[Original heroine Chloe Dursley] [True Gryffindor] [Micro-heartthrob] Life after you become Harry's cousin
The Dursleys had twins, and Harry had a cousin.
You will follow Chloe Dursley - Xia - into every daily life of Hogwarts: the long table in the Great Hall, the fire in the common room, the restricted area of the library, the howling wind on the Quidditch pitch. It will take you deeply into the adventures of the protagonist group. The protagonist has both wisdom and courage, will make mistakes, and is a growth-oriented heroine.
The war will come, but until then, they will spend their days eating and fighting.
Take your time, this is a pure Hogwarts journey, starting from Privet Drive slowly
Welcome aboard, life is sweet. (This article has a main cp, and there may be some short if line cps in the future.) The original intention of writing this article was that Hermione needed a female best friend in a small group, hoping that someone could accompany Harry through that difficult childhood time (so maybe the pace of Privet Drive in the early stage was slow, and Aunt Petunia was not washed, but she still loves Summer the most. Babies who don't like to watch Privet Drive can jump to the second volume with one click and go to school directly)
Reader comments
Ahhhhhh! I am completely moved by Penny's love for the heroine. I obviously hate the magical world so much, but just because my daughter wants to go, I endured all the discomfort and reluctance, thought of all aspects, and carefully prepared everything my daughter might need. The mother-daughter relationship between Penny and the heroine is really great. Penny may not have been a great aunt, but she was the best mother.
This book reads slowly and gently. Slowly tells the psychological activities of the protagonist and key characters in detail, and acts from the heart of the characters. Penny prided herself on being decent and normal. Therefore, Harry, an alien in the normal world, the only child left by her strange sister, made her suffer. But her sister died in a place where she could never go to the weird space, leaving only one child behind, a "Multi" with weird genes.
The reason is that the language is gentle. I only read the beginning and could not feel the plot design. The language gave me a different feeling. Like an essay, it's okay to talk about your random thoughts, have fun, and read quietly, but it's not a good idea for fast-moving consumer goods like online novels. However, everyone has their own imagination about Harry Potter. Writing is a kind of sharing, and there is no distinction between good and bad.
A 350,000-word serial, with five stars for encouragement.
I really like Petunia and Quirrell in this story, so it's a bit of a shame that their scenes quickly diminished after the plot point.
The story of the second grade is a bit confusing - I mean, I can't figure out the author's intention in writing. Maybe he wants Xia to change his habit of not relying on his peers? But the writing is a little unclear.
The story of the third grade is in progress. Perhaps because Xia feels that this year's story is perfect enough, he has no intention of making changes to the plot.
People started dying in the fourth grade. I don't know what will happen next, but I'm looking forward to it.
Ps: Xia is excellent, Harry is excellent. Long live!
I feel that the writing is very delicate and the writing is not abrupt. It just feels like it should happen this way.
It's beautiful, has a slight sense of sadness, and many descriptions are very detailed.
The emotions are very delicate, and there are real psychological and emotional descriptions of each character, making everything happen naturally. It is these details that make people know that the characters are not empty.
They have their own troubles and they are living
Nice. Tasty. It can be seen that every character is carefully portrayed, and the daily life of Privet Drive is especially delicious.
I stayed up late and finished reading the Privet Drive part. Petunia is really good.
Repelling magic is an unsolvable problem left by the mother's generation, and having an extra child is even more of a burden. However, the feelings brought by blood cannot be let go, and Petunia still acquiesces to Harry's existence, and even acquiesces to the children getting along with Harry in their own way, whether it is Dali's bullying or Xia's overtures.
Penny's sense of conflict is the core of her character. She rejects magic but longs for it, wants to be separated from magic but remembers the "dementors" she only talked about many years ago, loves Lily but wants to cut off contact with her, hates Harry but acquiesces to her children's friendship with him. Her reason told her that she should choose the "normal" path, but her emotions kept pulling her on another path.
Ah, I really like this kind of contradictory person. It's so interesting to explore their inner world.
The writing is very good. Why is there no one here? Come and read it. Although I have just read six chapters of the content, the writing is really good.
Author, you are my goddess...
I love this writing!
Not bad, pretty good-looking. Recommend
Good looking. Recommended.
It looks good, it must be given five stars.
The writing is very good, I really like the description from multiple perspectives, please give it a try
Not bad, not bad, eh, but I feel like the protagonist still doesn't interact enough with Harry, and I'm not full. I read the author's previous comments and there's an original character, so I'm quite looking forward to it.
The author's writing is excellent
First, I would like to give five stars to my stay at Penny's house. It was very warm and the characters were much more three-dimensional.
Very very delicate
There is a slight feeling of be, and I am looking forward to the ending scene where Penny is hugged and crying (no)
The writing is very close to the original work. You are really good at writing!
The mental journey is described very delicately
The author's emotions are very delicate.
Very delicate writing. I hope more people can read it.
Xia and Harry are just the best! Thanks to the teacher for the story, I look forward to the follow-up [send heart][send heart]
I saw the latest chapter, the emotional description is natural, and it is not worse than the popular HP I have read before. I hope it can keep this status, it will definitely become popular.
Already finished the first volume. Five-star praise, encourage the author. The character descriptions are very descriptive. The feelings are particularly delicate. The plot development is very reasonable.
Delicious! Very delicately written. I didn't avoid anything very deliberately, and I'm looking forward to the plot behind it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
The plot of those chapters of Quirrell really brought tears to Kucu's eyes [crying][crying][crying]
Ahhhhhh! I am completely moved by Penny's love for the heroine. I obviously hate the magical world so much, but just because my daughter wants to go, I endured all the discomfort and reluctance, thought of all aspects, and carefully prepared everything my daughter might need. The mother-daughter relationship between Penny and the heroine is really great. Penny may not have been a great aunt, but she was the best mother.
This book reads slowly and gently. Slowly tells the psychological activities of the protagonist and key characters in detail, and acts from the heart of the characters. Penny prided herself on being decent and normal. Therefore, Harry, an alien in the normal world, the only child left by her strange sister, made her suffer. But her sister died in a place where she could never go to the weird space, leaving only one child behind, a "Multi" with weird genes. The reason is that the language is gentle. I only read the beginning and could not feel the plot design. The language gave me a different feeling. Like an essay, it's okay to talk about your random thoughts, have fun, and read quietly, but it's not a good idea for fast-moving consumer goods like online novels. However, everyone has their own imagination about Harry Potter. Writing is a kind of sharing, and there is no distinction between good and bad.
A 350,000-word serial, with five stars for encouragement. I really like Petunia and Quirrell in this story, so it's a bit of a shame that their scenes quickly diminished after the plot point. The story of the second grade is a bit confusing - I mean, I can't figure out the author's intention in writing. Maybe he wants Xia to change his habit of not relying on his peers? But the writing is a little unclear. The story of the third grade is in progress. Perhaps because Xia feels that this year's story is perfect enough, he has no intention of making changes to the plot. People started dying in the fourth grade. I don't know what will happen next, but I'm looking forward to it. Ps: Xia is excellent, Harry is excellent. Long live!
I feel that the writing is very delicate and the writing is not abrupt. It just feels like it should happen this way.
It's beautiful, has a slight sense of sadness, and many descriptions are very detailed.
The emotions are very delicate, and there are real psychological and emotional descriptions of each character, making everything happen naturally. It is these details that make people know that the characters are not empty. They have their own troubles and they are living
Nice. Tasty. It can be seen that every character is carefully portrayed, and the daily life of Privet Drive is especially delicious. I stayed up late and finished reading the Privet Drive part. Petunia is really good. Repelling magic is an unsolvable problem left by the mother's generation, and having an extra child is even more of a burden. However, the feelings brought by blood cannot be let go, and Petunia still acquiesces to Harry's existence, and even acquiesces to the children getting along with Harry in their own way, whether it is Dali's bullying or Xia's overtures. Penny's sense of conflict is the core of her character. She rejects magic but longs for it, wants to be separated from magic but remembers the "dementors" she only talked about many years ago, loves Lily but wants to cut off contact with her, hates Harry but acquiesces to her children's friendship with him. Her reason told her that she should choose the "normal" path, but her emotions kept pulling her on another path. Ah, I really like this kind of contradictory person. It's so interesting to explore their inner world.
The writing is very good. Why is there no one here? Come and read it. Although I have just read six chapters of the content, the writing is really good.
Author, you are my goddess...
I love this writing!
Not bad, pretty good-looking. Recommend
Good looking. Recommended.
It looks good, it must be given five stars.
The writing is very good, I really like the description from multiple perspectives, please give it a try
Not bad, not bad, eh, but I feel like the protagonist still doesn't interact enough with Harry, and I'm not full. I read the author's previous comments and there's an original character, so I'm quite looking forward to it.
The author's writing is excellent
First, I would like to give five stars to my stay at Penny's house. It was very warm and the characters were much more three-dimensional.
Very very delicate
There is a slight feeling of be, and I am looking forward to the ending scene where Penny is hugged and crying (no)
The writing is very close to the original work. You are really good at writing!
The mental journey is described very delicately
The author's emotions are very delicate.
Very delicate writing. I hope more people can read it.
Xia and Harry are just the best! Thanks to the teacher for the story, I look forward to the follow-up [send heart][send heart]
I saw the latest chapter, the emotional description is natural, and it is not worse than the popular HP I have read before. I hope it can keep this status, it will definitely become popular.
Already finished the first volume. Five-star praise, encourage the author. The character descriptions are very descriptive. The feelings are particularly delicate. The plot development is very reasonable.
Delicious! Very delicately written. I didn't avoid anything very deliberately, and I'm looking forward to the plot behind it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The plot of those chapters of Quirrell really brought tears to Kucu's eyes [crying][crying][crying]