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[Demining this article: The pace of this article is very slow! It's not a refreshing pacing, so be prepared mentally before reading! /Penny is still an ordinary person, will grow up slowly, and will not have magic/Penny will not fall in love with any wizard in the original book/Penny will not love Lily unconditionally, and will not deliberately repair the sister relationship/Do not accept any behavior that uses Petunia as a holster/Do not beautify or smear any character/Can write about the magical world and the characters of the previous generation/I just want to write a story about an ordinary person seeing himself and accepting himself]
"Genus Petunia. Family Solanaceae."
"Petunia, family Solanaceae."
"Original from South America, it has strong vitality and strong invasiveness. It grows in wastelands and cracks between bricks."
"Symbolizing anger, resentment, and deep-seated jealousy."
"Bei dir ist es traut."
"With you by my side, I feel safe."
"Penny, be bold and bloom, I'm always here."
Reader comments
The book is well written and its world is not centered around just one type of shining person. It writes about the depression in a peaceful life and about Penny's quiet resistance. Many times we are angry not because of what our parents did, but precisely because of what our parents did not do. Not all are treated equally. The author depicts this emotion. She saw Penny. She saw the waves surging beneath the warmth of Penny's family. She saw Penny's emotions. What she writes is the reaction that a real human being would have, not a routine, and it is not just about emotions.
I cried several times while reading this book. Penny is really a very good child, a very good child. Petunia, please move forward boldly. Woohoo, I'm really looking forward to Penny's growth next.
In the past, I couldn't watch content with this slower style and bland narrative. But I don't know why, I just fell in love with this book. It's dull, but I like it very much, it's very comfortable. I really like the author's articles, I hope you can continue to follow them [Blow kiss]
The writing is great, and the flow is smooth. From the words, you can see the author's love for Penny (I like this very much, the author truly loves the characters he writes, instead of using her as a leather bag)
It's nice to read, the pace is very comfortable, and the growth line can be read. I like Penny in this book. There are two chapters. It's great to have this world where Penny and Calloway can meet. I felt warm in my heart when I read it. I immediately tied it.
I've only read a dozen chapters, but I can't help but comment. How can I put it, this book is mediocre, but I feel that it is not difficult to understand that the psychological changes of the characters are revealed through something that they were unwilling to accept at the beginning, but finally accepted.
For example, it is the epitome of many ordinary people in reality. They draw a boundary for themselves and tell themselves that enough is enough. They long to be seen for their true selves, but are afraid of seeing their true selves. It is a feeling of self-contradiction, but also crazy desire.
The writing style is also very good. Sometimes plainness is the truth. This is my biggest feeling about this book.
This is the first time I've given it, and it's not at all meant to encourage new books. It's all about the writing and plot. Very plain text, but it always resonates directly with the soul. I really feel the loss bit by bit. I really hope that the established ending can be changed. Or life takes on new life.
This article gave me a slow feeling. The pace was not rushed at all, as if the story was letting itself go. I felt so uncomfortable when I first started reading the first dozen chapters of Penny's first life. She was surrounded by daily trivial matters every day. As a wife, mother, and good neighbor, she felt like she had nothing to do at all. But I feel that this may be the case for Penny in the original timeline. Fortunately It's great that I met Calloway, but it feels so pity. I met him too late. I just changed a little with you. I just started to try to do some things I wanted to do, but Calloway died. The author probably finished the first life at this point. Fortunately, there is a second life, otherwise I can't even imagine how uncomfortable it would be.
The second life begins when Lily receives the admission notice to Hogwarts. I think the author made a good choice. In my opinion, this is a very important node in the fate of Petunia's original work. Then Petunia met Calloway at this time. Fortunately, they met very early this time. I feel that the author is writing about Calloway guiding Penny to change little by little. It is not called Calloway's guidance, but Penny is indeed influenced by Calloway. I feel that the author has created the character very well. There is a feeling of being both a teacher and a friend, a guiding role. Under this guidance and influence, Penny is also changing and growing little by little. What I think is very good is that the author attributes the conflicts and estrangement between Petunia and Lily to their parents' favoritism. When reading, it is really obvious that they can feel the favoritism of their parents.
Penny is also constantly trying to get rid of the influence of her parents' favoritism and working hard to be herself. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Penny grows up.
I like the author's writing style very much. This slow writing style is suitable for calming down and reading. It makes people remember the life and voice of an ordinary person outside the magnificent magical world.
This is Penny's fairy tale, and Calloway is her fairy godmother.
Although this book is fan fiction, it does not have a strong Internet feel and is completely different from the popular style on the Internet today. The author's Penny is no longer a villain. The environment in which she lives has shaped her character, her parents' attitudes towards her and Lily, and Lily's talents make Lily more like the "spiritual man" in our family at home. Penny's first life was completely different from her second life, and she met Calloway at different moments in her life. Penny was no longer invisible, she was fine too, but her parents couldn't see her. Do you think the relationship between the two sisters is not good? No! Is good. All this does not lie with them, but with their parents' bias. Calloway guided Penny step by step, letting Penny think for herself. How come this is not a guiding friend? When her parents forgot her birthday, Calloway sent Penny a gift in advance, but her mother blamed Penny for not reminding her the next day, and her father perfunctorily patched up an ordinary scarf for Penny, the kind that could be bought easily. But the parents were particularly concerned about Lily.
If you have had a similar experience, or you are in such pain, you may wish to read this book. You will find the answer in the book. You can also read everyone's comment section in the book. I believe you can get out of the pain similar to Penny and walk out of the world.
Boss, the writing in this book is so different from the previous ones. I've been following you since the first book. Why is it that your writing in this book makes people's eyes wander so much? [Crying]
Petunia, my dear baby, wow, wow, you have met Calloway very early in your life, there must be a happy ending, right? [Crying] Boss, can't you just publish the rest of the article at once? It's so uncomfortable for people reading it. I really want to know what happens next. [Crying] Hurry up and write it down, Boss [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Penny must be fine! I really watched her come along and grow up little by little! Really great! I knew a little bit about her background from the original work, but I didn't feel it and didn't pay much attention to it. After all, the focus was only on Harry. After watching the boss write about her childhood, I really felt sorry for her. It was obviously the same direction as the original work, and it also closely followed the background of Petunia in the original work, but why is it so uncomfortable to watch it now? So after meeting Calloway, I must give her a good future [crying]
I shouldn't have seen this book on Tomato. She and I should have met on a rainy morning when I was covered with a blanket on the recliner, holding the paper version of her in my hand. Rather than saying it is an HP fanfic, it is better to say that the author borrowed the trappings of several characters to write her own story, but this story is appropriate for Penny, and it should be her.
The book says, "The place where you read slowly is where you are really reading." But in fact, there are many books that do not allow you to read slowly. This book has the kind of place where you put the book down unconsciously while reading, looking at a certain place, maybe thinking, maybe in a daze. That time belongs to this book and to me.
Who should read this book? If at some point you feel like you don't know where to go next, whether you are "alive" now, or you feel "why" for a moment, when you want to find the "you" that you don't even know, read this book, and you may be able to find the answer.
When reading, it's not like reading a story, but more like having a conversation with the author. She is Calloway and I am Penny. I think everyone wants to have a friend like Calloway, but maybe one day I can be another Penny's Calloway, I'm looking forward to that.
Sticking to the setting of second-generation fan fiction, this book will not be published in paper. I originally wanted to change the character setting to a fictional character and maybe it could be published in paper, but this may be contrary to the author's original idea. Please forgive me if it offends.
While reading this book, I suddenly had the urge to write a letter, to have a pen pal, and to experience the time spent waiting for a response.
It touches people's hearts. I always cry involuntarily when I read it. It's obviously not thrilling and sadistic, but I feel lonely in every word. Penny has found what she wants to do and enriches herself step by step. I hope you can work hard. I like it very much [Sending Hearts]
It was originally a novel that I clicked on casually. I skimmed through the first few chapters quickly, but the speed of reading later slowed down. I usually don't have the patience to read such daily and delicate novels. I read this novel carefully. The author's words are touching. I like the author's portrayal of Penny and the people who help Penny. I cried several times while reading it. The author's writing has a strong sense of substitution. Maybe I cry easily, but what the author writes makes me feel moved.
This book is written very realistically, it is very everyday. The most important thing for me is the emotional resonance, the calmness or the sourness I don't know where it comes from. I hope that Penny will always be in a good mood, at least she will not have the feeling of being unable to explain to her parents.
I kept crying while reading this book. Finally, someone wrote about my feelings about Penny. I finally understood why I was only impressed by her in the whole book. I'm really happy that someone can write about my anger, the kind of thing that makes me feel vaguely uncomfortable but can't express it.
Penny broke free from the constraints and moved forward unswervingly. We are all ordinary people who will encounter many setbacks in the direction of progress, but luckily she persevered. Other fanfics are all about her being sharp, rude and mean, but here I see her at a loss and fear of being strong, but she will seize the little chance. Penny, you are really good.
A very delicate story, like Penny's other life, very well written! However, the author will repeat one thing several times when writing. When listening to the book, there will be some ink stains, but it is not bad when reading. It feels like Penny herself, I feel like she has been thoroughly researched, I like it!
It's really beautiful. I can't describe it, but I think of another reader's comment I read before. Since we have chosen this book, this protagonist, then we love her. What I deeply feel is another sequence of cause and effect. I feel love for her, because this is the protagonist I chose. I chose her, I chose to give her my gaze, my listening, and my description, and then those accompanying things will naturally flow to her. Penny, anger is powerful, even when it's quiet, the weight isn't light, those things we feel are just that, given weight because you're honest
It's good to watch. Chapters 1 to 16 are part one, and chapter 17 and on are part two. The overall content is gentle and delicate in daily life. I don't recommend reading chapters 62 and 63 if you have low tears. I just cried a lot (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)
So far, it's very comfortable to watch. I feel like Penny is slowly awakening her talents, and she has a sense of stability.
The writing is very good, and the author is very attentive in exploring Penny's heart and her growth. The family's favoritism and indifference are written in a plain but delicate way. It makes people feel as if their hearts are being pinched when they read it, making them angry and crying for Penny [Love]
I always felt that the author saw Penny, saw her completely, wrote about her choking and countless sadness and anger, and treated her as a monarch, a wise man, and a person. When a person is seen, how does she react?
Because this book has set its own goals, although it may not be achieved, I am very happy that I can read this book, and I am also very happy that I can think about what I like. Because of this book, I also bought Waves. After reading it, I may have new opinions. In short, thank you very much for this book. Sometimes I burst into tears while reading it, and sometimes I feel very comfortable while reading it, especially the first volume. Thank you to the author.
The writing is very beautiful, everything goes with the flow, the author is very delicate in shaping the psychological changes, and they are all presented through some details. My favorite is the first and second volumes, which make people feel the growth of Penny and the charm of Calloway. Her changes do not happen overnight, but slowly like ice melting into boiling water. I like it very much.
I really like this book. It gave Penny the right to choose. Penny's psychological transformation is also well written. It's not mechanical. The description is very smooth and it also gave me some inspiration. I like it very much and will keep reading.
Penny is different. I discovered this book at noon. I cried twice. It is well written and the emotions are light, but it is particularly touching.
I really like this kind of article that is not for fast progress but for thinking. Don't worry, the author. You can update slowly. Write when you have the content in your mind. We are waiting for you.
The writing is really good and the writing style is very delicate. It made me see a completely different Penny, a Penny with her own thoughts [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]
The book is well written and its world is not centered around just one type of shining person. It writes about the depression in a peaceful life and about Penny's quiet resistance. Many times we are angry not because of what our parents did, but precisely because of what our parents did not do. Not all are treated equally. The author depicts this emotion. She saw Penny. She saw the waves surging beneath the warmth of Penny's family. She saw Penny's emotions. What she writes is the reaction that a real human being would have, not a routine, and it is not just about emotions.
I cried several times while reading this book. Penny is really a very good child, a very good child. Petunia, please move forward boldly. Woohoo, I'm really looking forward to Penny's growth next.
In the past, I couldn't watch content with this slower style and bland narrative. But I don't know why, I just fell in love with this book. It's dull, but I like it very much, it's very comfortable. I really like the author's articles, I hope you can continue to follow them [Blow kiss]
The writing is great, and the flow is smooth. From the words, you can see the author's love for Penny (I like this very much, the author truly loves the characters he writes, instead of using her as a leather bag)
It's nice to read, the pace is very comfortable, and the growth line can be read. I like Penny in this book. There are two chapters. It's great to have this world where Penny and Calloway can meet. I felt warm in my heart when I read it. I immediately tied it.
I've only read a dozen chapters, but I can't help but comment. How can I put it, this book is mediocre, but I feel that it is not difficult to understand that the psychological changes of the characters are revealed through something that they were unwilling to accept at the beginning, but finally accepted. For example, it is the epitome of many ordinary people in reality. They draw a boundary for themselves and tell themselves that enough is enough. They long to be seen for their true selves, but are afraid of seeing their true selves. It is a feeling of self-contradiction, but also crazy desire. The writing style is also very good. Sometimes plainness is the truth. This is my biggest feeling about this book.
This is the first time I've given it, and it's not at all meant to encourage new books. It's all about the writing and plot. Very plain text, but it always resonates directly with the soul. I really feel the loss bit by bit. I really hope that the established ending can be changed. Or life takes on new life.
This article gave me a slow feeling. The pace was not rushed at all, as if the story was letting itself go. I felt so uncomfortable when I first started reading the first dozen chapters of Penny's first life. She was surrounded by daily trivial matters every day. As a wife, mother, and good neighbor, she felt like she had nothing to do at all. But I feel that this may be the case for Penny in the original timeline. Fortunately It's great that I met Calloway, but it feels so pity. I met him too late. I just changed a little with you. I just started to try to do some things I wanted to do, but Calloway died. The author probably finished the first life at this point. Fortunately, there is a second life, otherwise I can't even imagine how uncomfortable it would be. The second life begins when Lily receives the admission notice to Hogwarts. I think the author made a good choice. In my opinion, this is a very important node in the fate of Petunia's original work. Then Petunia met Calloway at this time. Fortunately, they met very early this time. I feel that the author is writing about Calloway guiding Penny to change little by little. It is not called Calloway's guidance, but Penny is indeed influenced by Calloway. I feel that the author has created the character very well. There is a feeling of being both a teacher and a friend, a guiding role. Under this guidance and influence, Penny is also changing and growing little by little. What I think is very good is that the author attributes the conflicts and estrangement between Petunia and Lily to their parents' favoritism. When reading, it is really obvious that they can feel the favoritism of their parents. Penny is also constantly trying to get rid of the influence of her parents' favoritism and working hard to be herself. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Penny grows up.
I like the author's writing style very much. This slow writing style is suitable for calming down and reading. It makes people remember the life and voice of an ordinary person outside the magnificent magical world. This is Penny's fairy tale, and Calloway is her fairy godmother.
Although this book is fan fiction, it does not have a strong Internet feel and is completely different from the popular style on the Internet today. The author's Penny is no longer a villain. The environment in which she lives has shaped her character, her parents' attitudes towards her and Lily, and Lily's talents make Lily more like the "spiritual man" in our family at home. Penny's first life was completely different from her second life, and she met Calloway at different moments in her life. Penny was no longer invisible, she was fine too, but her parents couldn't see her. Do you think the relationship between the two sisters is not good? No! Is good. All this does not lie with them, but with their parents' bias. Calloway guided Penny step by step, letting Penny think for herself. How come this is not a guiding friend? When her parents forgot her birthday, Calloway sent Penny a gift in advance, but her mother blamed Penny for not reminding her the next day, and her father perfunctorily patched up an ordinary scarf for Penny, the kind that could be bought easily. But the parents were particularly concerned about Lily. If you have had a similar experience, or you are in such pain, you may wish to read this book. You will find the answer in the book. You can also read everyone's comment section in the book. I believe you can get out of the pain similar to Penny and walk out of the world.
Boss, the writing in this book is so different from the previous ones. I've been following you since the first book. Why is it that your writing in this book makes people's eyes wander so much? [Crying] Petunia, my dear baby, wow, wow, you have met Calloway very early in your life, there must be a happy ending, right? [Crying] Boss, can't you just publish the rest of the article at once? It's so uncomfortable for people reading it. I really want to know what happens next. [Crying] Hurry up and write it down, Boss [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Penny must be fine! I really watched her come along and grow up little by little! Really great! I knew a little bit about her background from the original work, but I didn't feel it and didn't pay much attention to it. After all, the focus was only on Harry. After watching the boss write about her childhood, I really felt sorry for her. It was obviously the same direction as the original work, and it also closely followed the background of Petunia in the original work, but why is it so uncomfortable to watch it now? So after meeting Calloway, I must give her a good future [crying]
I shouldn't have seen this book on Tomato. She and I should have met on a rainy morning when I was covered with a blanket on the recliner, holding the paper version of her in my hand. Rather than saying it is an HP fanfic, it is better to say that the author borrowed the trappings of several characters to write her own story, but this story is appropriate for Penny, and it should be her. The book says, "The place where you read slowly is where you are really reading." But in fact, there are many books that do not allow you to read slowly. This book has the kind of place where you put the book down unconsciously while reading, looking at a certain place, maybe thinking, maybe in a daze. That time belongs to this book and to me. Who should read this book? If at some point you feel like you don't know where to go next, whether you are "alive" now, or you feel "why" for a moment, when you want to find the "you" that you don't even know, read this book, and you may be able to find the answer. When reading, it's not like reading a story, but more like having a conversation with the author. She is Calloway and I am Penny. I think everyone wants to have a friend like Calloway, but maybe one day I can be another Penny's Calloway, I'm looking forward to that. Sticking to the setting of second-generation fan fiction, this book will not be published in paper. I originally wanted to change the character setting to a fictional character and maybe it could be published in paper, but this may be contrary to the author's original idea. Please forgive me if it offends. While reading this book, I suddenly had the urge to write a letter, to have a pen pal, and to experience the time spent waiting for a response.
It touches people's hearts. I always cry involuntarily when I read it. It's obviously not thrilling and sadistic, but I feel lonely in every word. Penny has found what she wants to do and enriches herself step by step. I hope you can work hard. I like it very much [Sending Hearts]
It was originally a novel that I clicked on casually. I skimmed through the first few chapters quickly, but the speed of reading later slowed down. I usually don't have the patience to read such daily and delicate novels. I read this novel carefully. The author's words are touching. I like the author's portrayal of Penny and the people who help Penny. I cried several times while reading it. The author's writing has a strong sense of substitution. Maybe I cry easily, but what the author writes makes me feel moved.
This book is written very realistically, it is very everyday. The most important thing for me is the emotional resonance, the calmness or the sourness I don't know where it comes from. I hope that Penny will always be in a good mood, at least she will not have the feeling of being unable to explain to her parents.
I kept crying while reading this book. Finally, someone wrote about my feelings about Penny. I finally understood why I was only impressed by her in the whole book. I'm really happy that someone can write about my anger, the kind of thing that makes me feel vaguely uncomfortable but can't express it.
Penny broke free from the constraints and moved forward unswervingly. We are all ordinary people who will encounter many setbacks in the direction of progress, but luckily she persevered. Other fanfics are all about her being sharp, rude and mean, but here I see her at a loss and fear of being strong, but she will seize the little chance. Penny, you are really good.
A very delicate story, like Penny's other life, very well written! However, the author will repeat one thing several times when writing. When listening to the book, there will be some ink stains, but it is not bad when reading. It feels like Penny herself, I feel like she has been thoroughly researched, I like it!
It's really beautiful. I can't describe it, but I think of another reader's comment I read before. Since we have chosen this book, this protagonist, then we love her. What I deeply feel is another sequence of cause and effect. I feel love for her, because this is the protagonist I chose. I chose her, I chose to give her my gaze, my listening, and my description, and then those accompanying things will naturally flow to her. Penny, anger is powerful, even when it's quiet, the weight isn't light, those things we feel are just that, given weight because you're honest
It's good to watch. Chapters 1 to 16 are part one, and chapter 17 and on are part two. The overall content is gentle and delicate in daily life. I don't recommend reading chapters 62 and 63 if you have low tears. I just cried a lot (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)
So far, it's very comfortable to watch. I feel like Penny is slowly awakening her talents, and she has a sense of stability.
The writing is very good, and the author is very attentive in exploring Penny's heart and her growth. The family's favoritism and indifference are written in a plain but delicate way. It makes people feel as if their hearts are being pinched when they read it, making them angry and crying for Penny [Love]
I always felt that the author saw Penny, saw her completely, wrote about her choking and countless sadness and anger, and treated her as a monarch, a wise man, and a person. When a person is seen, how does she react?
Because this book has set its own goals, although it may not be achieved, I am very happy that I can read this book, and I am also very happy that I can think about what I like. Because of this book, I also bought Waves. After reading it, I may have new opinions. In short, thank you very much for this book. Sometimes I burst into tears while reading it, and sometimes I feel very comfortable while reading it, especially the first volume. Thank you to the author.
The writing is very beautiful, everything goes with the flow, the author is very delicate in shaping the psychological changes, and they are all presented through some details. My favorite is the first and second volumes, which make people feel the growth of Penny and the charm of Calloway. Her changes do not happen overnight, but slowly like ice melting into boiling water. I like it very much.
I really like this book. It gave Penny the right to choose. Penny's psychological transformation is also well written. It's not mechanical. The description is very smooth and it also gave me some inspiration. I like it very much and will keep reading.
Penny is different. I discovered this book at noon. I cried twice. It is well written and the emotions are light, but it is particularly touching.
I really like this kind of article that is not for fast progress but for thinking. Don't worry, the author. You can update slowly. Write when you have the content in your mind. We are waiting for you.
The writing is really good and the writing style is very delicate. It made me see a completely different Penny, a Penny with her own thoughts [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]
It's dull, but I like it