[Naruto] [Fan] [Invention] [Daily] [Master and Disciple]
Traveling to Konoha, he was picked up by a man wearing slippers.
Some lucky people have enviable masters.
For example, if you become a disciple of Naruto, you will be at the top of the ninja world at the beginning.
For example, awakening the Blood Succession Limit, crushing all the way is fun from beginning to end.
For example, joining ANBU, licking blood at the edge of a knife, and counterattacking to become a hero.
But Naoto's master is called Orochimaru - a former S-class rebel ninja, active retired scientist, wearing wooden clogs on his feet and holding a teacup in his hand. His highest evaluation of his apprentice is "very average... But better than I imagined."
"Take your time."
Including the invention of the chakra circuit, the daily cheating between master and apprentice, and the cold-faced finishing touch of Siyue style. This is the story of a retired villain and his cheap apprentice who dislike each other but care about each other.
Reader comments
This book really has potential. The content is so heart-warming that it made my body warm. There is no OOC in the whole text, and the self-created characters are also very vivid. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! 😭🤲
Overall, it's pretty good, but the description is too complicated. It's a bit like I just piled up a lot of words and phrases but I don't know how to use them. It's quite tiring to read. To be honest, with this kind of writing, it's impossible not to know that the details are appropriate. The author probably shouldn't study it anymore (shrug).
Of course, if you use any assistance, just pretend I didn't say anything.
It gets a little better later on, but being able to write like this in daily life is considered amazing. As we all know, daily life is the most difficult to write. There are no twists and turns in the plot, no fighting scenes between characters, and no sensational drama. It is quite easy to write a running account, let alone at this point.
But again, if you use auxiliary tools, just pretend I didn't say anything.
This book really has potential. The content is so heart-warming that it made my body warm. There is no OOC in the whole text, and the self-created characters are also very vivid. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! 😭🤲
Overall, it's pretty good, but the description is too complicated. It's a bit like I just piled up a lot of words and phrases but I don't know how to use them. It's quite tiring to read. To be honest, with this kind of writing, it's impossible not to know that the details are appropriate. The author probably shouldn't study it anymore (shrug). Of course, if you use any assistance, just pretend I didn't say anything. It gets a little better later on, but being able to write like this in daily life is considered amazing. As we all know, daily life is the most difficult to write. There are no twists and turns in the plot, no fighting scenes between characters, and no sensational drama. It is quite easy to write a running account, let alone at this point. But again, if you use auxiliary tools, just pretend I didn't say anything.