Red Cocoon Apocalypse: I Summon a Million Liberation Army Soldiers

From my experience, it should be written by AI. I don't know if the author has polished it. Very familiar feeling. I don't exclude AI, it's very powerful if used properly.

I wonder what you think? You wrote that it is surrounded by mountains on three sides and is easy to defend but difficult to attack. What do you think? Are you writing about two groups fighting together? Is it okay to fight zombies now? Just draw it out directly, fire directly, everyone will fire in that exit, and they won't die. You fight zombies, what do you do? Fighting bandits?

We need a hero, Jincheng, heroes are necessary!

Author, if you don't understand, don't write nonsense. All officers in the army, even second lieutenants, must be party members. The system has already given the male protagonist a legal identity, but you are still going the extra mile to allow a major officer to join the party.

It's okay, the details need to be revised. For example, when you inquired about the gangsters, please tell me how you inquired about them. The survivors who escaped from other places cannot just disappear. At least tell them whether they were resettled or went back to investigate the information🤦

It would be nice to have less human-machine flavor. In addition, there is something wrong with the core. Either the protagonist is given an identity in a fair and honest way, but he wants to write about it without saying anything. As a result, the protagonist does not look like the protagonist, but looks like a tool of the organization. It is too deliberate.

The writing is okay,

What can I say, some chapters were confusing to read. Overall, it's pretty good for promoting positive energy.

A bit like an eagle 🤔

Good-looking😋, but not enough