One-Punch Man: My Strength Comes from Your Imagination

At first I thought it was going to be a funny and enjoyable novel, but I came in out of curiosity. I didn't expect that it would be a coming-of-age novel. It looked quite heartwarming, and the writing was really good. Although I haven't read One Punch for a long time, and this is the first One Punch fanfic I read on Tomato, I still feel that the character portrayal is really very realistic, faithful to the original work, and almost non-ooc. Moreover, the author did not put the entire focus of the book on King alone, but also gave enough roles to other characters to make the whole story more vivid. If I am dissatisfied with it, it is still a little bit. For example, I feel that the relationship between Tatsumaki and King is too contrary to Tatsumaki's aloof image, and King has robbed many of Saitama's scenes, such as Boros's battle. I think it is best to ensure that Saitama also has the opportunity to show his abilities like the original work, or to fight side by side with King (such as the chapter on the meteorite, where the two "divided labor and cooperated"). Although, having said that, from the part of the galaxy competition, it seems that the author finally put Saitama's strength above King. At least that is the current setting, which I think is right. It's nice to watch King grow up, redeem himself and others, truly gradually become stronger and live up to his own recognition without the help of the system, but after all, this is a one-punch world, and it feels like King surpassing Saitama and becoming the number one is no longer a one-punch. It's best to be the second best King and be looked up to, but Saitama is still a little better than King. Because looking at it now, it feels like King's brilliance seems to be a little bit overshadowing Saitama's own. Enough nagging, in the final analysis it is a really good book. The humor, the sublimation of the theme and the description of the battle are all very good. It can also be seen that the author (except for the description of the tornado) is a loyal party to the original work. I hope the author will continue to work hard, it's a really good one-punch fanfic💕[Original Party] Adding a follow-up comment: Should the author consider changing the title of the book? Change it to a more catchy title? I think the only reason I clicked on this book at that time was because it happened to be the first one-punch article I saw on fyp since using Tomato. I clicked on it out of pure curiosity. Subconsciously, I thought the title seemed uninteresting, so I added it to my bookshelf after reading a chapter or two. I don't agree with the old-fashioned classic title style of the book, but maybe changing it to a more eye-catching title will be more helpful for the click rate? After all, looking at this score... I feel sad. Why does such a beautiful book only have a score of 6.7?

From the author's previous book, this is a good book with no poisonous points. The king's mental journey is also written very carefully. The main thing is to balance the temporary strength given by the system with the basic strength and skills added by the king.

This book is full of good books in Tomato. Maybe at first I thought that King, who is a local aborigine, would not be as good-looking as time travel, but after reading it, I found that the storyline written by the author gradually made King get rid of the timidity and fear in the original work, and became the real strongest man on the surface with a heroic heart. Really touched

The disadvantages have been changed. It is no longer a three-minute experience card. It is an invincible cultivation style that interprets the heart of a true hero [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The author's early understanding of the character's personality is undoubtedly qualified, and it is not a mindless and cool novel. However, my biggest concern did arise during the reading, which is the unrealistic portrayal of the female characters, the labeled tsundere, bitch plot, and the plot of feeling powerless and frustrated by the power of her colleagues to the point of getting drunk, which diluted Tatsumaki's character background of being aloof and having a strong personality core. But I still think the author deserves recognition and encouragement, because only works that are superficial enough will not make me think of these. It is precisely because the author put in his thinking that I took this work seriously. Keep reading

It's great to see, women turn into men, men turn into superheroes, cats turn into dogs, and dogs turn into monkeys [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][please update][please update][please update][please update]

Nice! I will find time to re-read it (I don't have much time now). The character portrayal is very comfortable. I really want to travel through the past and taste the king's craftsmanship! 😢 I wish the author to be happy every day, do what you want to do, and don't force yourself too much 🍉 Just wait for updates 😋

I've read so many One Punch Man fanfics. This is also a classic time travel king, but the system setting is a little novel, but not completely absent. Fortunately, the author's writing is good, and the plot is relatively smooth now, making it worth a read. Wrong. Originally I wanted to say Aboriginal King because I haven't read any articles about Aboriginal King.

The first fifty chapters are quite good. There are no poisonous points. It is refreshing but not boring. It is coincidental but not embarrassing or inappropriate. It also fits the character. The author must have read One Punch Man. As an ordinary person, King will be afraid of powerful disasters and want to retreat, but he will strengthen his inner courage when protecting others. I really like this.

It's good to watch. It tied the game in three days. It's very to my liking. Needless to say, it's very refreshing. The author has a very good grasp of the characters in the original work. Each character has its own growth. Every change in the protagonist's mentality and the strengthening of other characters are traceable. The logic is clear and there is no feeling of hydrology. Originally, I was obsessed with the CP of Saitama Tatsumaki, but I feel that the CP of King Tatsumaki in this book is also very delicious. Saitama and Fubuki can be described more, so that I can experience the CP of Saitama Fubuki. There are also some bad things that I personally think, such as the worldview of other works. When I saw this kind of article, I basically gave up on it. However, the author's plot was so good that the shortcomings were not covered up, so I continued reading... But I still want to try not to incorporate the skills and weirdos into other works. It's acceptable to get some good designs from other works, but characters from other works should not appear in the plot. The appearance of the five Zofie and the description of Beria shocked me... I still don't want to see too many detailed descriptions of characters from other works when I read a fan of a work. The author should pay attention to it￣ ￣)σ There is nothing else. The more I read, the less I read. I wish the author a spring of wisdom. If you are stuck, what should I read? ()