Quick Travel: the Male Protagonist's Vicious Bai Yueguang

It looks good, but I hope I can stop gambling in the future, because my friend's father likes gambling and makes his family restless. It makes me a little stressed [face covering]

I've always been very tolerant of novice wives, as long as they don't engage in fraud and torture the protagonist to death, but there are some issues I still want to say. My wife's current writing style is indeed insufficient. In terms of character, she wants to create a vicious beauty of the fishing type, but after reading the whole story, her viciousness is not written. On the contrary, she feels more like an old lady. A good guy but an unlucky guy, and other characters are also averagely created. Some of them are not that the personality is not obvious, but that the personality does not match what he does. Some of the character traits are too simple, and the plot is better than the character creation. Maybe it is because I like this kind of subject, but it needs to be strengthened. Let's talk about the writing, and I think the main character is too much of a cheat in the first world🤔Every girl wants to marry him, and some even do whatever it takes, which makes me feel very... Mary Sue, it doesn't mean that there are too many female characters. My suggestion is to add a few more positive characters. If there are too many vicious supporting characters, it will easily lead to the issue of loving your daughter. To be honest, there are quite a lot of problems after reading it, but I can still read it. Maybe it's because I really like this type of writing. I hope my wife will get better and better. Everyone's writing style has improved from bad to good [send heartfelt]. Yes, and I discovered that another major problem is that this novel is not very rigorous. Although some things are not unacceptable, such as being able to drive after drinking, and the original protagonist Shou can work wherever he wants. I thought that kind of wealthy family The Aristocratic Family has requirements for screening people. In fact, it is okay to write them down, but it feels like it will make people question it, and some more rigorous people may feel that it insults their IQ and will attract malicious low scores. If necessary, you still need to carefully understand the rules of life and be stricter.

This book is very beautiful, very sweet, and has won my heart. I will give you a heavy reward, including ten thousand taels of gold, ten thousand taels of silver, a mansion, a pair of Ruyi jade, and the title of the best author. I am hereby titled Concubine Yong'an. Come on, noble concubine, I believe you can write a novel that makes me ecstatic, unable to put it down, and never forget it.

Can you please update it quickly? Oh my god, it's so beautiful. You did this so that it completely matches my xp. This is the first time in my life that I have read a book that suits my taste. Holy shit, I love it so much. It's so good! ! ! ! I love every bit of it so much. Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is definitely my favorite book I have ever read. It perfectly matches all my favorite points. [Send my heart][Send my heart] Please update it quickly. Can you update Chapter 100 immediately? Damn, it's so good.

Very friendly to control. The world of the first plane is really well created. I feel it is the best plane written at this stage. The 1st male is really doted on and the plot is also very good. The author's writing style is also very good, but the biggest shortcoming of this book is [disadvantage: the ending of each plane is very hasty! It's like a story was suddenly cut off! The author said that he wanted to write an open ending. The idea is very good, but I really don't understand the author's writing. It is obviously a good plane, but it is suddenly cut off, and a new plane is immediately opened in the next chapter. It is a pure and seamless connection, but it is still very unnatural and weird. But this book really made me feel better. If you don't mind the author's forcibly truncated writing style, you can take a look at it. It will make you feel uncomfortable after reading it.

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos. The name is also good. I also like the content. Keep up the good work.

I just finished watching the first world now. I really like this kind of character plot, especially the modern wealthy family. The bad thing is that in the first world, Father Song didn't fill the hole, right? The ending is too hasty and gives people the feeling of a forced ending. Please work harder on your writing. I really like this kind of characters and plot, so as long as there are no big problems later, I will keep watching. Come on, author [blowing kiss] I have finished reading all the worlds so far. It's really good. But I feel like I don't have many sincere friends around Yuyu. I like modern times and I hope it's more modern. It would be better if Yuyu's character design is more vicious. I hope Gong's bad behavior is more obvious. I'm too fed up with this. It would be better if the writing is more indulgent [shy]

It's very, very, very, very beautiful. It's not cruel at all. It's just too short!!!!

The writing is quite nice, but there are too many exclamation marks, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read in many places.

Good-looking, the main character is well established

Can my wife do a little extra for the first part?

It looks good, it looks good. I haven't read this kind of article for a long time. I didn't expect it to be so good. The author must not stop updating it [Blow kiss]

It's very well written. Madam, come on and support you.

It's pretty good, but some typos need to be corrected

It's beautiful, why is the score so low? [Crying] The author's three books are all to my liking [full] [full] [full]

Holy shit, it looks so good and it matches my xp perfectly! It looks good! Can you update it to chapter 100 for me instantly? I really like it. I will always support you, boss.

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

It looks good and I like this kind of character setting. Keep it up, the author [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

I'm really begging you. This book is so good. But without traffic, it's going to die. The author hasn't updated it for a long time [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

It looks great, come on!

I particularly like the story of Song Beichuan and Qi Yu in the previous part. Even though I haven't finished reading it yet, it's very interesting in the first part!

Very nice, will update soon😚😚

It's so delicious

The plot is very well written [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Beautiful, very beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Recommend! ! !

The author is Dada Beet Bar. It's delicious. ˶>ᗜ<˶

Very nice. I like Bai Yueguang's writing.

The writing is really good. I recommend this book. If you are in a book shortage, please read it👀

Holy shit! It's really beautiful. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]Update quickly. I can't get enough!

I really like the first story, it suits my taste so much