"Two Heroines" "Two Wolves" "Everyday Life"
Lin Du, an ordinary person who was sent away by a dump truck, woke up and found that he was in the dragon gate of "Arknights". The timeline is three months before the Qicheng incident. The doctor is still lying in the sarcophagus, and he only has 20,000 dragon gate coins, an old apartment in the slums, and a super model but he can't use the ice source stone skills at all.
From "walking on thin ice" to actually holding ice in his hands, this time traveler who arrived early decided to eat his fill first.
Reader comments
First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The writing style is quite good. The emotional line is not as rigid as that of newcomer novels. As for the question, although there is only one, it is quite big. It is a long and difficult sentence, which is really uncomfortable to read. Please divide it into more paragraphs. In this case, the impression will be good.
It's very nice to read, the writing is pretty good, and there's nothing poisonous about it. Although it doesn't have the ccb part that everyone likes to see, it's good to be gentle like this. There are also shortcomings. For long and difficult sentences, the author should try more paragraphs. The perception can be improved to a higher level [laughter] The score will be much higher, and I feel like there will be more people to see [laughter]
I want to ask more: multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist [laughing evilly] If there are multiple female protagonists, can I bring a dog to play with [crying]
Come on, author! This book is okay, has potential, and is more in line with my taste. Keep writing.
My whole life, I'm walking on thin ice
Come on, author! I think it has great potential, and it suits my taste anyway. [Laugh]
First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The writing style is quite good. The emotional line is not as rigid as that of newcomer novels. As for the question, although there is only one, it is quite big. It is a long and difficult sentence, which is really uncomfortable to read. Please divide it into more paragraphs. In this case, the impression will be good.
It's very nice to read, the writing is pretty good, and there's nothing poisonous about it. Although it doesn't have the ccb part that everyone likes to see, it's good to be gentle like this. There are also shortcomings. For long and difficult sentences, the author should try more paragraphs. The perception can be improved to a higher level [laughter] The score will be much higher, and I feel like there will be more people to see [laughter] I want to ask more: multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist [laughing evilly] If there are multiple female protagonists, can I bring a dog to play with [crying]
Come on, author! This book is okay, has potential, and is more in line with my taste. Keep writing.
My whole life, I'm walking on thin ice
Come on, author! I think it has great potential, and it suits my taste anyway. [Laugh]
This book is pretty good