Transmigration: The Behemoth Begins with the Ark

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@Legendaryblackdragon The idea is extremely cool, but your punctuation marks are really uncomfortable. I think you should use AI to polish it... If not, you have to figure out the punctuation marks.

The writing is very good, I could improve my writing style.

You are so diligent, you are simply too diligent, let me give you the greatest respect now! Ah~~~My brain is trembling!!!! What a diligent person! Diligence! So diligent!!! Why! Why! Why! Why why! I have never found such a diligent and hard-working author before! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! How lazy I am! Lazy! Lazy! Lazy! Sloth! Please forgive my laziness! ——The brain is shaking!!!!!!!!!! Desu!!! 👿👿👿👿👿

The subject matter is very good, but I always look at the punctuation marks and am stunned. There are some places where commas can be omitted, otherwise the reading will not be smooth and the intended meaning will be deviated. In fact, commas can be omitted at the end of the sentence, and readers will not be distracted by this.

The writing style is an issue, but currently the content of the book is relatively soothing. The protagonist is not the kind of time traveler or the arrogant we think he is, which is better. There is still some shortcomings in the psychological growth of the protagonist, but it does have the demeanor of an older person.

It's pretty good, but there are a lot of punctuation and wording mistakes that need to be adapted. The subject matter is also very new. I hope the author won't make it unfinished if he continues to write more.

Good book. Very good Arknights fanfiction. When will civilization appear on Terra?

The author's writing style gave me the feeling that he wanted to express something but couldn't understand it, so he used a lot of inexplicable words to supplement it.

The author Neferai's The Great King of History