Reincarnated as a Kitty

Please give me some suggestions. The first part of the language logic is not very smooth to read. I don't know if it will be changed later. The second point is to use more characters, that is, the psychology of the protagonist? Or when describing details, sometimes the expression will be contradictory. You can use the interaction between characters or the description of the details of the environment. Your plot can still be enriched and it will not read too much like a running account. In other words, the article is too flat. There are still too many novels on this theme. If you are not a bookworm, you will only look for this kind of thing if you have nothing to read (there is no Negating the text of this article), the most comfortable choice is to introduce more characters or expand the world view. Novelty is a must or the writing style is unique but it also needs to accumulate readers. The early plot preparation is very good but I feel weird, especially where the black cat meets the protagonist, the dialogue is very weird (doge), haha, it doesn't matter. The third point is the depiction of the protagonist. After all, as a cat girl, we have to make good use of the cat girl's advantage in expression. We don't need to deliberately mention the mood. We can express it with tails and ears, but the part about going out to buy things is actually too blunt. Expression does not mean that it must be written, it is a feeling. I hope you can find the balance point. If you want to write cat girl articles, I recommend you to read Bibukabu's and Baoyu's articles, both of which are very good. Finally, I have also written articles about cat girls, and I know that it is not easy. I hope you can persevere, steadily improve your writing skills, and become a cat girl supplier. [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It looks great, keep writing!

It's beautiful and interesting. I don't know why no one has watched it. I hope it won't stop updating.

It's pretty cool, why is there no one there?