Time Travel Villains, There's Something Very Wrong with the Heroines

Some places are unreasonable, and it is necessary for the plot to ask. It's normal to advance the story by creating problems, but have you ever thought about whether the problems you create are reasonable or not? Don't let the author/Tiandao take action. There are some places where the logic does not make sense, but the author is a newcomer after all, and it is excellent to write like this. The upright description of the protagonist is the highlight of this book, or the image of some characters is the highlight of this book. I can give it four stars. The following is my personal subjective opinion. First of all, it is the upright image of the protagonist. It is because of this that I can stay and read. Moreover, this article does not have the uncomfortable points of general system articles, such as the situation of System > Protagonist. Moreover, this article looks like a classic cultivation article, but not very similar (the classic here refers to articles in the same line). So I give it four stars. This suggests that the author pays attention to the logic of the writing. I wish the author your book will be a hit.

The real author is the top one. Brothers, I have been reading comments and the like, and there are indeed many problems. I am not denying the use of AI in this novel, but the anchor is a newbie, and some parts are indeed not good enough, which affects the reading experience of readers. However, I see that some readers are still willing to stay and read my novels. I am also very touched here. If readers have any comments or other questions in the future, you can reply below this post. Reply I will reply to those problematic chapters and problematic areas. After the author completes the revision, he will reply to each one. Or if you have any new ideas or suggestions for future plot development, I would like to thank you all very much. Thank you very much. Whether it is a good or bad review, it is a very important experience. As for the fact that the person is resurrected but has a grave, it is mainly for the need of some things later. I am thinking about this world view. Everyone is welcome to put forward your opinions. Thank you⣠⠛⠛⣄⣠⠶ ⠛⠛⠛⠶⣄⣠⠛⠛⣄ ⢿ ⠋ ⠙⡿ ⣾ ⸝⸝⩌ ༝ ⩌⸝⸝ ⣷ ⠻⣄ ⣠⠟ ⣠⡿ 𐙚 ⢿⣄ ⠙⠛⠋ ⠙⠛⠋  ⢿⣀⣀⡿ ⢿⣀⣀⡿

I think it's okay. Although the subject matter is a bit old, whether the old subject matter is written well or not depends on the writing method. The author has done a good job with the details and suspense in some places. It just has a fascinating feeling. People can't help but read on and want to know what the purpose of the junior sister is and what the feelings towards the senior brother are. It would be better if the following descriptions can be more detailed and the feelings are more delicate.

Come on, the protagonist's three views are quite upright. I'm looking forward to the story behind. Come on, come on, come on.

Yes, but don't have too many heroines. It's about quality rather than quantity. In my opinion, less than three is enough.

It's so well written that I can't even imagine that this is actually a harem novel.

The AI ​​smell is very strong, but the author is quite responsible. At least he probably read it himself and modified it.

Yes, it's interesting

What you wrote earlier is really good

Trial of the Sword Monument is very well written, and the characters come alive immediately.

It's a good book. Although it has some AI polish, the characters are clearly outstanding. It's a pity there won't be a follow-up.