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Overall it's pretty good, but I think there are a few issues that the author could take a look at! ① It can be seen that the author really wanted to write some sentences well, but in the novel it looks a bit strange and literary. ②Some plots are too streamlined and boring to read. ③The description of the protagonist can be less childish and childlike. Come on, author

From the front, the character of the protagonist is relatively weak, but it gets much better later. It seems to be more three-dimensional and not so one-sided. Mainly because I prefer the anchor whom the protagonist praises. It is not very one-sided, but it is more distinctive. The description at the end is not as literary as the previous description. It looks much better, and the writing style has improved.

I think it's very beautiful and the characters are very delicate. Please update more soon! Let me ask you quietly, is it more than 1V? [Send heart] [Send heart]

The subject matter is good, but the main character is a bit too squeamish, so please be careful if you don't accept it.

It was a bit boring to read, but overall it was okay.

It feels a little childish and then has a little bit of a feminine feel.

Delicious. Delicious. The system can be upgraded to add functions such as physical fitness, personal charm and temperament.

After going through the previous chapters, you can see that the writing is getting better and better in the later chapters. Some of the sentences in the early chapters are a bit literary, but they will become much better in the later chapters. Come on, author.

What a delicious novel. It tied the book in just one day. It's very cute every year [Sending my heart to you]

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