A Yandere Connoisseur Trapped in a Love Triangle

The writing is a bit scary, a bit scary (it's 2 o'clock in the morning, so I'm scared). I suggest changing the label to urban supernatural. A fake person pops up for me in a love story in the middle of the night. Do you want to scare me to death?

It looks good, and the design is very interesting, like a green pig. However, I suggest the author write some funny plots to adjust it, otherwise the whole atmosphere will always be depressing, which will make people tired. Also, at the end of the volume, some healing interactions with the heroines can be added, which can also relax the rhythm. Why is there no popularity? I hope the author will stop being like this.

It is very delicious, not poisonous, a hill in a suspense novel, and a breath of fresh air in a light novel. The characters and plot are very good. There are three volumes so far, Volume 1: The male protagonist is reincarnated and intends to untie his heart knot and save Qingmei from drowning. However, he discovers that there are many doubts. Is the murderer someone else or is it a supernatural phenomenon? Through surveillance, the park was investigated step by step, but the results were beyond everyone's expectations. What should we do with the inhuman monster male protagonist? The second volume is Groundhog Day. The time loop is mainly caused by Tianshuang. Only Tianshuang and the male protagonist know the memories of hundreds of time loops. With Tianshuang unwilling to cooperate, how can the male protagonist break and escape from Tianshuang's clutches? Volume 3: Qingmei's best friend Wen was wiped out by the world after the events in volume 1. All traces of her were wiped out from the world. Except for the male protagonist's special characteristics, Wen could only be seen. Moreover, when other people were near the male protagonist, Wen entered an unobservable state, and the world would continue to cleanse traces of Wen. How should the male protagonist save Wen in this situation?

Brothers, you have been deceived. This is a rebirth suspense disguised as a campus gravity love story [laughs], but it is still very interesting to watch. There is also a gravity love plot, so you can watch it with confidence [laughs]

In the first grade, the story line can be written well while writing about emotions, and the elements of weird stories are added. It is too strong. If you like to read pure meat, don't read this book. The emotions in this book are relatively delicate. The protagonist's attitude towards several characters is basically sloppy. A few girls are just relatively serious. They are not yandere. It is quite comfortable to watch. It is not the kind of article written about yandere and yandere. The story line is also quite interesting. It is rare to see an emotional article mixed with the main line. Good praise. It must be praised.

I just finished reading the second volume. It is very well written. It is a fantasy daily romance light novel. The setting makes me feel like the adolescent syndrome group in Bunny Girls. It is very interesting. Although there are many female protagonists, the other two are too different. They are supermodels. I hope the author can keep writing like this. Another suggestion is that it is better to change the setting of junior high school to high school in the later stage, because it may be for this reason that it is not promoted, and as the number of readers increases, the setting of junior high school will definitely be blocked. It has been half a year since I wrote it, and it is abnormal that such a high-quality novel has not been promoted.

First, I advise authors not to change their writing based on feedback from individual people, as this may result in the loss of more readers. Currently, Micro Fear and Love are unique in Tomato. Secondly, I have just finished watching Dummy. This kind of urban weirdness is quite interesting, but the emotional line is not very good, it is too awkward to watch, and the Shura field is too frequent and makes you tired easily. Third, the female-focused Shura field itself is very homogeneous. It is difficult to distinguish each female protagonist. If you don't grasp it well, it will be very fragmented. I hope the author will carefully figure out the three-dimensional portrayal of the female protagonist. Fourth, I hope this book can become a hit. I still like it. (Only expressing personal subjective opinions)

Pretty good food Some people say that the author is off topic, I don't know, but I think the supernatural aspect can be written more as a moderator, as well as about the nature of pseudo-human beings and other anomalies. I hope that I can continue to write, it is quite interesting. The handling of relationships is not as clever and refreshing as the handling of relationships in other heavy-girl romance novels, but it would be better if other abnormal and supernatural events could be used as connecting points or pushing points in time, interspersed with the handling of relationships with other female protagonists (personal feeling) Okay, I just want to see other anomalies (Tu Qiongdeng said yes after seeing it)

Shura field, cool 👍 The horror atmosphere of the previous pseudo-human chapter is quite good. The follow-up should focus on the Shura field. The male protagonist's life trajectory after Qingmei was rescued should be very different from his previous life. At least he will have stomachache for a few more years 🤭

I have read Chapter 113 so far. The setting is very novel, but the ending of the second volume is a bit rushed. Among the three female protagonists, Lin has the best impression of her. She is a smart person who is full of trust in the male protagonist. In the second volume, Lin's charm is well written. Next is Gu. Although I don't like many of his behaviors, he still has his own characteristics. Finally, there is Cheng. His gravity level cannot be compared to Gu's, and his intelligence and trust in the male protagonist cannot be compared to Lin's. Many times I feel irritated when I see Cheng's speeches. I hope I can write something that is unique to Cheng in the future.