[Mysterious flow + Cthulhu + sequence promotion, will you die if you reject it at the beginning? I want to swallow gods and become king!
Su Yan traveled into "Journey of Nothingness" and became a low-level transcendent who was about to lose control due to "organ rejection". Others relied on faith and sacrifice to advance, but he awakened the [Perfect Rebel], able to sew the organs of all races and devour multiple pathways at no cost! From escaping from the slums to hunting down demigods and crushing the holy city, when his liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys gathered together, he realized that he was not getting promoted, but was actually building a god who had been sleeping for thousands of years!
Reader comments
At present, the overall narrative rhythm of the opening chapter is relatively gentle. Although the protagonist can be said to be exhausted, the conflict is slightly deliberate. The protagonist's tense character state at the beginning is quite interesting, and he has a good foundation for conflict, but the early plot advancement is a bit slow.
The overall atmosphere in the first few chapters is rather depressing, and the plot has weak ups and downs. For the time being, we readers are not given obvious feedback on growth and hope for a comeback, making it slow for people to get involved. At the same time, the world view and story background are relatively scattered, the information is not clear enough and not attractive, and the overall appeal of the story needs to be improved.
It is recommended that the narrative rhythm can be tightened appropriately in the future, highlighting the protagonist's goals and tasks, speeding up the plot, and allowing the protagonist to become stronger and progress. Increase the highlights, now there are some running accounts. At the same time, the world view setting is well laid out to make the overall plot feel more comfortable.
At present, the overall narrative rhythm of the opening chapter is relatively gentle. Although the protagonist can be said to be exhausted, the conflict is slightly deliberate. The protagonist's tense character state at the beginning is quite interesting, and he has a good foundation for conflict, but the early plot advancement is a bit slow. The overall atmosphere in the first few chapters is rather depressing, and the plot has weak ups and downs. For the time being, we readers are not given obvious feedback on growth and hope for a comeback, making it slow for people to get involved. At the same time, the world view and story background are relatively scattered, the information is not clear enough and not attractive, and the overall appeal of the story needs to be improved. It is recommended that the narrative rhythm can be tightened appropriately in the future, highlighting the protagonist's goals and tasks, speeding up the plot, and allowing the protagonist to become stronger and progress. Increase the highlights, now there are some running accounts. At the same time, the world view setting is well laid out to make the overall plot feel more comfortable.