Re0: a Different Life in Another World

Let me start by saying that I have only seen the clip. I didn't understand this paragraph in Chapter 2. "Subaru Natsuki slowly raised his head, and a boy was calling his name, but he couldn't see his face clearly, and his consciousness slowly disappeared." "The sky was getting dark, and I finally saw the pub in the distance. I slowly walked towards it." Is this a return? Why did you suddenly come back? I don't quite understand [what] It appeared at the end of Chapter 26, and Emilia said "That's it!", And it appeared again in Chapter 27. Is this a return? I'm a little confused [rolls eyes] I feel like I wrote a little faster. There are some places where I feel like I could have written more, probably about appearance, expressions, dialogue, and the like. Are there still some places that I don't know are my fault? I can't read it fluently, but the rest is okay.

Everyone, this is my first time writing a fan fiction. Re0 is my favorite anime. If you like to watch it, please rate it and leave a comment. Thank you!

Yes, the description is smooth and there is nothing awkward about it. The protagonist is also very smart and has the same special abilities as Natsuki Ang, but of course the price is about the same (). However, the content is still very warm, and it is a rare first-person perspective, which makes it quite immersive. Highly recommended👍👍👍

From the current point of view, the first-person narrative is more demanding on the brain, but the immersion is good. The problem is that the progress is too fast now. I am afraid that it will not be able to compare with the old thief Chang Yue.

It can be very beautiful (♥∀♥). Does the protagonist really have no golden finger?

So far, there seems to be no problem, and I hope it will remain the same.