political quality and diplomatic concepts of the government, and the opponent is not too weak. It has the feeling of combining magic and technology, and does not deviate from the world view.

It does have the flavor of AI. But that's not a big problem, and the general direction is still well controlled. It looks very cool. It doesn't have the petty and coquettish feeling of other countries' time-traveling novels.

The subject matter is quite novel and it is a good seedling. There are two major problems: First, there seems to be some typos, and the last sentence of some paragraphs is missing halfway through writing, which seriously affects the perception. I hope the author can check and correct it after finishing it. Second, it feels a bit watery, that is, the information density is too low. I hope the author can arrange the plot more compactly. Also, it is best to slightly modify the area where AI is used instead of putting it up directly, otherwise it will always feel weird. Generally speaking, the future is promising, and it is good food to work hard to improve.

It's okay. In some places, it's obvious that it was written by AI, and there are a lot of typos. But considering that the subject matter is quite novel to me and I like it, I give it four stars. There aren't too many flaws at the moment.

If you like to read stories from other worlds and are not the type to have fun with your brain, then I highly recommend it. This book is very realistic, and many details can withstand scrutiny, rather than just starting to push things aside. My writing skills are improving all the time, and I feel that I can read it more and more. The AI ​​flavor of the first two chapters is very strong. Although it is a long discussion, there is not much content (I mainly read hand rubbing, so I can feel it immediately). It gradually gets better after that, and the viewing experience will be much more comfortable. All in all, highly recommended. Don't read the first two big chapters in detail. You can basically understand what you are doing by just reading them.

Although I read in the reviews that there are some shortcomings, I didn't find many. I think the writing is pretty good, better than average. It is rare to see an article written on this subject that can be called a group portrait, and has the flavor of a group portrait. The motivations of the characters are basically understandable. There are arrogant enemies and rational enemies, but there are no enemies that are inexplicably written like a opera. The only thing is that the update was a bit slow before, but it's much better recently.