After Becoming a Dungeon NPC, I Started Planning to Become a God

It's nice to read, and the author has a lot of thoughts. But I feel like there are too many men in the book. For example, the bounty hunter can be either male or female, but why is it not female? It can be seen that the author is carefully creating strong women, but I personally hope that there will be more female characters, both good and bad, important and unimportant!

Another article with a heroine, no poison, no frustration, very refreshing. Please appreciate the words that I think are very good that appear in the original article. "If kindness has no edge, it is cowardice; if holiness does not dare to face the darkness, it is hypocrisy." "My dear, living is inherently troublesome. But often only these constant troubles can prove that you are still alive and well, right?" "You just need to remember-" "When everyone accuses you of being wrong, you can still raise your head proudly and choose the answer you think is the most correct."

The plot and story are all very good. I didn't read the introduction before, so I thought it was a routine article. The results are okay, relatively new. A bit of a stereotype though. But it's not too heavy. An example is that you could clearly write the owner of the castle directly, but instead write it as the mistress of the castle. It feels like it's a bit implicit that the owner of the castle is a man, but it's not obvious. And there are only one or two examples of stereotypes so far. And because I have strict requirements on stereotypes, many people like what I posted before probably don't think it is a stereotype. It is suggested that the author should use neutral words when writing in the future. Otherwise, men and women would be separated instead of using neutral words for one and gendered words for the other.

I don't know if it's a problem with the author's writing style, but I feel like the heroine has been being played by a wandering businessman.

It's very interesting, but I don't agree with some of the comments made by some men. The first heroine doesn't have an ambiguous relationship with the men, they are not even friends, they are usually enemies. The second protagonist's core subordinates are girls, and their subordinates are girls. The core supporting character Elf is also a girl, and so is the rabbit. Girls, the Xiami who builds the road are three local male natives, they are normal people with good personalities. Most of the enemies of the protagonist are boys and few are girls. In fact, I think the plot in it is also okay. The copy of the tree spirit mercenary sentient beings. In the end, except for Tutu, the protagonist and a crazy male Xiami, basically everyone died. To sum up, this is a very normal book. I personally hate books where the heroine is surrounded by a bunch of men, and I especially hate novels that are ambiguous with no CP. This novel does not have such a look and feel throughout the whole novel. The position of the men in it is also quite comfortable, at least it does not make me feel very annoyed.

It's good to watch, the heroine is very beautiful and sassy, ​​and it took off after about 40 pictures. However, the first major plot describes more about the heroine's standards of good and evil, and the morality of human nature. Some of the subplots are also described in detail. In fact, it's just a bit lacking. I hope the author will write more [laughs]

Pain will never succumb to hypocritical redemption, only revenge is the only truth of blood and fire! If kindness has no edge, it is cowardice; if holiness does not dare to face the darkness, it is hypocrisy. In a world filled with injustice, forgiveness without price is a second murder of the victim. My dear, life is inherently troublesome. But often only these constant troubles can prove that you are still alive and well, right? Isolde (Yu Lingye), you don't have to be a perfect saint, you don't have to forgive all suffering, and you don't have to force yourself to become a blind light without shadow. You just need to remember—— When everyone accuses you of being wrong, you can still raise your head proudly and choose the answer you think is the most correct. I like it very much😍 The writing style, characters, and concept are all very nice. Ahhhh! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! !

Although he is a boss, he is not a villain. He is revengeful, cold-hearted and enthusiastic, and punishes the greedy. Are you a ranger? [Laughing evilly] The castle can be lived in. I wonder if other supporting characters who have been rewritten will join the heroine camp. The world view is quite grand. There are gods, demigods, hero kings, orcs, religious countries, the Holy See, the Black Tower, and the Garden of Emerald Sleep (which feels like elves), but they have not been detailed yet, and there is no connection yet. The protagonist's outlook is quite normal. As a boss, he neither kills NPCs nor has evil desires. It's just that the rewards you get are a bit too targeted. They are all for the benefit of the heroine. They are either suitable for the heroine or the maid. You can use some new tricks, such as setting up some foreshadowing or expanding the lineup of the heroine to make the rewards more diverse. I feel that the boss's strength is not fully reflected, the combat power is not high enough, the boss goes out to fight monsters himself, there are too few teammates, the enemy rating is not high, the map expansion is not high, and it feels like it has not left the novice village. Now it's a bit like a high-level player first showing his talents in the Novice Village, but can he be more powerful as a boss, such as the administrator playing in the Novice Village [laughing] I remember the original bunker owner called himself a demigod (seems like)? The original owner in the body can also help.

It's tied. There are no bad points at the moment. I hope to remain a lone wolf. There are still some small flaws in the text, and there is still a lot of room for improvement in language skills. The concept is quite good. I recommend reading it. The author will update it a lot. It's too little and it's not enough to read.

I like smart protagonists who successfully counterattack from a character who is not even an elite monster to become the boss of the scene, the Soulweaver Witch. This part is particularly interesting. Then the businessman came and skipped a large part of it. Now I am watching the heroine as Reina to eradicate the roots + take revenge. Because I skipped it, I don't know if there are any disobedient words, but the plot and the heroine setting can be given five stars. If there are, I will reduce the stars.

Very good-looking and very interesting. It is the first time I read this kind of subject. It is very novel. It is a big heroine. The content is not laggy. I hope the author will update it soon. I hope he will not give up. It has already tied it. There is no male protagonist for the time being. For me, it is not a big deal. I hope to see the heroine develop.

It looks good, the story background is very new, the power system is not cliché, the heroine is super strong, and several supporting characters are also well portrayed. Come on, author, work hard and become as big as a cat without being bald as soon as possible! (It feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings, especially the death in the past that feels like a bad deal. I'm so curious about what this actually is) Author, write quickly!

The world view is grand, the setting is interesting, and the plot is great. You must keep creating, it's very interesting and exciting! The heroine is very smart and has a very tenacious character. I look forward to the subsequent development of the story. She will become stronger step by step and will never be aggrieved again. Let's write the protagonist to the end.

This kind of article about a player becoming a big boss in an NPC is rare. The subject matter is relatively novel, the writing style is delicate and smooth, and some sentences are beautiful and thought-provoking, going straight to the essence. The protagonist is currently more human than divine, and has not completely turned into a boss in terms of behavior and mentality. He has principles and bottom lines, and can be considered chaotic and orderly. The protagonist sees the world more from the player's perspective, and does not join the boss's communication circle. Opportunities must be selectively selected in each circle. The opportunities in the player circle are all known. The aboriginal circle is also divided into geographical boundaries, but he has not entered. The boss circle has managed to get in through wandering merchants, and he knows some opportunities. Not surprisingly, the protagonist should be able to use a lot of vests in the later stages. Now the core of the article is that after the original player becomes the NPC boss, the core purpose of the heroine is to take revenge, find opportunities, and become stronger. The common point is to become stronger. If you want to write a good character, you must first analyze the character's personality, purpose and reason, and what (good/bad) method will be used to complete it. Looking at it now, there are no problems, but the plot is a bit scattered. It seems that the heroine takes one step at a time, doing a little here and a little there. Although they are all successful, there is no single thread that can tie them together. Female-driven stories of this genre are usually stories with a female protagonist. There are male protagonists, but there are fewer of them. Maybe the author of this book has an important role in the setting of a woman, and ordinary passers-by cannon fodder are male. Otherwise, it would not be considered a story with a female protagonist, but an ordinary female-centered story with a female protagonist. With this subject matter and writing style, it can be written very well, and the upper limit is almost unlimited. In my opinion, this book has a tendency to become a god. The premise is that the soul of each character must be brought to life, which may be difficult for a new author. Wait for the 500,000-word book test to see if it will skyrocket or become a small hit. I am very optimistic about this book. Come on, author. Although I have a little high expectations for you, in fact, you are not cheating. I will be very satisfied if you can update it. Everything else is the icing on the cake. (Don't be fooled, good writing is hard to find, and good writing that can be read right is even harder to find)

My favorite sentence in the entire text so far "Isolde, you don't have to be a perfect saint, you don't have to forgive all suffering, and you don't have to force yourself to become a blind light without any shadow." "You just need to remember-" "When everyone accuses you of being wrong, you can still raise your head proudly and choose the answer you think is the most correct."

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I think it's okay, but the time traveler and the rebirth experience are very typical. If you don't like to read this part, you can choose to skip it. At present, other parts are okay [please read carefully]. After all, it is a new book. I wish this book will get better and better.

I don't know how to evaluate it. I just want to say, author, I love you deeply! Thank you for letting me read your book when I was so bored today. I feel like I have hope in life. Thank you! (Crying!) Friends! This is so beautiful! ! Look! !

Very nice setting, mark a witch novel The writing is very good. I really like the part about choosing a vest for the first time. The heroine finally chose herself, Yu Lingye. I really like the author's definition of victims and good and evil, and his views are very correct. I really want to know where Isolde's soul went in the end. Will Isolde, who delivered the future, become a corrupt queen and lose the future that can carry holy attributes? Narcissus is delicious😋I want to see more interactions between Isolde and Yu Lingye

It's a nice Western fantasy, but the content is still being updated and it's too short and unsatisfactory. Every character is very vivid, and the heroine is in line with the traditional image of the black witch, but she lacks some sense of justice in modern humans. It is a very good work with new ideas and flesh and blood. Just over a hundred chapters are not enough [Adoration]

Good book no one series! [Adoration] What I like about Gold Digging: 1. The main plot of revenge in the beginning and the human game. I like the maid and the castle. 2Businessmen and the Temple's World View (Jpj) 3. Change your identity to the tree spirit and deliver it from the author's perspective

It's very good-looking. Some of the supporting characters here are not just to complement the protagonist, but also have their own strengths and weaknesses. There are no real good people in this book. The complexity of human nature is well reflected. Some died because of greed, and there were also people who initially took risks because of external possessions, but in the end voluntarily took the back seat. This is very nice. Strong recommendation. However, some babies may think that the protagonist's previous life was too humble, so they might as well imagine that the current protagonist is the real him or her. Reading the article will be better this way. All I can say is it looks great. The only uncomfortable thing is that I am so anxious about raising books. Can you update 100 chapters in one day? [I'm about to cry]

It's really good. The author must keep updating it. It's not enough. It's a very interesting article for me. I believe the rating will increase in the future. Come on, author, come on, keep updating more.

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Although sometimes I am not interested, it is generally worth reading. The author can also add a little, um, other interesting descriptions or words, but the reading process is not so boring. It is faster and more [licking the screen]

It looks good, I like reading this kind of NPC player stories, and the black holy unicorn and stuff are so cool! Moreover, the heroine's double cultivation of demon and holy spirit skills is also very exciting!

Damn, that wandering businessman is so interesting. He's like an awesome Klass. He's so charming.

I feel that the setting and world view are quite interesting. Although some comments say that there are slightly more male passers-by, I think it is different from those novels where the supporting characters are all male. The female protagonist has no ambiguous relationship with them, and the highlights are basically female supporting characters. It does not bore me while reading, which is quite good.

The protagonist is clearly portrayed very well. There are also a few lines around me that are also very richly written. Super super like it. I just wish the protagonist had a little more skills. A little more flashy. A little more combative.

The author's writing style is very good, and some of his words touched me deeply. I beg the author to write books for the rest of his life! Don't stop!