Douluo: Wuhun Qianji Umbrella

Yes, I've read The Master, but I haven't read Dou Er. I only know the male protagonist and some very famous characters. But so far, it's a very good book. It's a very innovative book and it's well written.

I will continue to read your comments. If you point out something wrong, I will correct it immediately. I'm sorry for letting you see the wrong place. There are some unreasonable parts of the plot in the past that I can't do anything about. If I change it, I will have to change it later. I would like to say sorry again. Thank you everyone for liking my work. Thank you all.

Don't criticize, the setting is consistent with the original work, the plot has no poisonous points for the time being, and it doesn't hinder reading if you haven't read the original work. Recommended Chapter 50 begins with a split that is too heavy and incoherent. As a time traveler, the protagonist should have been psychologically prepared for the changes in the original plot. It is understandable for his teammates, but there is no need to always keep the gap in strength too large.

It's beautiful, very novel, and I think it will be a book with great potential. Author, please write carefully. This book is very suitable for the tomato market. You are missing a chance to recommend it. Write it quickly before then.

Personally, I think it's okay. When I beat Dai Huabin, I suddenly awakened the fighter's will, and the cheating was a bit sudden. I feel that the protagonist's combat power rises a bit quickly, but later in the plot, he should have a head-on confrontation with Tang San, and it feels reasonable again.

Huo Yuhao: This is the power of copyright, Lin Yue. [Sinister smile]

You can try to learn Su Muyu's 18 Sword Formation from Legend of the Dark River or the Shocking Dragon Transformation of the Spear Immortal. If it's just a teammate, it's not necessary. I feel like it's useless to force him. Staying would be a burden. It doesn't have a great effect on the protagonist, so there is no need to highlight the protagonist.

Very nice. But. The updates are still too slow, and the short ones are not enough to read.

Yes, it's pretty good-looking! ! Although I haven't watched Master Avatar, it's still pretty good.

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My writing skills need to be improved. I'll give you five stars to encourage you.

It looks pretty good so far, but I hope the author can let the protagonist have more soul skills and forms. After all, there are twelve forms of the Thousand Planes Umbrella.

This book is really good to read. I personally think it is very useful even if it is placed on QQ or Qidian. Cheers, author 🎉

Yes, the characterization is quite delicate.

Boss, boss, this book is really good. Is there still a chance to see the follow-up?

The book is not bad. If it is written like this, as long as it is not too illegal or too brainless, the book will be very good.

The overall novelty of this book is very high, and the protagonist has his own set of cultivation methods, and does not overly improve the status of the protagonist group. I think it is very good.

By the way, who is the heroine, Snow Emperor?

Other silver weapons are made well

It's time to eat, brothers

. This book is really good.

If you dare to change it, send the blade.

Good looking. Love to see more.

Overall looks good

Come on, don't stop updating

Clear thinking, a bit refreshing, good

Don't interrupt the update. Once it's removed from the shelves, you can see it as long as you download it, so don't interrupt the update like some previous books.

After watching it for so long, I still don't know who the heroine is?

I have watched Full Time. I hope he can write out everything later. Come on.

It's enough to see Su Mucheng. I feel that the goal is to show off love, so I don't look good at it.