Naruto: Three AFK Positions at the Beginning! Ten Times Gain

After careful consideration, I finally came to the conclusion that this book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

It's pretty good. I suggest that the protagonist communicate with Orochimaru. I haven't seen such a human-machine protagonist for a long time, and the plot is not ups and downs enough now. How to say it? The author probably wrote it purely by hand, because AI would not be able to write such a plain text. It most likely has many onomatopoeias and adjectives. It is recommended that the author use AI to expand the writing, and then the author writes and refines it. In this case, there will be more updates, and the author only needs to think about where the plot needs to be changed. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] 1+1=2×10, or? 1×10+1, According to the author's description, it should be the one in the back. If it is the protagonist in the front, the current physical skills can already defeat the shadow.

It's quite beautiful, although there are some parts that don't stand up to careful consideration, but they are innocuous. The main character has a good outlook on life, but Naruto fanfics are considered thin. It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding of Naruto. The supporting characters can be said to be very comfortable to watch. It has changed a lot and the quality has also declined. I don't recommend it as much as I did at the beginning.

The story of an ordinary, insensitive Uchiha who is a silent cheater in daily life, and a little happy Uchiha who slowly changes the people around him is quite interesting [laughing][crying with laughter]

[Eat melon] After reading it, I think it's okay, but the author prefers the word "de" [face-covering] Basically, as long as you need:, the word "de" will definitely appear in places like "" [face-covering] It's a bit uncomfortable to read [laughing and crying] "De" in various tones [face-covering]

To be honest, it looks great. The succubus is as pale as a chrysanthemum, and her human-machine feeling makes outsiders feel that she is as gentle as water and has a light emotion. Can't help but be attracted. The words and knowledge he occasionally speaks make people feel that they are not simple. The development of the plot completely and unconsciously deviates from the original work, changing slowly like water, which is different from the style of other novels.

I can't suffer the loss alone

It's very interesting, and the protagonist is also very interesting. Unlike AI, typos are common after all, but the details are not right, especially about Orochimaru and science. Naruto's technology tree is modern, although some places are crooked, but refrigerators, electric lights, etc. Are real, and there are trains, and there is electricity after four stops. Car, so I suggest the author to read this part carefully, otherwise it will cause special problems (such as electric motors, refrigerators, etc.). Orochimaru's character goal is to hope that the wind will rise + immortality. Both of these are very important and cannot be separated. I think it is a bit OOC. He can study other things, but he can never give up the study of the physical body.

Moe no Moe Keiguchi♡(.◜ω◝.)♡ Hexagram, you are a little human machine (hexagram: bro? I didn't work hard, okay... Itachi is so cute in this book (suspected of being infected by the human-machine divination? Quanhaoqi wahaha kawaii pinch (os: angry Modo Modo This book feels so clear Good review! ! ! ! ! (..›ᴗ‹..) ⸝⸝⸝⸝⸝ ♡

At first, I couldn't keep up with the protagonist's frequency, and I was a little uncomfortable. After slowly listening to a few chapters, I felt a faint sense of death, which was quite fun. It was only with the emergence of these later contrasts that I felt a little bit like they were on the same frequency.

[Chigua] It's a very novel way of writing, but it doesn't seem to highlight the power of the protagonist's death. It seems to be the effect of 24-hour training at ten times the speed, but others have to sleep. In fact, it should be twenty times the progress of others.

Absolute man-machine, the resulting insensitivity, what teaches you ninjutsu is...

It's okay, but it's a bit sudden, but it makes sense logically, but it's too sudden. Well, everything changed from being cozy to having an operation.

This book is, well, very bland, but it is also very readable. It is suitable for those who want to read a book in leisure time. I think it is quite good so far. It is very bland and warm. There is no fighting and killing, nothing too disturbing, and the rhythm is very good.

Now that you're all in, let's take a look [smile] and give encouragement to the kid brother, what if he becomes a great writer in the future?

It's not bad. The protagonist is like a normal person, sometimes hesitant and sometimes decisive; and the plot is also great. The protagonist originally wanted to kill Itachi, but later he changed his mind while climbing a mountain. Itachi also had his own thoughts, and Orochimaru was also a famous scientist. Later, the Uchiha clan leader influenced Itachi because of the protagonist, and the protagonist felt rebellious. I can only say that it is quite novel [please update]

Okay, not too poisonous [OK]

Let's wait for the follow-up, I feel like it's pretty good up to chapter 70, it's very emotional and logically consistent.

May all our regrets in the first half of the year be the foreshadowing of surprises in the second half of the year. Come on young man! You're doing your best, that's cool.

The protagonist has a faint human-machine feel. Quite peaceful

The book creates a light beauty, neither impatient nor impatient, and unfolds a heartwarming story in the form of on-hook rather than on-hook. But when it comes to the Naruto story itself, there are some disadvantages in that its combat effectiveness is not obvious and unclear. Maybe we can talk about it as a transcendent fan

Daily writing, not too much killing, easy reading for an eleven-year-old bookworm

It's a very interesting fanfic, and the plot becomes more joyful after changing from Orochimaru.

It's good to have a small daily life without CP. Don't have CP.

Okay, ok, ok

It's very good, and it's from Dai Lin's party.

Nice but too short

How can I say it? It's very sacred.

Orochimaru is the real heroine

It's not enough. When will there be 500 chapters?