Who Works a Day Job in a Death Instance?

The plot is very enjoyable. I quite like the heroine's character. She has a bottom line and is not a holy father, and she is not too selfish. However, there are still a few poisonous points: firstly, there are too many words of disobedience to women, and secondly, I don't understand why the heroine keeps Yaozu by her side. I thought the heroine took him home to silence him. In the end, she not only exposed her identity as a beta tester, but also took him through the dungeon. How could a girl who wanted to escape from her original family leave behind the sinner who had been favoring boys over girls for so many years? Finally, the female-to-male ratio is as high as 1:9! ! I'm so excited. I've never seen a major female protagonist whose friends are all male. The few girls who have appeared so far are also very stereotyped and ordinary, and they are not as exciting as Yaozu's character. . . .

It's okay, it's pretty good to watch, the protagonist is a bit of an invincible type, and the plot doesn't have any flaws. There are a few minor flaws. If you don't mind, you can continue watching: 1. The heroine takes the initiative to say humiliating words. I have read 70 chapters so far, and it has happened once. The frequency is low, but it has happened; 2. The young girl character is influenced by her mother and will win over the other two male characters. Putting aside these two points, I think this article is okay, so I'll give it four stars.

It's pretty good-looking, and the copy is quite new, but some of the descriptions are cumbersome and there are typos. The heroine is slowly growing up. One star will be added to the new text. It's a cool article, but the combat power is a bit strange. The heroine's assessment of the invisible NPC will actually die under the bomb made by players of several levels. Does the heroine have teleportation skills but they don't have it? No life-saving skills

The heroine is very calm and witty, I hope there will be more female characters. The colleague in the article, Xiao Liu, who loves drinking milk tea and eating fried chicken, initially thought he was a female colleague. He hoped that the heroine would not only have a younger brother but also a younger sister.

Very nice! What a surprise! At present, it seems that it belongs to Rotten Tomatoes, the plot is very smooth, the skills of the heroine are very exciting, the heroine is a talented person with brains, friends, it is worth trying! Recommend! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

The plot is just okay. But the AI ​​article is not very obvious at the beginning, it just smells of AI, but if you look at the back, you will find many traces of AI, especially the emphasis on "this is not cold-blooded" over and over again in the article, which made me almost stressed. The protagonist up to this point in my reading is neither a brave person nor a kind person. He is the type who only completes the task and survives. It will not automatically explore things outside the mission, it will not work hard to kill monsters, and there will be no more attempts.

The author really writes super well, but the updates are too slow [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Premonition that it will be popular [shy][shy] Every dungeon is very beautiful. I just hope that I don't have any contact with the official of this world. It's good to go behind the scenes and develop secretly. I feel that the heroine is still not cautious enough. In reality, she bravely breaks into the official base camp. In the game, she directly comes into contact with the official personnel of another world. There is a kind of unpleasant feeling that the heroine's identity has been stripped naked by others and left under the sun to watch without the heroine knowing it [grievance] [grievance] There may be too few chapters in the early stage and there are some frustrations. I hope it can be improved in the future and the heroine can secretly cheat on people behind her back [laughing] [laughing]

Looks good, but adds a lot of AI descriptions

The quality of the article itself is good, and it is most likely not an AI article. I have never seen an AI article of this quality. There are quite a few minor points, it just depends on whether you accept them or not. The biggest problem is that the author is a male, so except for the female protagonist, almost all the people who appear around the heroine in the article are men. Occasionally, there are women, but most of them watch the death of the heroine/bad guy role. On the contrary, there are men in the article who hug the thigh with small thoughts many times but are tolerated by the heroine/high-quality positive characters. Well, the good thing is that no one is very close to the heroine (except for the occasional male work partner who has a good relationship with the heroine in reality), and the sense of distance is maintained well. I won't go into other minor points. This depends on the specific individual. If the minor points make you panic, it is recommended to run away. After all, such minor points are generally the author's writing habits, and the chances of the author being willing to change them are slim. In terms of advantages, it is updated three times a day, and it seems quite inspiring and smooth so far. The author's writing style is also good enough and beautiful.

It's super good-looking. The heroine is sober and can strengthen herself. She doesn't just rely on others and has her own little brother. Super pretty, but a bit short. I hope the author can update the article soon [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]