Arknights: Walking on Thin Ice

First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The writing style is quite good. The emotional line is not as rigid as that of newcomer novels. As for the question, although there is only one, it is quite big. It is a long and difficult sentence, which is really uncomfortable to read. Please divide it into more paragraphs. In this case, the impression will be good.

It's very nice to read, the writing is pretty good, and there's nothing poisonous about it. Although it doesn't have the ccb part that everyone likes to see, it's good to be gentle like this. There are also shortcomings. For long and difficult sentences, the author should try more paragraphs. The perception can be improved to a higher level [laughter] The score will be much higher, and I feel like there will be more people to see [laughter] I want to ask more: multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist 😏 If there are multiple female protagonists, can I bring a dog to play with 😢

Come on, author! This book is okay, has potential, and is more in line with my taste. Keep writing.

It's great. What's next?

It's okay if it's written so well

There is potential, but let's lurk for now

It's plain but interesting. Paired with a song, it will make people addicted to it.

It's a very interesting Ark novel. I haven't read much yet, so I want to ask if it has two female protagonists, Lagou and Degou.

My whole life, I'm walking on thin ice

Come on, author! I think it has great potential, and it suits my taste anyway. 😄