Night Pardoner

It's a good book, but I can't give it full marks. I think the subject matter is good. You will understand the advantages after reading the book, I will only mention the highlights. This book uses a large number of words to describe the male protagonist's inner monologue and analysis of the situation to reflect the male protagonist's rationality. The dominant thing in a novel should be its plot core. It's not the male protagonist's monologue. This book often breaks into long bursts of analysis and monologues mid-conversation. Then, just as the plot was reaching its climax, it was interrupted by monologues and analysis. Then there is the plot of Wei and Jin. To be honest, I really don't understand why the male protagonist wants to avenge Wei Jin so much. Logically speaking, their relationship can only be regarded as colleagues. The male protagonist's emotions are far-fetched, and this plot feels a bit forced to attract hatred. Even if the male protagonist wants to kill Nie Xun, it should be out of his humiliation to himself, not out of revenge for Wei and Jin. Overall, it's a good book, with some quirks, but the flaws don't hide the good points.

This is based on the author's previous book, which was also a perfect work, but I personally feel that this book is much better than the previous one. I probably read more than 500 chapters of the last book, but I don't really want to read it. This book feels like I can keep following it forever. The setting is very interesting. Every term such as twilighter, lamplighter, and night guest has a sense of story. The rhythm of the opening is also very tight. The character creation, world view presentation, and plot foreshadowing have not fallen behind at all. In addition, the author has always been a strong point, and the portrayal of characters from all walks of life is also online. It's really hard to find such a patient author of old white novels nowadays. Please read and cherish them.

Brothers, here is the long review. It is absolutely true. I am a bookworm who has been reading Tomato for 6 years. To summarize, IQ is online, humane, in-depth, novel in plot, humorous in language, and group portraits. There is too much history in Tomato, and there are only a few good ones, including Zone 9, Dragon City, The Early Ninth Empire, God Eaters, Under the City, etc. (I personally like group portraits). The beginning of this book is heart-stopping, the setting is novel, and the human nature is deeply portrayed. It is a little more awesome than the beginning of the author's previous book (the beginning of the previous book was very awesome). Lao Li is really talented. I have been short of books for a few months, and I want to wait for this book to read again. I just can't bear it anymore. I didn't bother to comment, but you are so awesome. I'm sorry if I don't comment on your writing style and ideas. In general, everyone is smart, everyone's character is outstanding, and the protagonist's growth process is not abrupt. There is no absolute right or wrong, only positions. Good depth, five-star praise! Brother Ma, update! ! !

It's good to watch, and has a bit of the flavor of "Under the City", but overall it looks very different. Yami is similar to Li Tiandao in the coffin. (It) They make the protagonist stronger, but it feels like there is a malicious intention without knowing the purpose. Other characters are also described with flesh and blood, such as Liang Chao, who has a hard time balancing loyalty and filial piety, Huo Kui, who is responsible for the team, etc. In short, I believe this book will also achieve good results. Come on, Lao Ma. [Smile]

Finished reading it in one sitting! It still continues the intensity and excitement of "The Offender", with clear logic and interlocking links. And the setting of some names is very clever. For example, the Information Bureau, which specializes in intelligence, uses "library" to describe it. This is something I did not expect. When I think about it, it is really very appropriate and completely in line with people's desire for information! A good novel is about the depiction of characters. Whether they are protagonists, supporting characters or cannon fodder, they all have very clear descriptions. For example, the protagonist's younger brother Yang, the helplessness, helplessness, desire to survive, and twisted psychological characteristics of a low-level person, as well as the fear of death, were portrayed in just a few chapters. Especially Brother Chao and Brother Jin, who are not Liu, are really relatable. This kind of false friendship that happened by chance, in the end, they protected Chen Yan's dignity and secret with their lives. Although the protagonist is very rational and a little too rational, he is ultimately made more complicated by this inexplicable emotion, that is, growth! As for the plot, it goes without saying that there are constant reversals, a tight rhythm, and the IQ of all the members is online. Even the most inconspicuous supporting characters have basic logical support. At the same time, the protagonist's growth slowly begins to change from a silly and naive person. Although the process is a bit twisty and long, this slow transformation process is often the most exciting and attractive. Finally, I would like to make two requests to Lao Ma: First, don't make it unfinished, and don't make it too big like the "offenders", so as not to end it in such a hurry in the later stage! By the way, the author likes to create dream settings. There is something in the protagonist that can help grow. In fact, there is no need to do this next time, hehe, but this setting is not bad! I bring it up here because this dream is basically the same as "the one who committed the crime"! Second, update it quickly, it's not enough. For a book-hungry person like me, these chapters are simply not enough. Update it quickly, update it quickly, speed up the progress! Lao Ma, have you really not saved your manuscript? 🥲

The world view is similar to the previous one, but there are differences. I have only seen a dozen pictures now, and I am looking forward to the plot behind it. The writing is as good as ever, and both the villains and the heroes have IQs. It feels so awkward, after chapter 20. After chapter 50, I felt that it was very confusing. I talked about a lot of useless things without summarizing them. I wanted to write an inscrutable feeling, but it was very annoying.

I'm addicted after reading it for a while. This book is interesting. I hope Ma Ge polishes it well and carves it carefully. It is definitely a 9.6 Article at least. I just want to update it ten times a day.

[Shy] The writing is good, a rare group portrait, although the chapters are a bit short, but I am looking forward to the next plot, but it is a single heroine or no cp (still hope there is no cp)

The first time I read Lao Li's book was Under the Shangcheng. It was really a masterpiece. I followed every new book that came out. The grand scenes, detailed characters, and images in his works can arouse readers' interest in reading. I fully support it! ! !

The previous book was actually quite good. The story lines in the previous chapters were indeed well written, but I only saw about 600 chapters. Mainly because of the relationship issues between the male and female protagonists, I couldn't read it. The updated version of this book that I have seen so far is indeed as attractive as the previous book. It is very attractive and very beautiful. I am really picky about reading books. There are very few books that I can keep reading, but there are not many interesting things. I hope the author will make some progress in handling emotional lines. However, the author does a good job in shaping the characters. Whether it is the Wild Dog House in the previous book or Buliu in this book, they are all written with their own characteristics. Anyway, I am looking forward to the scene where the male protagonist develops a novice village and meets his sister. The author will update it soon! I don't know if there is a female protagonist in this book, and I don't know who the female protagonist is. I only said that the previous book had a male and female protagonist, but I don't know about this book. Anyway, I don't think Chen Yan has any ideas about the little princess and Xiao Ke. Also, my comment is to praise the author for his good writing, not a lightning protection post.

The style continues from Under the City. Those who like Under the City can read this book without thinking. I changed my mind. I'm a little bored.

Come on, come on, the author is really good at writing about human nature [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

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It is extremely delicate and the plot is very interesting. I was fascinated by it. I hope it can be as good as Shangcheng. Come on. Which one? Like me, he came from below the upper city.

It's very satisfying. I think it's better than the previous one. As far as the first hundred chapters are concerned, the emotional drama in the previous one was a bit sloppy and I couldn't stand it after reading a few hundred chapters. The progress of this book is neither slow nor fast, and the climax of the previous one is really enjoyable to read.

So pretty! ! This is the first time I read a book written by Li Ma. I thought it was very exciting and I couldn't help but comment after reading more than 100 chapters. In fact, I rarely watch male videos, but "The Night Pardoner" is completely based on my aesthetic point. It is not like the obvious protagonist halo in other novels. Chen Yan is hard-working, and the other characters are also very memorable, especially Lao Wei. The most unexpected [cry] [cry] and then Chao Ge MD likes him very much [cry] [cry] [cry] Very pitiful but extraordinarily sober. Finally, I am particularly looking forward to the way the protagonist grows up and kills everyone in the later stage [laughs] Come on, the author, more and more, more and more, the setting is novel and the highlights are outstanding and attractive to read!

The author is quite good at characterization. At least this book so far has not had any serious flaws, and the character creation and portrayal, as well as the plot design, are very good. It is easy for people to make contextual associations. I just hope that it will not be as unfinished as the previous book (because the last book was written too hastily) and there is no expected reversal. Compared with some of the achievements in the early and middle stages of the previous book, the final upper part was written a little hastily, and the plot design is not that complete. However, in terms of setting and combat power, it is still relatively novel, but the description of combat situations can be further optimized. I am still looking forward to the final direction of this book, and I hope the author can continue his efforts, take care of himself, and bring new surprises to readers. In addition, I also hope that the author can recover soon and regain health🌹. Hope we can encourage each other.

The writing is so beautiful. I really like reading this book. I can't read other books. I like the characters and various plots written by the author very much. It is very different from other books. [Love] [Love] [Love] Come on, author [blowing kiss]

Yes, the setting is relatively new, and maybe the protagonist is not that appealing, but the characterization and intrigue are very good and there are explanations, and the protagonist's performance and plot after the secret is exposed are not out of the ordinary. I am looking forward to it! @ Come on＾0＾~It will be more stable! [Please update]

It has been certified as a bookworm after reading for 2,000 hours. The author's description of the characters' actions is not just a simple logical battle of wits, a portrayal of human nature, the friendship of the world, etc. Every character in the book has flesh and blood, there is no brainless villain, and everyone's IQ is online. The most attractive thing to me is that the protagonist also has a golden finger, but the aura of the protagonist is not strong. There are no people who are good to the protagonist for no reason. There is no natural reason. Others will be good to him just because he is the protagonist. It is all driven by interests, and maybe with the blessing of emotions over time. Each book written by the author has a unique combat power system. There will be no collapse of combat power. Everyone can eat it with peace of mind.

Can it be cp-free? It's very well written. I like this kind of growth-oriented protagonist the most. It's so cool.

Finally, Lao Ma started writing again. It's so beautiful. It's like a high-quality article that was created by the golden finger of the system! Highly recommended! Who knows? There are a lot of system articles nowadays. There are too many articles where you can guess the plot with your eyes closed. This novel is simply a masterpiece! The AI ​​short drama is also great! I hope you don't live up to my expectations, at least two chapters a day, don't stop, please🥺

Seeing now, this is one of the top three male videos I watch. It shouldn't be just this popular. I really don't know how many times better than Zhanshen. . . And compared to the previous book, the characters are really fleshed out a lot. Well worth watching!

Super super super beautiful! There are hooks in every chapter, and those who hook them simply cannot stop! The author is just like showing off his skills! The plot strikes like a stroke of luck! The rhythm is very, very good! How could there be such a beautiful novel!

The front part is pretty good. Although the protagonist is portrayed as a rational character, he is actually a very emotional person. This contradiction causes the protagonist to sometimes make some irrational choices, which is quite interesting. The other supporting characters are also very distinctive. But Nie Xu is a clown character through and through. His appearance greatly affects the perception of that part of the plot from beginning to end, purely to promote the plot. Wei Jin's reactions are also somewhat conflicting, but overall they are not a failure. Nie Xu's setting in the plot is like a cockroach. He rushes out to disgust you. If you want to deal with him, it is difficult to do it (the fuse that causes many conflicts). To deal with him, you have to be disgusted. However, this character is difficult to leave and solve slowly later.

The writing is very good, and the characters are well-shaped. I just wait for Lao Ma to continue updating. It's too little and not enough to watch [angry]

It's very attractive. I feel full of reading. I'm looking forward to the protagonist and the dark story. The world view and the plot are also well connected.

Author, your writing is really good. The writing style, the environment and the psychology of the characters are very realistic, but Tomato is a bit blind. If I don't give you traffic, the infected works may really become gods in Tomato. I hope the author will continue to adhere to this style of painting. I will always support the author greatly (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

It looks good. Although the author has not finished it, I have been listening to the book without reading the text. It would be better if there are real people in the future, but the AI version is not bad. I like the plot. In fact, I can guess some of the subsequent plots. I hope the author will do more twists. I really like the character of Liang Chao. There are only a few chapters that can be regarded as the "growth" of the protagonist. Liang Chao's death was very painful to watch. If possible, I hope he really escapes and becomes a "vagrant". The protagonist grows up quickly. I recommend everyone to read it. I hope the author will update it soon. I will save it and read it later, otherwise it will not be enough. Hahaha

It seems to be a very good book at the moment. The actual quality is around 9.5, And it may be higher in the future. I kept the review, but I didn't like the protagonist, the author, and the style, so I withdrew it. If you don't have any books to read, you can give it a try