Red Cocoon************

I wonder what you think? You wrote that it is surrounded by mountains on three sides and is easy to defend but difficult to attack. What do you think? Are you writing about two groups fighting together? Is it okay to fight zombies now? Just draw it out directly, fire directly, everyone will fire in that exit, and they won't die. You fight zombies, what do you do? Fighting bandits?

From my experience, it should be written by AI. I don't know if the author has polished it. Very familiar feeling. I don't exclude AI, it's very powerful if used properly.

We need a hero, Jincheng, heroes are necessary!

Author, if you don't understand, don't write nonsense. All officers in the army, even second lieutenants, must be party members. The system has already given the male protagonist a legal identity, but you are still going the extra mile to allow a major officer to join the party.

It's okay, the details still need to be revised. For example, when you inquired about the gangsters, please tell me how you found out. The survivors who escaped from other places cannot just disappear. At least tell them whether they were resettled or went back to investigate the information [face covering]

It would be nice to have less human-machine flavor. In addition, there is something wrong with the core. Either the protagonist is given an identity in a fair and honest way, but he wants to write about it without saying anything. As a result, the protagonist does not look like the protagonist, but looks like a tool of the organization. It is too deliberate.

The writing is okay,

Good-looking😋, but not enough

What can I say, some chapters were confusing to read. Overall, it's pretty good for promoting positive energy.

A bit like an eagle [thinking]

The subject matter is okay, but the key point is that when you have more than fifty, I can't stand it anymore when you hit buses and blow up trees. You are obviously killing red corpses and exploding troops to establish a base. It's a waste.

It's okay, the troops are fired very quickly, but the protagonist is a long-time smoker. He either smokes or touches the cigarette case. He has to write a sentence in every chapter, which is very uncomfortable to watch.

Feelings, quite satisfactory, not suitable for the apocalypse