After Becoming a Dungeon NPC, I Started Plotting to Become a God

It's nice to read, and the author has a lot of thoughts. But I feel like there are too many men in the book. For example, the bounty hunter can be either male or female, but why is it not female? It can be seen that the author is carefully creating strong women, but I personally hope that there will be more female characters, both good and bad, important and unimportant!

Another article with a heroine, no poison, no frustration, very refreshing. Please appreciate the words that I think are very good that appear in the original article. "If kindness has no edge, it is cowardice; if holiness does not dare to face the darkness, it is hypocrisy." "My dear, living is inherently troublesome. But often only these constant troubles can prove that you are still alive and well, right?" "You just need to remember-" "When everyone accuses you of being wrong, you can still raise your head proudly and choose the answer you think is the most correct."

The plot and story are all very good. I didn't read the introduction before, so I thought it was a routine article. The results are okay, relatively new. A bit of a stereotype though. But it's not too heavy. An example is that you could clearly write the owner of the castle directly, but instead write it as the mistress of the castle. It feels like it's a bit implicit that the owner of the castle is a man, but it's not obvious. And there are only one or two examples of stereotypes so far. And because I have strict requirements on stereotypes, many people like what I posted before probably don't think it is a stereotype. It is suggested that the author should use neutral words when writing in the future. Otherwise, men and women would be separated instead of using neutral words for one and gendered words for the other.

It's very interesting, but I don't agree with some of the comments made by some men. The first heroine doesn't have an ambiguous relationship with the men, they are not even friends, they are usually enemies. The second protagonist's core subordinates are girls, and their subordinates are girls. The core supporting character Elf is also a girl, and so is the rabbit. Girls, the Xiami who builds the road are three local male natives, they are normal people with good personalities. Most of the enemies of the protagonist are boys and few are girls. In fact, I think the plot in it is also okay. The copy of the tree spirit mercenary sentient beings. In the end, except for Tutu, the protagonist and a crazy male Xiami, basically everyone died. To sum up, this is a very normal book. I personally hate books where the heroine is surrounded by a bunch of men, and I especially hate novels that are ambiguous with no CP. This novel does not have such a look and feel throughout the whole novel. The position of the men in it is also quite comfortable, at least it does not make me feel very annoyed.

I don't know if it's a problem with the author's writing style, but I feel like the heroine has been being played by a wandering businessman.

It is certain that this was definitely delayed by the title of the book. If you don't look at the content carefully, many people will regard it as a template article with unlimited streaming and horror game copies. But in fact, the author has built a very grand and detailed world, which is really amazing and great. Even when I finished reading it, I had a feeling that the 200 chapters were just a little bit of what we had seen, which was too little. The author is really talented, I hope it will be updated soon. The scheming and other scheming of many of the previous heroines are really awesome.

It's good to watch, the heroine is very beautiful and sassy, ​​and it took off after about 40 pictures. However, the first major plot describes more about the heroine's standards of good and evil, and the morality of human nature. Some of the subplots are also described in detail. In fact, it's just a bit lacking. I hope the author will write more [laughs]

It's tied. There are no bad points at the moment. I hope to remain a lone wolf. There are still some small flaws in the text, and there is still a lot of room for improvement in language skills. The concept is quite good. I recommend reading it. The author will update it a lot. It's too little and it's not enough to read.

Pain will never succumb to hypocritical redemption, only revenge is the only truth of blood and fire! If kindness has no edge, it is cowardice; if holiness does not dare to face the darkness, it is hypocrisy. In a world filled with injustice, forgiveness without price is a second murder of the victim. My dear, life is inherently troublesome. But often only these constant troubles can prove that you are still alive and well, right? Isolde (Yu Lingye), you don't have to be a perfect saint, you don't have to forgive all suffering, and you don't have to force yourself to become a blind light without shadow. You just need to remember—— When everyone accuses you of being wrong, you can still raise your head proudly and choose the answer you think is the most correct. I like it very much😍 The writing style, characters, and concept are all very nice. Ahhhh! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! !

Although he is a boss, he is not a villain. He is revengeful, cold-hearted and enthusiastic, and punishes the greedy. Are you a ranger? [Laughing evilly] The castle can be lived in. I wonder if other supporting characters who have been rewritten will join the heroine camp. The world view is quite grand. There are gods, demigods, hero kings, orcs, religious countries, the Holy See, the Black Tower, and the Garden of Emerald Sleep (which feels like elves), but they have not been detailed yet, and there is no connection yet. The protagonist's outlook is quite normal. As a boss, he neither kills NPCs nor has evil desires. It's just that the rewards you get are a bit too targeted. They are all for the benefit of the heroine. They are either suitable for the heroine or the maid. You can use some new tricks, such as setting up some foreshadowing or expanding the lineup of the heroine to make the rewards more diverse. I feel that the boss's strength is not fully reflected, the combat power is not high enough, the boss goes out to fight monsters himself, there are too few teammates, the enemy rating is not high, the map expansion is not high, and it feels like it has not left the novice village. Now it's a bit like a high-level player first showing his talents in the Novice Village, but can he be more powerful as a boss, such as the administrator playing in the Novice Village [laughing] I remember the original bunker owner called himself a demigod (seems like)? The original owner in the body can also help.