What Do You Mean, You Knocked Saitama Unconscious with a Sword?

From the author's previous book, this is a good book with no poisonous points. The king's mental journey is also written very carefully. The main thing is to balance the temporary strength given by the system with the basic strength and skills added by the king.

At first I thought it was going to be a funny novel, but when I came in out of curiosity, I didn't expect it to be a coming-of-age novel. It looked quite heartwarming, and the writing was really good. Although I haven't read One Punch for a long time, and this is the first One Punch fanfic I've read on Tomato, I still feel that the character portrayal is really very real, faithful to the original work, and almost non-ooc. Moreover, the author did not put the entire focus of the book on King alone, but also gave enough roles to other characters to make the whole story more vivid. If there are any dissatisfaction points, there are still some. For example, I feel that the relationship between Tatsumaki and King is too contrary to Tatsumaki's aloof image, and King has taken many of Saitama's scenes, such as Boros's battle. I think it's best to ensure that Saitama also has the opportunity to show his abilities as in the original work, or to fight side by side with King (such as the chapter on the meteorite, where the two "divided labor and cooperated"). Although, having said that, from the part of the galaxy competition, it seems that the author finally put Saitama's strength above King. At least that is the current setting, which I think is right. It's nice to watch King grow up, redeem himself and others, truly gradually become stronger and live up to his own recognition without the help of the system, but after all, this is a one-punch world, and it feels like King surpassing Saitama and becoming the number one is no longer a one-punch. It's best to be the second best King and be looked up to by others, but Saitama is still a little better than King. Because looking at it now, it feels like King's light seems to be a little bit overshadowing Saitama's own. Enough nagging, in the final analysis it is a really good book. The humor, the sublimation of the theme and the description of the battle are all very good. It can also be seen that the author (except for the description of the tornado) is a loyal party to the original work. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It's a really nice one-punch fanfic [Sending my heart][Original Party] Adding a follow-up comment: Should the author consider changing the title of the book? Change it to a more catchy title? I think the only reason I clicked on this book at that time was because it happened to be the first one-punch article I saw on fyp since using Tomato. I clicked on it out of pure curiosity. Subconsciously, I thought the title seemed uninteresting, so I added it to my bookshelf after reading a chapter or two. I don't agree with the old-fashioned classic title style of the book, but maybe changing it to a more eye-catching title will be more helpful for the click rate? After all, looking at this score... I feel sad. Why does such a beautiful book only have a score of 6.7?

The disadvantages have been changed. It is no longer a three-minute experience card. It is an invincible cultivation style that interprets the heart of a true hero [Top post][Top post][Top post]

Nice! I will find time to re-read it (I don't have much time now). The character portrayal is very comfortable. I really want to travel through the past and taste the king's craftsmanship! [Crying] I wish the author to be happy every day, do what you want to do, and don't force yourself too much [eating melon] Waiting for updates 😋

I've read so many One Punch Man fanfics. This is also a classic time travel king, but the system setting is a little novel, but not completely absent. Fortunately, the author's writing is good, and the plot is relatively smooth now, making it worth a read. Wrong. Originally I wanted to say Aboriginal King because I haven't read any articles about Aboriginal King.

The first fifty chapters are quite good. There are no poisonous points. It is refreshing but not boring. It is coincidental but not embarrassing or inappropriate. It also fits the character. The author must have read One Punch Man. As an ordinary person, King will be afraid of powerful disasters and want to retreat, but he will strengthen his inner courage when protecting others. I really like this.

It's great to see, women turn into men, men turn into superheroes, cats turn into dogs, and dogs turn into monkeys [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][please update][please update][please update][please update]

Didn't a rating prompt pop up within a short period of time? [Shocked] Could it be that Lord King did it? How powerful is Mr. King? He can actually directly interfere with my mobile phone through the narrative layer [crying]

Full marks! The characters are really restored

It looks good. At present, the author will update soon. The data of the author's book is getting better and better, and it should be recommended soon [laughing]

There are some issues with the first few pictures. If you don't like it, you can just skip it and it won't affect the plot very much. The author is very persuasive and the rest of the writing is basically good. Not many people buy gifts, but the author still makes updates. It has been a long time since I expressed respect to the author. I have spent so much ink writing this paragraph just to hope that people who read this comment will read this book.

The character descriptions in the original work are very good, the characters are well established, and the protagonist also has a growth line. It is worth recommending.

This is the most beautiful KING novel I have ever seen and is most consistent with the original work.

I thought it was a streamlined novel, but it turned out to be pretty good. The most eye-catching thing is the restoration of the characters in the original work. It looks very comfortable to watch the original work. The existence of the brain supplement system also plays a role in promoting the plot. It is not obtrusive. King himself is indeed not a time traveler. He will not be arrogant just because there is a system. He is still humble and kind.

[Like] [Like] [Like] king: You mean the more I think about it, the stronger I will be... Why do I suddenly feel invincible? It seems to be a very simple thing!

All in all, it's good. The cooking segments can enrich the dishes. Don't just eat hot pot all the time.

The overall evaluation is good or bad. It depends on personal preference. I gave it five stars because it is considered a good write-up in the niche online article "One Punch King".

I am that turtle, that account cannot be rated, I can only use this one

It's really good to watch. Brothers who like to watch One Punch Man fanfiction, this one is worth watching.

The author knows how to describe what it means to be a hero

I consider myself to be the first tomato punch fanfic, and the portrayal of the king is perfect.

Yes, the character's personality fits the original work very well. I hope that the protagonist will not have an affair with Tatsumaki later on and just become his sister.

I have that feeling, other people's imagination of KING is directly translated into strength, it's a perfect match

A good one-punch fic, it's so cool to fire out the Explosive Unparalleled Purgatory Wave Cannon

Although the rating is low, the content is good

Oh, it's okay. Vv Oh, Guanggu Tiandi is still a mess.

Very wonderful story

Why do I look so good?

It's okay, I'm on the radio, so I keep reading. The score of this book now should be the main reason why the chapter of Poros's crime of literary youth caused readers to give negative reviews and leave.

It's very interesting. Please keep up the good work, author. It's not enough.