I Just Want to Be a Passerby. Mistress, Please Don't Come Over.

It seems to be pretty good so far, as long as it has a single female protagonist. If you see multiple female protagonists, you won't watch it no matter how high the rating is or how interesting the subject matter is. I would rather watch a movie without a female protagonist than watch a movie with multiple female protagonists. I have passed the age group that likes to watch the protagonist start a harem. This kind of campus sweet story about daily love is also quite good. It does not seem to be a rapid development from the beginning. The step-by-step relationship between the two parties is also quite reasonable. There is no too many stomachache plots where the male protagonist wears a book to protect himself. The main reason is that I am curious about where the author will end the story. Generally speaking, it will end with marriage, but I still hope that the author can continue writing like "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago", where the two of them join hands until they have children and grandchildren and live a peaceful life.

It's pretty good to watch, but you have to go through at least fifteen chapters before it's good to watch. The male protagonist is too stubborn. He thinks too much about his own life and is too afraid of the original male protagonist who hasn't appeared yet. This is the most cowardly male protagonist I have ever seen [face covering] It's not that it's not good-looking, but the male protagonist's twisted character gave the female protagonist hope on several occasions that she would snap back to her original shape. Those times, she really wanted to put her hand in and tell the male protagonist that you're thinking too much, baby. In the early stage, the heroine was a pleaser. She had low self-esteem and was cowardly and would not refuse. Later, when she was in her thirties and almost forty chapters, she was guided by the hero to become cheerful. The main reason was that she made money by taking extra classes. As expected, having money will give you confidence. Now in the latest chapter (Chapter 46), for my good friend Lin Yue, I hope the author will not arrange too many plots, because it is too stupid. Just don't hit the wall and never look back. Don't arrange too many sub-CP plots. The plot where the male protagonist guides the female protagonist to grow up is good enough (personal opinion, I don't like to ignore it. I personally don't like the sub-CP taking up too much space in the main text. It is more appropriate to put the sub-CP in the extra chapter, if there is a sub-CP [laughs]) The one star I'm missing is that I struggled through the first dozen chapters. I almost couldn't hold on and wanted to give up several times, but I thought it was okay and started reading again, so I really kept reading. After about forty chapters, the heroine became more cheerful and sweet, and started to look better. Although the hero hasn't figured it out yet, it doesn't matter. Once our heroine does, he won't be able to run away either [laughs]

It is very sweet in terms of emotions and very comfortable to watch, but there is one flaw. The author created Su Wanqing as an annoying villain. To be honest, the creation was very successful. It can be said to be a collection of all the evils in the student days. The most vicious students I know are not to this extent, but she has too many scenes, and she will come out to cause trouble from time to time. I was even more shocked when I saw that person using his innocence to slander others. Personal opinion: She and the little fat guy are both representatives of extreme gender stereotypes on the contemporary Internet. A turtle man cannot think independently, and a green tea worshiper who worships money has no shame. I'm looking forward to the subsequent emotional development, but I'm also a little worried about whether the author can grasp the scale of Su's insult to Ning. Because if this kind of plot continues for too many chapters, it will really make people angry. However, this kind of conflict is difficult to write clearly with little pen and ink. Looking forward to a solution from the author

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Overall, it's very good. I can't read slow-paced articles, but this one is really good-looking, and it can be regarded as witnessing the emotional changes of Ya and Chen. I can only say that the other characters are also portrayed very well (on the scene), and it can only be said that it is not just a background setting like other novels. Lao Yue is also full of pride, and he doesn't know how to be proud when he is in a position of pride, but it is difficult to feel sober in this posture. He is still entering the illusion. I can only say that Lao Su has controlled the rhythm properly [face covering] But it is a pity that Lao Su played a good hand of cards to a pulp, and in the end he came up with the damaging move of innocence. Maybe this is a bit extreme, or it may be Haji's magical power. Although it is very beautiful and very sweet, it has a very fatal flaw [anger], which will attract the "eyes" of others, and it will make you laugh when you see the sweet part! My behavior became very strange in the eyes of others. They said I was a fool [crying]

I made a blind guess that the author is a girl [blowing kiss]. The text is delicate, the feelings are sincere, and the emotional lines are currently very well sorted out (the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists). This book is also full of dog food. The mutual preference between male and female protagonists. This book allowed me to experience the sincere feelings that I cannot gain in reality.

I have read to the end of chapter thirty-two, and hope that the male protagonist can face his feelings more quickly. If it takes a hundred chapters, it would be too exaggerated. And I think it is also very important how the male protagonist explains his hot and cold mood later. Although there is a reason according to the plot, the female protagonist has no idea at the moment. What she finally got the courage to get is rejection, and her attitude is still hot and cold. For a person who is already introverted and sensitive, this is a bit depressing, and he may even end up turning into a yandere for the male protagonist later on. I hope the emotional line will be smooth sailing. There may be twists and turns, but don't wait until the male protagonist turns around after fifty chapters. That would be too uncomfortable for the female protagonist, and it would also appear that the male protagonist is not decisive enough. How to deal with the subsequent plot of meeting the original male protagonist (who I think is already a classic villain)? I hope that the relationship between the male and female protagonists will be settled first, and then they will meet the original male protagonist. And I feel that if the original male protagonist stalks the female protagonist, but the "I" who travels through the book has not yet confirmed the relationship, or is even "indifferent" in the face of this plot, then that would be a very poisonous point. Finally give these two people a good ending, cheers for the author😊 Now that I've seen the backend, I'd like to give you a rough and unreasonable review. It's incredibly well written.

I can only say that you should slowly savor and understand. Good books need to be discovered. Don't read them if they have low ratings. I hope they don't favor female videos. Just normal love stories. The emotional descriptions are quite delicate. I love your hard work. Come on [laughter][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

I think this novel is well written so far. The writing style is gentle and delicate, and the plot development is quite reasonable. It does not progress as fast as in some novels (for example, if you just meet today and become a yandere tomorrow)

It's good. Anyway, I think it's good. Whoever the male lead is, I can help him if he wants. If you like it, you just like it. There's nothing that can't be grabbed. Who cares about the male protagonist who is reborn and has a harem?

It's so beautiful. The heroine's journey from being humble to being generous is too detailed. The relationship is very delicate and long. Even the boy in the book has not been seen yet, so the progress may be a bit slow. It's different from ordinary villains and so on. It's so awesome that I couldn't bear to finish reading it.

I have read more than 20 chapters so far. The author's writing style is okay. Some emotional details are well written. I think the development speed is okay and not too abrupt. However, there are still some flaws in it. It feels like the author has written it himself. In general, if the content of the chapters I have read so far develops and it does not collapse, I think the score of this book should be higher, maybe 8 or 9 points. This book is more about daily life and cultivation, and the speed of emotional development is moderate. It can be regarded as a refreshing break in the rapid development of love. Some of the values ​​​​in it are also quite good.

To be honest, I've been eating too much lately. When I saw this book, I thought it was a classic and I thought I'd stop reading it. However, after reading dozens of chapters, I personally felt that the writing was pretty good and the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists were relatively delicate and the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists were clearly explained. I still hope the author can work hard, and five stars [blowing kiss]

"I just want to be a passerby, heroine, please don't come over" by Kid Zhang Ning Xiaochen&Han Shiya 260619 20.4W (not completed) ① Advantages: It is very delicate and has a sense of experience, especially the psychological activities and changes of the heroine. Highlights. ②Question: The heroine was originally transferred to Lincheng No. 1 Middle School in the next semester, but there were changes. The article later said, "Han Shiya is very grateful for her unreasonable idea at the time - to transfer to Lincheng No. 1 Middle School." The author's power? ③Bookmark mark: "Chapter 29·Two entwined hearts will walk the same road" "Chapter 30·Have you really never been attracted to her? Not even a little bit for a moment? "Chapter 32: After the clouds cleared, I was left alone to be sentimental" "Extra: Han Shiya's Diary (1)" Keep up the good work, author!

Shamelessly give your book a perfect score. I don't have too detailed expressions or good writing skills, but I will try my best to explain my content clearly. If you have any comments, you can write a post. I will reply when I see it [blowing kiss]

It's so sweet. In the early stage, the male protagonist was awkward and just wanted to save his life and clean up the mess left by his predecessor. He only changed his mind after passing the exam! The male and female protagonists are in pure love! The hero's parents are stoners! Record the daily interactions between the male and female protagonists at all times! !

Just like these words The cool breeze passed through the alley, and the sycamore leaves rustled, and a few yellowed leaves swirled down, landing on the sun-drenched road behind them, quiet and gentle. The two of them walked slowly side by side like this, the street lights passing over their heads one after another, the light and shadow flowing alternately, the shadows swaying back and forth in front of and behind them, like a silent journey home, following them all the way, never stopping.

The emotions and interactions are really well written. But I always felt that the transition was so fast or strange (could it be that I read it too quickly and didn't feel the emotional changes?) It was from the psychology of wanting to escape the liquidation of the male protagonist of the novel to the psychology of indifference. In addition, the first few chapters can also provide some self-rescue backgrounds through books, and then directly turn into normal campus love plus redemption stories (I am curious about how to write after the male protagonist appears in the novel, it may provide some interest, but the change of this theme will have an impact on the perception, for example, some like Huantiantian is in love, and some people like interesting novels about the love "game" between the male protagonist and the male protagonist. But the current perception is that one and the other cannot satisfy both parties.) There is still too little content, and the author still has a lot of room for improvement and operation. Just follow your own feelings [Sending Hearts]

When I first looked at the name of this book, I felt that this book should be another kind of AI novel, or the kind of brainless novel. But after I read this book, I found that this book is completely different from what I thought. It is set in high school life and is very resonant. I hope the author will not stop updating and just want to write their story like this now.

If it's not a masterpiece, why do I only have 30 chapters after a month of maintenance? Your update speed is too slow, which will affect the viewing experience. It would be better to read it all at once, and it will give you a sense of comfort, so the more you update, the higher your score will be, you know?

The writing style is exquisite, the characters are perfectly highlighted, and the emotions flow richly. It is easy to resonate with readers, especially the Jiahao section. It is recognized in the comment area that the description of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also very good, and the psychological description of the two characters is also very good. It is simply interesting [lick the screen]

Redemption is the best! ! ! The delicate and sincere relationship between the male and female protagonists is really touching, and the female protagonist has a really good personality, and her life experience is also heart-wrenching. It's really comfortable to watch the two people depend on each other! ! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! ＾0＾~

The article is well written, sweet and emotionally delicate. As for why there is one less star. Psychological committee member, I feel bad [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Stay up late and read it all night, author, I support you. Be sure to update 5 times a day! ! !

It's very beautiful. I hope some people won't give it a low score maliciously.

It's very readable and well written. I can only say that it's a good novel. It's very readable. It shouldn't be a problem to get an 8 out of 10 points.

It's a book that starts low and moves high. It was a little bit toxic in the early stages. However, after chapters 20 and 25, the level of the book improved a bit. The rest of it is still very interesting. I hope it can continue and keep reading for more.

I read the latest chapter in one go, and I feel that the pace is okay so far. I am just worried that the original male lead will not be able to write well when he is transferred to the male lead class. I really beg the author to work hard and finish it. We also need to make the male protagonist correct his position as soon as possible and be braver.

Not bad, not bad, really good, but unfortunately there are too few It's as good as the novel Time Travel Huang Mao But this diary is special, and that diary is special from the perspective of the heroine. Both are very good. My only regret is that both copies are too few. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Will the heroine of the author become a yandere? ? ? Waiting for the heroine in the later stage