The Villain Monarch Refuses to Join the Protagonist Group

The information in the introduction is novel. He travels back to the villain, who is supposed to be an enemy to the protagonist but has a blood relationship with the protagonist. The subject matter is fresh and interesting. The three timelines create different variables, making the plot more exciting. Moreover, I think Yu Wen is very handsome when he goes to a shooting club and shoots with one hand. One week The story also has the warmth of Yu Ting's family and the memory of carrying a knife, which made me feel warm. There are a little bit of foreshadowings so far, but I am very much looking forward to the author filling in the pits. It is a good book with potential. I beg the author to update it in the middle and don't run away. I have already had the experience of tying one book and interrupting the other. It has already tied the book and it scares me to death.

After reading part of it, the author wrote a lot of foreshadowing, and I feel like there is a relatively complete outline. I saw that the author is a novice author, which is still a plus. However, the character creation is relatively stiff, and there is relatively little psychological description. Sometimes I don't know the specific attitude of the character, such as my brother. You should be concerned about the protagonist just by watching the plot. How should I put it, you can't really feel the brotherhood from the emotions. I personally recommend adding more psychological descriptions to help understand and portray the characters. Although it is a one-week project to depict the family ties of the protagonist, it still feels a bit stiff. After reading dozens of chapters, I still haven't figured out the general character of the protagonist. The protagonist is the window through which readers understand a book, and they still need to be focused on characterization. As for the plot twists that are relatively stiff, for example, the character who guides the protagonist into the institute met the "protagonist" early on. This plot seems to be redundant and abrupt at present. If it needs to be written related to the main plot, the lack of early support and the sudden comparison are a flaw. Why did the protagonist go to visit at the request of the institute? The above is a personal opinion, try to be objective, but there are still some subjective factors, so it is only for reference, treat it rationally (^0^)/ This book is quite promising, not templated, with good new ideas, give it a five-star support ٩( 'ω' )و

This family is strong. Don't be misled by Hong Feng's perspective in the early stage. Although the protagonist's family looks hypocritical, in fact the family members care about each other (but there are big problems in the education of the parents, but the three siblings are doing well... I won't spoil the rest. At present, it should be a CP-free novel. The following is a bit of a spoiler. I can only clearly identify two of the three timelines in the introduction. One is the first week in the eyes of my brother and the others (brought back by the protagonist), the other is the current second week. I speculate that the last one is the game in the eyes of the previous protagonist, which should be the source of all evil (?). It is very likely that it is the actual first week...

The author's writing is very good. I can't find any adjectives to describe it. The more I read, the more I read. The character biographies are written just right, and any doubts I had at the time were instantly solved after reading it. You can't get such a wonderful plot by just looking at the chapter names and introductions. It has a great sense of immersion, and there are many small details and foreshadowings that need to be thought about. The return of the protagonist Bai Ye was so exciting that I couldn't stop at all. I finally found a golden book from so many bad articles. I was so excited that I cried with joy. The author must persevere. I'm so curious about the plot behind it.

Ah? Do I need to be graded too?

The protagonist's family is like a plane, and the father is like a plane, and occasionally shows strange concern. The eldest brother is emotionally indifferent, but at least he knows how to save his younger brother. My mother is a sharp-tongued politician, and the second brother is also gentle. He may be gentle, but not now. It is still the cat's sensitive period, but it is very hard for the emotional sister to be at home.

This is a very interesting book. When you first look at the title of this book, you may think that this is some kind of humorous novel. The explanation of Yu Wen's "travel" in the beginning is so bland, and the protagonist's family is still full of unique skills... But if you are willing to continue to delve deeper, the connotation will gradually be revealed. I think the author is very good at making readers preconceptions. When we first meet a character in a book, we often understand their image from the perspective of the protagonist. When a stereotype is formed in our minds, there will often be a reversal. It is interesting to read such a work, as the characters in the branch plot The erotic memory arc is connected, so the behavior of each character in the main line is unexpected and reasonable. Limited by the perspective, the characters in the book are round and vivid, but there are limitations in our cognition, which makes people feel that we still don't really know them, which creates an interest in continuous exploration. I personally think that the IQ is relatively online. The author is foreshadowing every step of the way, and even some of the interspersed humor may be related to the plot. And the information gap caused by different perspectives is well taken into account. The same thing causes different characters to react differently, as well as their words and deeds. They pay great attention to the wording and make an image come alive from some small details.

It feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings. There are only a few that have been reborn so far. The layout is relatively grand. I look forward to the author filling in the gaps later. But it's just a baby book at the moment, with only a few dozen chapters. Please give me some support [Thinking]

It's okay, but I can't see it. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the comments, but I feel like the words are sliding across my smooth brain without leaving any traces. What is the main line? And the family atmosphere is a bit weird. This book is good, but I haven't read it, so I can't praise it. I can't say it at all, the writing is very smooth, there are no weird points, and the writing style is OK, not the usual novice writing style of Tomato. Am I stuck in a bottleneck period and can't stand anything? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I read this book and it's also very awesome. Although Yu Wen is not very strong at the moment, his character is very cool. I like Yu Wen's character so much. I will quit my job to read this novel at home for my whole family. I feel so happy. It's so awesome. It makes the little girl so happy that she twists and turns. Author, you must update more and not stop updating. [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]

The content is good, there are foreshadowings, and the characters are vivid, but there are too few at the moment.

I was initially attracted by the title of the book. I feel that the author's writing style is very good and has a solid foundation. The writing makes people want to read more. The protagonist's personality is also quite distinct. It is still the kind of routine of a time traveler who never leaves his hometown, but it is really good-looking, with many vests, and always It's unexpected. Anyway, I see that I have only peeled off the white night incarnation layer now, and I don't know whether this vest is the protagonist, woo woo woo, but when I tied it, the author has not updated it for 10 days. If the author is updating, remember to kick me, it is really cool.

A brief review. This book currently has 166 chapters, a rating of 6.7, A word count of 321,000, and 29,000 people are reading it. The number of chapter reminders three hours ago is 127, 221 comments, and 105 comments (not counting mine) (There will be critical comments later about feeding data to Doubao.) Personal opinion: The reader retention rate is not high and the pace is slow. It is recommended to correct it. Rhythm (emphasis highlighted!): Before Chapter 17 (Ruins), I set the world view and started the first conflict only when I got to the ruins. The pace is slow and will lead to a high reader loss rate... (I don't have the patience to read anymore after seeing this.) (Alright, I am just an ordinary book lover, and the above is my personal opinion.) The result of throwing data to Doubao: Looking at the data alone: 29,000 readers represent a sufficient base of browsing disks, but the overall update reminder, comment, and rating data are weak. The platform algorithm will dynamically allocate traffic based on reading and interaction data. Continuously low activity data will reduce the weight of recommended works, and it is prone to traffic restrictions and lack of new readers in the long term.

There are many guesses. Let's see if they are right. Don't run away, it's so beautiful, I feel so sad if it's gone Is the Yu Wen who passed through it the same person? I feel that it would be too worrying if it is not the person. After all, for his family, it is their family, but if it is not, it would be very bad. Although I feel that it is the person, otherwise other family members will not be able to recognize it. As for the sister in his memory, it should be Sunny, and then Magpie, I tend to be Sunny, I don't know if it is right

In fact, it feels okay, there are a lot of foreshadowings, well, I just look forward to the author filling in the holes later.

It seems that I accidentally dug up a treasure novel by luck [making faces] Unfortunately, it is still a baby. It is good-looking and I feel it has the potential to get a rating of 9.0 Or above. The author will work hard to write it.

The setting is quite interesting, but one of the more obvious shortcomings is that the plot presentation or writing cannot fully demonstrate the setting. For example, in the story about the Lord who sent a message, the story failed to make people feel the power of the Lord, and the battle plot did not push my emotions.

I haven't read much of it yet, but I have a basic impression of this book. The writing is a bit like using an AI to polish it, and the story is vague. I suggest you write more about the emotional portrayal of the characters. I think it can be more emotional when you read it [Like] [Love]. Regarding the character setting and world view, I think it is very interesting. There are many descriptions and eye-catching, but the plot is a bit bland. I recommend it to those who like a slow pace.

It is a rare and good book, with its own unique world view, three clear timelines, smooth plot, three-dimensional description of the characters in just a few strokes, sophisticated description of the environment, and no nonsense or verbosity. This is the author's advantage. The main plot is currently advancing slowly. I read in the comment section that there was little psychological description. When I actually read the article, I paid attention to this aspect. Let me talk about my feelings. I personally like this style. It doesn't have to explain everything clearly, leaving room for each character and space for their own thinking and imagination. It's like everyone has a line in their hearts, and the plot drives the character's behavior to slowly unfold this line. There is no need to explain this line from beginning to end, but this line is very clear, and it is enough for you to know it.

There is a little too much foreshadowing, and some of it is hard to understand, but the characters are very vivid and the work has clear layers.

It looks great when I see it now, come on ^ω^

Yes, you can understand it once the foreshadowing is revealed at the end of the plot. The plot is smooth and not brainless. I can see the bias in character description, but the writing is not strong enough so it is not full enough. It could be enriched with a little more daily life. This book has great potential, keep it up [like]

There was a lot of foreshadowing in the beginning, which made me confused [exploration], but it was quite refreshing later on [blowing kiss] [admiration], especially after the memory was restored [admiration] [smirk], and it tied [grievance] in one day. Overall, it is a bit daily style, and the author will update it soon! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Go crazy][Go crazy]

It's very interesting. I feel like it's the best book I've read in the past six months. The logic is very clear and refreshing. I also have a good grasp of the rhythm and plot of the novel. But is there any way to lock the author in a small dark room and update it ten times a day (well

It looks good and has a comfortable view of the world. I'm around 30 years old when I read it. Many of the characters in it felt like they were homeless and had no one at home. Two poisonous points. There is an NPC in 1 who was reborn like the protagonist, but he still performed the Sifeng operation and thought about the protagonist's death. The funny thing is that his wife died in his previous life and was avenged by the protagonist. The NPC in 2 made pornographic rumors about the protagonist's sister. It is obvious that the protagonist's family is not simple and they are all powerful, but the sister and the protagonist are so beautiful and invisible that they think they are two orphans. Some people also asked the younger sister whether she deliberately seduced the protagonist to "accompany" the younger sister. The two of them seemed to have received a disability certificate instantly and became deaf-mute. The younger sister was pushed to the ground. Their eldest brother, the director, came and thought they would finally be happy later, but the result was still very annoying. The eldest brother seemed to have become an orphan in an instant and had no sister. Now I feel like everyone in the protagonist's family is an orphan.

Yu Wen: If the whole world is your enemy, then I will be the enemy of the whole world, my sister

Give a conservative rating and see how the author fills in the gaps later. By the way, I thought at first that the three timelines in the introduction referred to the first week, the second week, and the protagonist's own game line, but then I read the words and that didn't seem to be the case?

It's very novel. I have never read this kind of book before, but when I read this book, I became interested in the city.

Things are developing in an unpredictable direction, and the plot is very novel [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Not bad, I hope the author can finish this story [eating melon]