Reborn as a Parrot Chick, I Made the Whole Internet Weep

Okay~. ~This is the third book of this type that I have read~ (The first one writes about whales ~ The second one writes about dolphins ~ You write about birds 😂) ε=(´ο`*))) Oh, I'm really out of ideas~ I really wonder if they are acting in the plots I wrote. The plots are basically the same.

Well, all I can say is that this book was either written by AI or assisted by AI. Starting from the next twenty chapters, and going on, every chapter begins with this format: Ella's words were made into a text wallpaper by the audience, along with a screenshot of Su Wan standing at the entrance of the cave with wings spread, and the number of reposts on the three platforms combined broke another record. Ella's words hung in the live broadcast room all night, and by the next morning there were still new viewers asking about the cause and effect. The scene of Carlos squatting motionless on the branch was cut into hundreds of pictures. This sentence hung in the replay area of ​​the live broadcast room for three whole days, and was discussed by the audience for thousands of floors. The scene of Su Wan actively leaning towards Lana was cut into more than a dozen versions of short videos, with a total number of views on the entire network exceeding 50 million. This is just three of the chapters. I'm at my wits end, really every chapter! All... Uh-huh, dddd

The writing is superb, and the introduction is so popular that I almost didn't want to click in. The author must have studied birds, and the animal behavior patterns in it are very professional. The writing is also great. If I write it down normally, it will also be on the high score list!

AI assists in picking up the flavor. It is recommended that it be better if you change it manually.

It looks great, but some parts of the AI ​​feel are still too heavy. I need to fix it a bit. It's good-looking.

Progress: 50 It's super pretty, but it's too seedy. I feel that the author is quite professional in bird observation and is in line with reality. Even if the protagonist has a system, the functions are more realistic, and he may not develop in the direction of immortality or fantasy in the future.

It's true that it's very beautiful, but why do so many similar articles feature a boy with autism or something else? And then, which boy does he make a big change because he saw what happened to the protagonist who turned into an animal? I like this article because it's not as serious as the others. OuO, but I still don't understand why it's like this. This book is really good. I actually read it too much and I feel a little disgusted when I see these plots. Some of the descriptions are so overdone that the readers' attention is diverted from the protagonist to the sick little boys or girls. They constantly create difficulties and there are big loopholes in the plot content. Every time I see this, I feel that my whole body is exhausted. The person who reads it is very weak and angry. If there are readers who often read books in this area, you may know what I am talking about. But the author also wrote well, but he had big loopholes and caused too much suffering, which diverted the reader's attention from the protagonist to the sick boys and girls. But it is undeniable that what they wrote was very good. It is normal for loopholes to appear in the first time. Well, I don't know when I will see a similar book without these contents, or with less content. I don't care if I will be insulted by others if I post this. I just want to express my point of view. If it makes you feel uncomfortable, you can chat with me.

Beautiful, very well written Someone previously commented that it was written by AI, but I didn't believe it. But when I read it here, the writing was really messy and completely inconsistent. I remember at the end of another chapter, Lanna knew that the heroine had a system, and then there was no follow-up. Then suddenly the heroine was able to talk to Lanna, and I didn't know what she was talking about in this chapter. The heroine and her mother discussed the past life.

Very novel subject matter and narrative angle. I feel like I am a third-party (text version) live broadcast audience (that is, there are more viewing angles, not just 360-degree camera, but also multi-space and multi-dimensional) Live broadcast content: Observe Lana's dying (or dead) chicks struggling to survive and grow up healthily, as well as their interactions with the other birds. The eating habits, natural enemies, group emotions, role division, and battle plans of blue-violet macaw chicks are quite interesting.

The book is very nice, but I would like to make a big suggestion to the author. Can you not rewrite the words of the previous chapter at the beginning of each chapter? Can you describe humans a little less?