[Multiple world travel + light speed invincibility + chaotic neutrality + having fun + becoming a giant beast agent]
An ordinary person died suddenly for unknown reasons, traveled to the world of Arknights, and hatched from an egg into a giant beast.
The bad news seems to have traveled too early,
Worse news, his memory seems to be a bit incomplete
More bad news, he's on the moon,
But there's good news, he's very energetic
Reader comments
Children give their books a five-star rating
@Legendaryblackdragon The idea is extremely cool, but your punctuation marks are really uncomfortable. I think you should use AI to polish it... If not, you have to figure out the punctuation marks.
The writing is very good, I could improve my writing style.
The subject matter is very good, but I always look at the punctuation marks and am stunned. There are some places where commas can be omitted, otherwise the reading will not be smooth and the intended meaning will be deviated. In fact, commas can be omitted at the end of the sentence, and readers will not be distracted by this.
The writing style is an issue, but currently the content of the book is relatively soothing. The protagonist is not the kind of time traveler or the arrogant we think he is, which is better.
There is still some shortcomings in the psychological growth of the protagonist, but it does have the demeanor of an older person.
You are so diligent, you are simply too diligent, let me give you the greatest respect now! Ah~~~My brain is trembling! ! ! ! What a diligent person! Diligence! So diligent! ! ! Why! Why! Why! Why why! I have never found such a diligent and hard-working author before! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! How lazy I am! Lazy! Lazy! Lazy! Sloth! Please forgive my laziness! ——The brain is shaking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Desu! ! ! 👿👿👿👿👿
It's pretty good, but there are a lot of punctuation and wording mistakes that need to be adapted. The subject matter is also very new. I hope the author won't make it unfinished if he continues to write more.
Good book. Very good Arknights fanfiction. When will civilization appear on Terra?
Well written, must give praise
The author's writing style gave me the feeling that he wanted to express something but couldn't understand it, so he used a lot of inexplicable words to supplement it.
The author Neferai's The Great King of History
Personally, I feel good. Come on, the author [like]
Very, very, very, very beautiful. Come on, boss, remember to smile every day. Ｏ(≧▽≦)O
I think it's okay, but invincible articles are generally not very long.
Personally I feel pretty good
I think you can watch it
It's just fun to look at and it's fun to dip the beans in it
I give this novel five stars.
It looks pretty good, but the punctuation marks are a bit hard to see.
A very good book, it makes our memory start working
There is no AI and the setting is interesting. It's awesome.
Why don't you use AI? It hurts my eyes to see it. The idea of behemoth starting is very good, but it can only be said to be a mess.
The writing is not very good... But Ark fans please support me. Goodbye
The ideas and ideas are very good, but the updates are a bit slow.
Children give their books a five-star rating
@Legendaryblackdragon The idea is extremely cool, but your punctuation marks are really uncomfortable. I think you should use AI to polish it... If not, you have to figure out the punctuation marks.
The writing is very good, I could improve my writing style.
The subject matter is very good, but I always look at the punctuation marks and am stunned. There are some places where commas can be omitted, otherwise the reading will not be smooth and the intended meaning will be deviated. In fact, commas can be omitted at the end of the sentence, and readers will not be distracted by this.
The writing style is an issue, but currently the content of the book is relatively soothing. The protagonist is not the kind of time traveler or the arrogant we think he is, which is better. There is still some shortcomings in the psychological growth of the protagonist, but it does have the demeanor of an older person.
You are so diligent, you are simply too diligent, let me give you the greatest respect now! Ah~~~My brain is trembling! ! ! ! What a diligent person! Diligence! So diligent! ! ! Why! Why! Why! Why why! I have never found such a diligent and hard-working author before! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! How lazy I am! Lazy! Lazy! Lazy! Sloth! Please forgive my laziness! ——The brain is shaking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Desu! ! ! 👿👿👿👿👿
It's pretty good, but there are a lot of punctuation and wording mistakes that need to be adapted. The subject matter is also very new. I hope the author won't make it unfinished if he continues to write more.
Good book. Very good Arknights fanfiction. When will civilization appear on Terra?
Well written, must give praise
The author's writing style gave me the feeling that he wanted to express something but couldn't understand it, so he used a lot of inexplicable words to supplement it.
The author Neferai's The Great King of History
Personally, I feel good. Come on, the author [like] Very, very, very, very beautiful. Come on, boss, remember to smile every day. Ｏ(≧▽≦)O
I think it's okay, but invincible articles are generally not very long.
Personally I feel pretty good
I think you can watch it
It's just fun to look at and it's fun to dip the beans in it
I give this novel five stars.
It looks pretty good, but the punctuation marks are a bit hard to see.
A very good book, it makes our memory start working
There is no AI and the setting is interesting. It's awesome.
Why don't you use AI? It hurts my eyes to see it. The idea of behemoth starting is very good, but it can only be said to be a mess.
The writing is not very good... But Ark fans please support me. Goodbye
The ideas and ideas are very good, but the updates are a bit slow.