The Queen Asked Me to Guard the Border, and I Incorporated the Demons

If you want to write an epic, that's no problem. Western fantasy epics are meant to be told eloquently, but the writing is indeed too slow, especially the first few chapters, which are particularly procrastinating and have no highlight moments, which makes the book pick on readers. There are too few highlights of romanticism, personal heroism, and a protagonist who will make people excited to watch it. There are too many data and regulations listed, and it will make you very tired after reading it. Then there are the problems that are forgotten after writing about it, such as the old mayor Barton. It was written that he pretended to be ill, and then disappeared completely. There was no follow-up, and this problem appeared more than once. There is also a problem with the size of the map. This is supposed to slow down the pace or introduce supernatural powers, but the protagonist group leads the mortal team to always quickly go from A to B to C overnight. Instead, this place was written in a hurry. Fortunately, the story is very exciting, but it still feels inconsistent. Overall, there is no problem. The story is great. I rarely give people good reviews, but I do hope to see a follow-up to this book, and I hope it gets better as it gets written.

The writing is quite good. If I want to make suggestions, I would think that the volume is too small and the number of people involved is too implicit. If you think about it carefully, you will also think that the smuggling channel is not profitable enough. Unless it is more than one border, looking at it now, even a Western Fantasy is a bit like the story of a small city. In addition, is the protagonist too deified and lacking human integrity? If possible, can we add some emotional expression or emotional lines to the protagonist?

The highlight lies in the detailed description of the protagonist's predicament. The protagonist is not in the territory at the beginning, and there is no brief introduction to the appointment. Instead, through the process, people can feel how complicated the situation the protagonist is about to face. This feeling will become more and more obvious as the chapter progresses. This kind of writing is very suitable to my appetite. It is difficult to get through, but how to get through it? This makes people look forward to the follow-up development, and the current impression is good.

This book is written with great sincerity. One chapter has four thousand, five thousand, six thousand, seven thousand, eight thousand, nine thousand or ten thousand words. I have never seen any other book with ten thousand words in one chapter [laughing and crying] I have seen many books with only 2,000 words per chapter. The table of contents looks like there are hundreds of chapters, but it is short of the mark. This book doesn't do that. The plot is okay, right? There have been a lot of accounting posts on Tomato recently. I don't know why. It seems like a batch of them suddenly appeared. I've never seen them before.

It's a good read. This is the first time I've read so much about "accounting and announcements" in the book. It's so interesting that the clerical staff's pens are smoking. It's just that I can't think of how the protagonist will expand his power in the future. The future of Blackstone Town is long and difficult.

Yes, the lack of a system is not necessarily a failure. Compared with other novels, the sense of realism is more outstanding. The narrative of the article is more logical. I will give it five stars. This book should be rated 8.5 To 9. There are some details, but they can barely be ignored. For example, the mercenary Lake suddenly became a guard in a previous chapter.

I'm going to give it four stars instead of blindly five stars because I haven't read much. I read it after reading almost 1,000,000 words, but it's only 100 chapters. Then when I looked at the table of contents, one chapter of Goodfellas has 6000-8000 words, which is tens of thousands more. It's rare to see such a compact book. I left a review for the first time. I hope you won't disappoint me. Come on, author.

There were many places at the beginning that I wanted to use a golden finger to defeat. Now it seems that using your brain to solve problems is really awesome. In fact, the golden finger that the author really gave to the protagonist is unlimited pen, ink and paper [laughter]

The logic is reasonable and progressive. It is a relatively good novel! ! !

Just like a running account

Too calm, limited experience, always feeling something is wrong, but nothing seems wrong

I have read more than a thousand pages, the plot logic is very good, the villain is not brainless, and you can follow it [salute]

It always feels like AI Several laborers. An old hunter. There are no knights. There is no escort. There is no clerkship. There were no officers accompanying him. A strange color flashed across Barton's eyes very quickly. Contempt. Rest assured. There is also a little subtle calculation. Lynn saw it. Very good. It's a good thing that Barton looked down upon him. Where have you seen this format before?

It's a good book, but I can find a chance to describe the world view. I probably know that there are rifts in the demon clan, but I'm a little confused. If I were the villain, there are so many rogues and unarmed soldiers anyway. As long as I send troops to wipe out all Blackstone Town, then put the responsibility on the rogues, and then claim that I have wiped out all the rogues, so what if the Queen knows the truth? The Queen has no rights now anyway.

Overall it's not bad, but how much paper is there in Blackstone Town?

It is undeniable that this is a good book, but why I gave it four stars is mainly because I think the author's writing is a little more idealistic.

It looks comfortable and does not poke.

OK, you can watch it. Come on, come on.

Just started watching it, I feel good

It's very beautiful, I really appreciate it.

Not bad! You can take a look

It looks good, no need to say more

It looks pretty good so far

Very interesting farming article

I still can't see anything, 4 stars just for word count

Is this book a low-magic world view? After reading seven or eight chapters, it's all literary drama.

Still good

It's okay. The main character still has some brains. I hope I can continue writing😘

The story is quite good, and the author's ideas are also very good, but the plot is too slow. I have read Chapter 15, so I will give it 9 points.

That's not right. I asked why I had been reading for so long. I flipped through the catalog and realized, OMG, one chapter has 10,000 words [crying]