After Time Travel, I Will Reward You with Cash, and You Can Live Broadcast to Become a God.

It can be seen that he is a new author, and his writing skills are a bit lacking, but the content is still OK. It should get better with more practice. I would like to make some suggestions. The author probably didn't watch the live broadcast too much. Wen is okay. Bai's image is a bit thin and feels like Wen's pendant. Her live broadcast system is relatively average. The live broadcast is very bland and has no two points. Moreover, not all votes are Wen's votes. Even the fact that the final score is followed by four zeros is very unreasonable. In fact, I can feel the image that the author wants to create, but the writing is not strong enough and some parts are not understood in advance. I can't stand it anymore. Come on, author.

It's a good read. I've read four or five great novels. Many of them become more boring and dragging on as you get to the end. Even if I barely finish it, I don't have the intention to read it again. Anyway, I'm still very excited about this one now that I'm tied with it. And I noticed something. Many of the powerful characters in the novel are girls. For example, the hotel talker at the beginning. At that time, just reading the description, I subconsciously thought they were boys, but they turned out to be girls. Many excellent characters who I subconsciously thought were boys turned out to be girls. The villains are more likely to be boys, and the two girls are very loving, and they are the only important people in each other's hearts. The author did not include random men, and there are no messy plots. It just made me feel comfortable watching it. Do you understand?

I have read 10 chapters so far. The first few chapters felt slow and tiring, and the live content was a bit confusing. The female to male ratio in the chapters I read is 3:1, which is very disappointing. ::ೖ(⑅σ̑ᴗσ̑)ೖ:: In terms of names, I hope that the names of the girls can be arranged to be more primary, like the name of the male supporting character Li Yunzhou (if I remember correctly). It would be better if the ranking was preceded by women and men came after men. But a new author can write 70 chapters which is already very impressive, so keep up the good work.

This is a real female channel. The author has given all the good things to the two female protagonists. I have read so many great novels, but I have never seen anyone with a stricter identity protection than Siyu and Yueyue. The punishment for offending is extremely severe, and it is not spent just for money. It is just what you want from beginning to end, and there is no blind pursuit of style. It is also very down-to-earth. It is super refreshing to watch. I can't stop. The author continues to work hard and look forward to [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Very good, come on, author, update soon. Actually, I want to see Wen show up in Bai's live broadcast room [shy]. Please give me more vests. It's best to expose Bai and it's not bad for money. Then, when will Bai's cp be written? I'm looking forward to it. What does the object of Mingyue write? . . From the beginning, it looked okay. Wen's partner also had some embarrassing situations for me, but I couldn't like Mingyue at all. She was not worthy of her at all. . .

Character development is a bit weak

It's true that cool stories are better to read, because there are still very few two-girl bestie type, even for men. There are too many slaps in the face, too dense (in my personal opinion), and there's a slap in the face in every three or four chapters. Maybe it's my personal preference for the kind of person who pretends to be awesome and is respected by others. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking. I'm still following up.

Watching this content now really suits my taste. Compared with those boring live broadcasts that only have PK over and over again, I really like the clips of daily shopping and shopping🥰It's not that you have to play PK for the duration of the live broadcast, but only occasionally live broadcast to interact with everyone. I really like this kind of content😍 Although I know there may be a boyfriend. But it's really ugly and boring😫

It's very cool and very comfortable to watch. It's tied. It's quite delicious. Why are there so few people watching it? It's obviously very well written. It's very enjoyable without any bad things. There are also very few stinky men, and the few revenges that appear quickly end miserably. It is recommended not to write about the live broadcast part. It's so boring and bland. The plot of the heroine and the man's relationship is also very boring. There is no sense of CP at all (second comment)

It's great, it's great, it's super great. This is the second book I've ever read. It doesn't have any major flaws. It's highly recommended. It's the best book besides Xia Yi'an.

Okay, but later I saw that the heroine got a boyfriend. I don't know how the author will write it later, but I don't want him to be the male protagonist. As long as the two heroines are beautiful alone, there is no need to add a man. It used to be pretty good, but now that it's become more and more watery, I can't stand it anymore, and there are fewer and fewer updates.

It's tied. Is this the male protagonist? It feels like it's not appropriate. I'm looking forward to the gathering of heroes in the future~[Like][Like][Like][Request for more updates][Request for more updates][Request for more updates]

This is a novel I like very much. Kudos to the author.

It feels novel and the whole text is not awkward at all.

Not bad! It's fun to scan the goods

Can you still see yourself when you look in the mirror at the top of a mountain? (God has no form)

Both of them are cute.

Not bad, well written

The two heroines are best friends, so cool!

It's very beautiful, please write it better, teacher! !

I just said two words, beautiful.

Let me go, it's really 10% delicious [laughs]

It's very interesting. The author must keep making more chapters☆

The heroine of Shuangwen has no mandatory tasks in the system, and it has never happened for a long time that two heroines robbed a man. This is very good.

It's not too exaggerated, it focuses on the close relationship, and the brand reality is there. It's worth watching ꒰˶>ᗜ<˶꒱

It looks great. Could you please update it a little more? I'm really looking forward to the upcoming plot.