The Villainous Lord Refuses to Join the Protagonist's Crew

The information in the introduction is novel. He travels back to the villain, who is supposed to be an enemy to the protagonist but has a blood relationship with the protagonist. The subject matter is fresh and interesting. The three timelines create different variables, making the plot more exciting. Moreover, I think Yu Wen is very handsome when he goes to a shooting club and shoots with one hand. One week The story also has the warmth of Yu Ting's family and the memory of carrying a knife, which made me feel warm. There are a little bit of foreshadowings so far, but I am very much looking forward to the author filling in the pits. It is a good book with potential. I beg the author to update it in the middle and don't run away. I have already had the experience of tying one book and interrupting the other. It has already tied the book and it scares me to death.

After reading part of it, the author wrote a lot of foreshadowing, and I feel like there is a relatively complete outline. I saw that the author is a novice author, which is still a plus. However, the character creation is relatively stiff, and there is relatively little psychological description. Sometimes I don't know the specific attitude of the character, such as my brother. You should be concerned about the protagonist just by watching the plot. How should I put it, you can't really feel the brotherhood from the emotions. I personally recommend adding more psychological descriptions to help understand and portray the characters. Although it is a one-week project to depict the family ties of the protagonist, it still feels a bit stiff. After reading dozens of chapters, I still haven't figured out the general character of the protagonist. The protagonist is the window through which readers understand a book, and they still need to be focused on characterization. As for the plot twists that are relatively stiff, for example, the character who guides the protagonist into the institute met the "protagonist" early on. This plot seems to be redundant and abrupt at present. If it needs to be written related to the main plot, the lack of early support and the sudden comparison are a flaw. Why did the protagonist go to visit at the request of the institute? The above is a personal opinion, try to be objective, but there are still some subjective factors, so it is only for reference, treat it rationally (^0^)/ This book is quite promising, not templated, with good new ideas, give it a five-star support ٩( 'ω' )و

The author's writing is very good. I can't find any adjectives to describe it. The more I read, the more I read. The character biographies are written just right, and any doubts I had at the time were instantly solved after reading it. You can't get such a wonderful plot by just looking at the chapter names and introductions. It has a great sense of immersion, and there are many small details and foreshadowings that need to be thought about. The return of the protagonist Bai Ye was so exciting that I couldn't stop at all. I finally found a golden book from so many bad articles. I was so excited that I cried with joy. The author must persevere. I'm so curious about the plot behind it.

This family is strong. Don't be misled by Hong Feng's perspective in the early stage. Although the protagonist's family looks hypocritical, in fact the family members care about each other (but there are big problems in the education of the parents, but the three siblings are doing well... I won't spoil the rest. At present, it should be a CP-free novel. The following is a bit of a spoiler. I can only clearly identify two of the three timelines in the introduction. One is the first week in the eyes of my brother and the others (brought back by the protagonist), the other is the current second week. I speculate that the last one is the game in the eyes of the previous protagonist, which should be the source of all evil (?). It is very likely that it is the actual first week...

Ah? Do I need to be graded too?

This is a very interesting book. When you first look at the title of this book, you may think that this is some kind of humorous novel. The explanation of Yu Wen's "travel" in the beginning is so bland, and the protagonist's family is still full of unique skills... But if you are willing to continue to delve deeper, the connotation will gradually be revealed. I think the author is very good at making readers preconceptions. When we first meet a character in a book, we often understand their image from the perspective of the protagonist. When a stereotype is formed in our minds, there will often be a reversal. It is interesting to read such a work, as the characters in the branch plot The erotic memory arc is connected, so the behavior of each character in the main line is unexpected and reasonable. Limited by the perspective, the characters in the book are round and vivid, but there are limitations in our cognition, which makes people feel that we still don't really know them, which creates an interest in continuous exploration. I personally think that the IQ is relatively online. The author is foreshadowing every step of the way, and even some of the interspersed humor may be related to the plot. And the information gap caused by different perspectives is well taken into account. The same thing causes different characters to react differently, as well as their words and deeds. They pay great attention to the wording and make an image come alive from some small details.

The protagonist's family is like a plane, and the father is like a plane, and occasionally shows strange concern. The eldest brother is emotionally indifferent, but at least he knows how to save his younger brother. My mother is a sharp-tongued politician, and the second brother is also gentle. He may be gentle, but not now. It is still the cat's sensitive period, but it is very hard for the emotional sister to be at home.

It's okay, but I can't see it. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the comments, but I feel like the words are sliding across my smooth brain without leaving any traces. What is the main line? And the family atmosphere is a bit weird. This book is good, but I haven't read it, so I can't praise it. I can't say it at all, the writing is very smooth, there are no weird points, and the writing style is OK, not the usual novice writing style of Tomato. Am I stuck in a bottleneck period and can't stand anything? 🤔🤔🤔

It feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings. There are only a few that have been reborn so far. The layout is relatively grand. I look forward to the author filling in the gaps later. But it's just a baby book at the moment, with only a few dozen chapters. Please give me some support 🤔

I was initially attracted by the title of the book. I feel that the author's writing style is very good and has a solid foundation. The writing makes people want to read more. The protagonist's personality is also quite distinct. It is still the kind of routine of a time traveler who never leaves his hometown, but it is really good-looking, with many vests, and always It's unexpected. Anyway, I see that I have only peeled off the white night incarnation layer now, and I don't know whether this vest is the protagonist, woo woo woo, but when I tied it, the author has not updated it for 10 days. If the author is updating, remember to kick me, it is really cool.