Fate: Was Stepped on by Tohsaka Rin at the Beginning

It's okay, it's pretty cool. I'll look at Matou Shinji's situation later and then comment further. The protagonist is too weak and I really can't stand it. Every time he fights, he is either dead or disabled. Just suppress his fighting power [awkward laugh]

I can't stand it anymore. You can tell from the title of Thunder. The author has perfectly broken my fantasy about beautiful girls. I can't just read the good stuff.

The author is a porridge player. How can you just smell the taste? Eat more.

Yes, full marks for a fun article, but you still have to eat what you need to eat. Even if it's very tasty, you should have more fun after eating it. The author should work faster ~ you know what I mean

Famous Sword Siming has a hidden mechanism. For example, if someone else's attack can clear your health bar with one hit, then his attack this time will be completely blocked. For example, if Big Dog uses that treasure to pierce the protagonist's heart directly, this move will be completely blocked, and the protagonist will not suffer any damage. The same is true for the Sword of Victory and the golden EA. If the enemy's attack can clear the protagonist's health bar in an instant, the famous sword Siming can completely block the attack, and the protagonist will not suffer any harm.

Invincible kids

Yes, the reason is simple, because I adapted to it

Those who can hold back are gods. The protagonist is really a bit useless, the combat power of the hundred chapters is still the same, and the number of women is inconsistent (there are only a few in it, and currently there are only two that are possible. The author has already said that Sister R and Medea are not within the scope, Sakura is still the same, only Rin is really there, Illya is somewhat decent, as for Saber, I really don't see it) So it's a double heroine. And the simple fun seems a bit tired of aesthetics, it would be better to have more fun, and being strong will not hinder you from having fun.

The brother from the porridge bar called.

The eldest lady thought that the male protagonist was pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, but in fact the male protagonist was pretending to be a pig and eating feed. It really sounded like a king in One Punch Man. [Fear] Oh no, no, no, I was undoubtedly shocked. The male protagonist took off in the morning and Rin came in. It seemed to be directly diffracted [fear][fear][fear]

It's a very strong Leziren Fate fan novel. The protagonist is quite insane, and the flavor is a bit strong [laughter][laughter][laughter]

This book is really interesting [angry]

A masterpiece was born, and even the old Biao family couldn't hold it back. ([The system reads Tohsaka Rin's voice: "Why is he taking off my shoes! Is he going to use some ulterior move? You don't want to use my shoes to stink him to death, do you?"]...... Immediately afterwards, Lu Hao performed an epic lung blow in front of everyone to see if there was any risk of death. ........ Under Red A's gaze, and with the petrified expressions of Saber and Shirou, Lu Hao slowly put duck gizzards, chicken feet, braised eggs, and a few pieces of black stinky tofu into Rin's shoes piece by piece. .........)

I think this book is acceptable for people who have only read the fanfic but not the original work. As for the comment section, some people said that the protagonist is an ordinary delivery boy before time travel. How can he suddenly improve his strength to directly fight heroic spirits? Some people also said that Sakura's problem is that I haven't read it very much. I don't know how other authors deal with the situation. I feel like Sakura was ruined long ago from the beginning of the plot. If I want to change the original plot, it will be significantly changed. If the author doesn't have the strength, there is really nothing he can do. Well, although Sakura is very pitiful, it is really troublesome to deal with it. There was also talk about Medusa and the other one who was eaten by the villain. When I saw this, I knew that these two were not the heroines. These two were not that popular. It would be okay if they were not included, or was it that the author included them later?

After reading this book, I felt that ants were walking on the ground, and elephants could not be eaten after that, because Lu Bu was sweeping the army with ak, Sun Wukong just ate a banana, Diao Chan was caught by Cao Cao, Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo were together, the author was read She got pregnant. In the end, Beliatu defeated Ultra's father with the ultimate combat instrument and took back Xiao Wu. After Tang San found out, Diga took it away and Gatlin chased him, causing an ant to be trampled to death, triggering an outbreak of the zombie virus. I also finished eating the apple. He threw apple cores onto Mount Everest, angered a giant beast, cooked me a barbecue, and said lions were inedible. Therefore, Qin Shi Huang Tu was at the entrance of the mausoleum, using a sister control and a 61 bomb holder to fight with archaeologists for several years, especially It describes how Lu Bu, transformed into a slime figure, fights Sun Wukong Q for hundreds of rounds in the Demon God War for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have hit the target. It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. But I am more concerned about what Horus said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are all made of bones. Don't show off in front of your Brother Lu. Do you know how the Archangel Sauce is made? All in all, this book is a lot of fun. The author is probably from the Congee Bar."

Can you give the protagonist some combat power first? We rely on the enemy's imagination to defeat the enemy. Also, I need to update it a lot.

The writing is quite good. It can be read as a piece of entertainment. The writing style is not like that of a noob. It is quite funny. I feel that single-drawing is not a bad point. After all, there are no single-drawing props. It is really troublesome in the early stage. If you want to see the protagonist invincible, don't come here.

It feels a bit overwhelming [angry], it's quite beautiful. I have never read the original work, only read some of the fanfics. I feel that Sakura is quite pitiful. The protagonist's combat power is constantly improving, which is in line with the porridge ceremony [Adoration]

This book smells so good to me. There are very few Holy Grail novels. A good book must have a happy ending [crazy][crazy][crazy]

I'm afraid you won't see it, so I can only give it three stars. The main character, Lezi, has a good mentality and is more interesting to watch. The disadvantage is that the main character's combat power is suppressed. Every time he goes out, he always comes back close to death. There is also the problem of Sakura, who should be taken into the harem, but we still have to let him go through this. Although it is said that time can be changed, it is better to change the timeline first and then go back later.

I laughed so much on the bed, the author is so amazing! At this time, someone will ask: Is there a God? Where is God? Some brothers have it! God is behind the original. When talking about God, it is easy for people to think of......... Hey! Clouds? Da da da da da, I really want to play...

My evaluation is that there are shortcomings, but not many. There is really no need to read what those people in the comments said are so abstract. Just suppressing the combat power will be more uncomfortable. Later, as long as the author raises the combat power, there will basically be no problem. It is not as poisonous as other comments said.

Children, the writing is good, but I rarely use it to evaluate an e-book [laughing] [laughing] [crying]

Ah, author, why are you so clever and good at writing? It seems that I can't do it without giving you a five-star rating. (Please do more emotional scenes, don't fight and kill every day, wouldn't it be good to have some daily scenes [shy])

So funny, so funny [laughs]

It tastes great, no need to say more [face covering]

It's really good-looking, and the thunder is really thunder.

A flavorful novel. Made me laugh so hard

It's a good book, but the main character could be strengthened.

Very nice looking, clear structure The main character is just a bit weak, can it be strengthened?