A Connoisseur Who Values ​​Women, Deeply Trapped in the Shura Field

The writing is a bit scary, a bit scary (it's 2 o'clock in the morning, so I'm scared). I suggest changing the label to urban supernatural. A fake person pops up for me in a love story in the middle of the night. Do you want to scare me to death?

It looks good, and the design is very interesting, like a green pig. However, I suggest the author write some funny plots to adjust it, otherwise the whole atmosphere will always be depressing, which will make people tired. Also, at the end of the volume, some healing interactions with the heroines can be added, which can also relax the rhythm. Why is there no popularity? I hope the author will stop being like this.

Brothers, you have been deceived. This is a rebirth suspense disguised as a campus gravity love story [laughs], but it is still very interesting to watch. There is also a gravity love plot, so you can watch it with confidence [laughs]

In the first grade, the story line can be written well while writing about emotions, and the elements of weird stories are added. It is too strong. If you like to read pure meat, don't read this book. The emotions in this book are relatively delicate. The protagonist's attitude towards several characters is basically sloppy. A few girls are just relatively serious. They are not yandere. It is quite comfortable to watch. It is not the kind of article written about yandere and yandere. The story line is also quite interesting. It is rare to see an emotional article mixed with the main line. Good praise. It must be praised.

Pretty good food Some people say that the author is off topic, I don't know, but I think the supernatural aspect can be written more as a moderator, as well as about the nature of pseudo-human beings and other anomalies. I hope that I can continue to write, it is quite interesting. The handling of relationships is not as clever and refreshing as the handling of relationships in other heavy-girl romance novels, but it would be better if other abnormal and supernatural events could be used as connecting points or pushing points in time, interspersed with the handling of relationships with other female protagonists (personal feeling) Okay, I just want to see other anomalies (Tu Qiongdeng said yes after seeing it)

Shura field, cool [like] The horror atmosphere of the previous pseudo-human chapter is quite good. The follow-up should focus on the Shura field. The male protagonist's life trajectory after Qingmei was rescued should be very different from his previous life. At least he will have stomachache for a few more years [laughing]

It is very delicious, not poisonous, a hill in a suspense novel, and a breath of fresh air in a light novel. The characters and plot are very good. There are three volumes so far, Volume 1: The male protagonist is reincarnated and intends to untie his heart knot and save Qingmei from drowning. However, he discovers that there are many doubts. Is the murderer someone else or is it a supernatural phenomenon? Through surveillance, the park was investigated step by step, but the results were beyond everyone's expectations. What should we do with the inhuman monster male protagonist? The second volume is Groundhog Day. The time loop is mainly caused by Tianshuang. Only Tianshuang and the male protagonist know the memories of hundreds of time loops. With Tianshuang unwilling to cooperate, how can the male protagonist break and escape from Tianshuang's clutches? Volume 3: Qingmei's best friend Wen was wiped out by the world after the events in volume 1. All traces of her were wiped out from the world. Except for the male protagonist's special characteristics, Wen could only be seen. Moreover, when other people were near the male protagonist, Wen entered an unobservable state, and the world would continue to cleanse traces of Wen. How should the male protagonist save Wen in this situation?

First, I advise authors not to change their writing based on feedback from individual people, as this may result in the loss of more readers. Currently, Micro Fear and Love are unique in Tomato. Secondly, I have just finished watching Dummy. This kind of urban weirdness is quite interesting, but the emotional line is not very good, it is too awkward to watch, and the Shura field is too frequent and makes you tired easily. Third, the female-focused Shura field itself is very homogeneous. It is difficult to distinguish each female protagonist. If you don't grasp it well, it will be very fragmented. I hope the author will carefully figure out the three-dimensional portrayal of the female protagonist. Fourth, I hope this book can become a hit. I still like it. (Only expressing personal subjective opinions)

I've finished reading the volume of Pseudoman, and I'm going to give it a five-star review before reading the rest. I don't know what the writing is like, but the style is pretty good so far. Although it's a bit scary to watch a sweet love story in the middle of the night when a dummy suddenly appears [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh], but the style is really good. I hope the author can maintain this rhythm. I think the part of the party struggle and supernatural rhythm at the end of the volume of Pseudoman is quite well written [Like]

It's quite unique. Can the author let Cheng know that the protagonist has sacrificed so much to save her? When I think of Xiao Qingmei knowing that the protagonist has to work closely with other women and is seriously injured because of her, I feel so embarrassed.

It's pretty good-looking, just a fake person. . . At present, it seems that the protagonist is basically a normal person except for his rebirth, but suddenly there is a supernatural threat. . . I'm looking forward to how this supernatural threat can be eliminated forever. Otherwise, it would be quite unbearable. There will always be a sense of fear due to unequal strength. It is indeed very attractive. Although it may discourage a few people, I hope the author can write a perfect method to solve the problem of pseudo-human beings.

Great content, got my brain spinning. I have finished reading the first chapter and just came to Gu's arrival. I feel very shocked. Although it is a bit like a low-end version of winter reappearance, with added yandere content, I feel that the author has written it very well. The part about the pseudo-human being is actually a bit scary, and it makes people very imaginative. The first time Xue died, she saw the male protagonist and ran to save him, only to die. This was seen in the comments and added to the comments of fellow book friends, it became more and more creepy and very atmospheric. Come on, boss!

It's very novel, it caught my attention, and it was refreshing and enjoyable to watch. Lin Youci's character creation is relatively complete, and the author's level is still very high. Looking forward to the results of this book [Add one to the bookshelf] [Please update]

My evaluation is to change it to urban supernatural. The main line of investigation is completely like a ghost story.

No, buddy, I just want to see how sweet love is transferred to the suspense channel for me? You can label it for me. But if you want to watch suspense, it should be okay.

The plot is mainly about the protagonist solving supernatural events that appear around him. The idea is good, but the solution is relatively general. The first dummy directly monitors the vicinity and brings equipment to kill; in the second time loop, he learns the relevant legends and then uses a manhole cover to restore the seal. The protagonist travels back to junior high school, so there are relatively few girl-oriented behaviors. There is no description of the relationship between Lin Youci and the male protagonist before time travel. I don't know why Lin Youci likes the male protagonist, and I don't know what specific things Lin Youci did to make the male protagonist afraid.

It's delicious 😋 and well written. However, the ending of the second volume is too rushed. I feel that it could have been written smoother and the emotional explosion stronger. This kind of daily supernatural work is quite interesting, but the perception of Gu is not very good and a bit annoying.

I just finished reading the second volume. It is very well written. It is a fantasy daily romance light novel. The setting makes me feel like the adolescent syndrome group in Bunny Girls. It is very interesting. Although there are many female protagonists, the other two are too different. They are supermodels. I hope the author can keep writing like this. Another suggestion is that it is better to change the setting of junior high school to high school in the later stage, because it may be for this reason that it is not promoted, and as the number of readers increases, the setting of junior high school will definitely be blocked. It has been half a year since I wrote it, and it is abnormal that such a high-quality novel has not been promoted.

I have read Chapter 113 so far. The setting is very novel, but the ending of the second volume is a bit rushed. Among the three female protagonists, Lin has the best impression of her. She is a smart person who is full of trust in the male protagonist. In the second volume, Lin's charm is well written. Next is Gu. Although I don't like many of his behaviors, he still has his own characteristics. Finally, there is Cheng. His gravity level cannot be compared to Gu's, and his intelligence and trust in the male protagonist cannot be compared to Lin's. Many times I feel irritated when I see Cheng's speeches. I hope I can write something that is unique to Cheng in the future.

The recent Tomatoes are amazing. A bunch of people suddenly appear who write very well. The authors are amazing. The characters are well created, and the supernatural scenes that are added are very clichéd later in the writing, which is quite strong.

In fact, I think the final ending is probably the ending that ends with a dream. Whether it is the setting of the male protagonist being face blind or when supernatural phenomena occur, the female protagonist can explain it with a prototype in reality. It is because she has an impression of the settings in movies and novels in reality, and the supernatural phenomena in dreams are similar to them. These are consistent with the conditions of dreaming.

Author, if you don't consider continuing to write about fake people but continue to write about the dummies, I feel that a lot of people will give up. I saw that you replied to others. The second volume will have less scenes of micro-terror, but the writing of Qingmei from the sky is really shocking. Keep writing about micro-horror. It doesn't have to be about fake people. You can write about other things. Also, the writing of Qingmei from the sky is really shocking. I look forward to the update.

I've read part of it, and it's not bad. One of the interesting points in this book is the heroine Lin described in the introduction. I hope she won't put the cart before the horse later and marginalize Lin for subsequent characters. To be honest, I clicked into this book several times just because of the introduction. The previous chapters also focus on her. I hope she won't be hidden in the snow🫥

A more rigorous plot with a protagonist who knows what he wants

I really like this way of promoting the inclusion of girls in the harem through supernatural stories, as it avoids the possible surprises and depressing points in urban harems.

Good looking, fast update, can't sleep at night Lao Lin is too strong, Lao Cheng is too isolated, Lao Gu is too bad, Lao Wen is gone. By the way, I thought the third year of junior high school would pass quickly, but I didn't expect it would take so long to write. After all, there are many limitations. All in all, the book is very interesting, I must finish it!

Okay, I hope it will continue to be updated Is this a writing habit or something? Some words are used very formally and look quite awkward. It's so uncomfortable to watch, so formal

The protagonist's character is very weak, and being good at compromise is really helpful for advancing the plot. But the character of the protagonist is nothing to say, he is a good guy. I felt uncomfortable watching it, and felt like I was stuck walking in a quagmire. I could only say goodbye👋

The author might as well change the name to "The Reborn I am Invulnerable to All Evils". I feel that the author has already enjoyed writing and no longer knows what the world is. What I want to read is a youth campus yandere novel, not an unusually weird Cthulhu novel.

The book is mainly about one abnormal incident after another as the main line, and then adds the relationship between the male and female protagonists. The writing is not bad, but Qingmei is not very likable, and the specific circumstances of the previous lives of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are not detailed. However, there is not much chapter content at the moment, so you can still look forward to it.